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| Review My Short Poem by lindalee(f): 6:13pm On Oct 31, 2008 |
Though so powerful Yet unseen Great heights through it achieved Great fall through it received Its creative,effective and productive Yet deceptive,destructive and manipulative The mind s the epitome of who you are WATCH IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| Re: Review My Short Poem by odzgem: 9:22pm On Nov 10, 2008 |
The essence of poetry,i think, is to convey beautiful thoughts to the reader but in creating beauty with words we must also pass a message across. Your poem conveys beauty. YOU can review mine below: WE ARE BRETHREN BY FATE LEFT TO US,OUR LUSTFUL TASTE WE RATHER WANDER SEPARATE WAYS BE LOST IN THE WILDERNESS OF DAYS |
| Re: Review My Short Poem by odzgem: 9:39pm On Nov 10, 2008 |
@linda Your poem is simple yet deep, like the words of an elder, it provokes thought. |
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