Please I would need you honest and kind opinions about this cover letter, if you think there should be adjustments, kindly and politely state where necessary. Thanks.


APPLICATION FOR ASSISTANT MANAGER POSITION IN YOUR ESTABLISHMENT

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my interest in the Assistant Manager position in your esteemed establishment. I feel that my managerial skills coupled with my marketing experience would make me the perfect candidate for your esteemed establishment.

I have experience in marketing and have come up with unique marketing ideas from former clients relationship experience. Marketing forecasts as well as business analysis are my strong points and I work very hard to stay on top of trends in the markets and to know what is viable at any time.

The organizational skills I have would be perfect for the fast paced company that needs an assistant manager with the ability to multitask and take on multiple clients at one time.

It is my opinion that teamwork is the only way that a marketing strategy can come together. For this reason, I know that my skills would be an asset to your organization.

If you would like to speak further about my career history or track record, please contact me at Bleep@gmail.com and 081******* to schedule a time that best suits your schedule.

Thanks so much for reviewing my cover letter and resume.

Sincerely,

Nairalander.

Ok 54views no comment, I'll assume its perfect then, anyway, for those looking for a sample cover letter can make a loop from this, ensure to tailor it down to your qualifications, skill and job position being applied for, ciao!

Nice cover letter, though it isn't perfect. ..my opinion.

The second to the last paragraph of 'if you would like to speak about my career history et al' is not necessary. In fact, I believe all those contact details would be in your CV which should be attached as a file to your cover letter.

Also, the last paragraph of 'Thanks so much for reviewing my cover letter and resume' sounds a bit desperate, like you're begging for mercy instead of proving your merit. It could be simply written as 'Thank you. Please, find the attached (CV)'.

sholay2011:
Nice cover letter, though it isn't perfect. ..my opinion.

The second to the last paragraph of 'if you would like to speak about my career history et al' is not necessary. In fact, I believe all those contact details would be in your CV which should be attached as a file to your cover letter.

Also, the last paragraph of 'Thanks so much for reviewing my cover letter and resume' sounds a bit desperate, like you're begging for mercy instead of proving your merit. It could be simply written as 'Thank you. Please, find the attached (CV)'.

Thanks Much appreciated

By Alison Doyle, Job Searching Expert

This cover letter takes the position requirements and matches the applicant's skills to those requirements. This way, the resume reviewer can see the candidate's relevant qualifications at a glance.

Sample Targeted Cover Letter

Your Name
Your Address
Your City, State, Zip Code
Your Phone Number
Your Email

Date

Name
Title
Organization
Address
City, State, Zip Code

Dear Mr./Ms. Last Name:
I am interested in the Coordinator position advertised on XYZ. My resume is enclosed for your review. Given my related experience and excellent capabilities I would appreciate your consideration for this job opening. My skills are an ideal match for this position.
Your Requirements:
Responsible for evening operations in Student Center and other facilities, including managing registration, solving customer problems, dealing with risk management and emergencies, enforcement of department policies.
Assists with hiring, training, and management of staff. Coordinate statistics and inventory.
Experience in the supervision of student staff and strong interpersonal skills are also preferred.
Valid Minnesota driver's license with good driving record. Ability to travel to different sites required.
Experience in collegiate programming and management.
My Qualifications:
Register students for courses, design and manage program software, solve customer problems, enforce department policies, and serve as a contact for students, faculty, and staff.
Hiring, training, scheduling and management of staff, managing supply inventory, and ordering.
Minnesota driver's license with NTSA defensive driving certification.
Extensive experience in collegiate programming and management.
Excellent interpersonal and communication skills.
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I appreciate your taking the time to review my credentials and experience. Again, thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely,
Your Signature (for hard copy letter)
Your Typed Name

elsevier:
By Alison Doyle, Job Searching Expert

This cover letter takes the position requirements and matches the applicant's skills to those requirements. This way, the resume reviewer can see the candidate's relevant qualifications at a glance.

Sample Targeted Cover Letter

Your Name
Your Address
Your City, State, Zip Code
Your Phone Number
Your Email

Date

Name
Title
Organization
Address
City, State, Zip Code

Dear Mr./Ms. Last Name:
I am interested in the Coordinator position advertised on XYZ. My resume is enclosed for your review. Given my related experience and excellent capabilities I would appreciate your consideration for this job opening. My skills are an ideal match for this position.
Your Requirements:
Responsible for evening operations in Student Center and other facilities, including managing registration, solving customer problems, dealing with risk management and emergencies, enforcement of department policies.
Assists with hiring, training, and management of staff. Coordinate statistics and inventory.
Experience in the supervision of student staff and strong interpersonal skills are also preferred.
Valid Minnesota driver's license with good driving record. Ability to travel to different sites required.
Experience in collegiate programming and management.
My Qualifications:
Register students for courses, design and manage program software, solve customer problems, enforce department policies, and serve as a contact for students, faculty, and staff.
Hiring, training, scheduling and management of staff, managing supply inventory, and ordering.
Minnesota driver's license with NTSA defensive driving certification.
Extensive experience in collegiate programming and management.
Excellent interpersonal and communication skills.
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I appreciate your taking the time to review my credentials and experience. Again, thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely,
Your Signature (for hard copy letter)
Your Typed Name

Good, I hope this can be employed in our community... Like coys around here would welcome this.

Its nice if u state d name of firms u got experience n possibly your job roles

Pweezy:
Its nice if u state d name of firms u got experience n possibly your job roles

This should be in the CV, not cover letter. ..I think.

sholay2011:

This should be in the CV, not cover letter. ..I think.

I knw...maybe atleast one achievement to support ur experience n skills

Pweezy:

I knw...maybe atleast one achievement to support ur experience n skills

Okay.