CAPTAINFLASH VS RICHOMMIE


Voting Criteria :

Opener - 1 point

Rhymes - 2 points

Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points

Punchlines - 3 points

Personals - 2 points

Flow - 1 point

Wordplays - 2 points

Closer - 1 point

Rules

- 20 lines.

- Deadline is 4pm, Monday 13, October
2014.

- Verses should be posted by both battlers on
or not later than deadline date.

- No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or
recycling.

- No complaining about votes.

- A no show attracts a ban.

- No unnecessary comments

- No smearing comments about any bar OR
biting accusations without proof.

- Whatever you feel is wrong with a bar or
verse - please put it in your vote. Vote and
state what you found wrong.

- If there's anything you need to say in
defence of your verse please save them for
after voting's over.

- NO argument with established vets OR
voters.

- Battlers should not interject between votes
and voters should just vote and leave it like
that.

- Only vets and regular section posters are
allowed to vote.

Goodluck!!!

;Dcheck

check richhomie n0te the date. .we'r dropping next week monday by 4pm. .

captainflash:
check richhomie n0te the date. .we'r dropping next week monday by 4pm. .

i'l posting 2day. .homie hope ur lines are ready?.. .dnt want our thread to sink biko. .

captainflash:
i'l posting 2day. .homie hope ur lines are ready?.. .dnt want our thread to sink biko. .

sure imma post 2day also....

richommie:
sure imma post 2day also....

ok. .i'l be waiting 4 ur drop then

. . .
no need to breakdown tinz!

Freestyle!!!

Leqqo!


This gay is wack. .all he spits re many trashes/ he loosing plenty matches/ so imma be whippin im eleven lashes/
cos we alwas see im gettin ''fired by God'' leavin flash wit heavenly ashes!!!/

My lyrics re trending classic/. . But nobody wows in wot dis dummy's doing/
im gets stone and murck when d chummy's moving/ . . .so he better quit rap and stay off from ''real men'' he's a cartoon . . Meant to be on set acting comic movie!!!/

am the danger zone. .so am comin wit red in action/. .if he claims he's rich and wealthy. .imma place nerd on sanction/ we off wit black guns/
. . . .cos if he calls police. .we iii steal his money den get the man shunn!!!/


I will not pity the small boy/ he's a hookah. .like tyga's track ft young thug/ to me? He's roughly used like a home toy/
. . .cos Heaven know's his 'barely mention' the only time we seek for flash is wen our phone spoil!!!/

I scatter rocks wit bare hands cos am strongly brave/ while d dummy shake/ the most annoyin part of the funky gay/ is, u alwas see im talkin rave/
. . . .claimin to have the best 'hair-style' but wen we checkd. .wetin we see na 'ancestral old lines' wey full hin head like person wey dey use expired sporting wave!!!/


I iii bite im if he ever cross niccurs lane/ . . .den slice his leg wit razor and scissors blade/ he get murck by kid wit amoeba incisor's shape/
. . .And the dude never kissed a lady. .the last girl he wishd for '5yrs' left the ''gee hover'' and later rebuked im wit jesus name!/

He will be totally confused/ moment i come wit fists of great khali and tom bruce/. . . .like a giant. .u prolly see im in heavy custom/
. .he's goliath,i am jet lee. .so the giant rant and boast wit spear and armour. .while imma be fast-kickin im outta here wit chinese kung fu!!!/

i shall start ma 'win wit u'. .like dat shan george trophy/ ur poo is a disaster. .its a catastrophe/ . . Notin this gay rap is meaningful. .the way he flows wit pidgin shows he's actually warriblood's carbon copy!!!/


The bastard is a gay. .dat wears bum short/. .alwas peepin for dicks. .to suck at the next bro's door/. . .the last time we caught im. . we beat im. .till got alot of ''injuries and damages from niggers' like cataclysm of the first world war!!!/

Lastly Sarimah knws am ricchy dome and bad guy/ honestly u re not my match. .so i easily give u blows and hard jabs/
. . .cos the real fact iss....

U re meant for automobiles and pc computers. .i mean u re not meant to rap. . . U just a c.d rom and flash drive!!!/

.

NILL!

You both posted today? Lol!


open for votes...

Tag:

Coogar
Guykhena
Limerick
Ibime
Yeyenatu
Giyazz
Elvisonjack2
gottoboy
Warriblood
Jigsawkiller
Wrongturn
Ckushy
emaprince
ojoawo
thunderstorm
Testerfuze
mikuz
geoxpress
Heywhizzy
illness
captainflash
YoungDaNaval
kr0ne
gottoboy
Sosiqdude

Opener-»tie

Closer-»hommie

Punchlines-»hommie

Metaphors-»tie(due to flash's likes)

Rhymes-»hommie

Wordplay-»hommie(Manshion. .jehovah. .nd others)

Consistency-»tie

Mvgt-»hommie(this guy is d.ope)

opener.....richhie

rhymes...no doubt...richhie got dis for me.

Punchline...richhie

metaphor...flash

w/p and nameplay....the gee hover..line was cool ..richie.

Flow.....richhie

Closer..richhie

mvgt...richhie...

Flash stand up to d game...i expected u to whoop dis guy..cos he's jst new here.

Wot happend?

Elvis..jay

Vgt- Hommie

am sorry but i have to say this................if this is all captainflash has to offer then he shud never be tagged to vote in a battle. am so highly disappointed! how can someone who doesn't even know what a punchline means be allowed to judge a brawl .........i thought his first battle was a mistake but this one is an eye opener. is this how u beat ppl on 2go?

captainflash:

i've been watching you bringing steady bars//
full of plenty craps//
and you still call that small hefty rap?//shut up. .cus if you dnt, i'll stain my hands in your fiflty trash//
and give you a dirty slap//
.

that's the only bar that makes a little sense in the whole verse and it's the only reason ur gettin a tie from me in the opener.............the rest don't agree with each other .dude, u need to work real hard

fuckyouhard:
am sorry but i have to say this................if this is all captainflash has to offer then he shud never be tagged to vote in a battle. am so highly disappointed! how can someone who doesn't even know what a punchline means be allowed to judge a brawl .........i thought his first battle was a mistake but this one is an eye opener. is this how u beat ppl on 2go?

that's the only bar that makes a little sense in the whole verse and it's the only reason ur gettin a tie from me in the opener.............the rest don't agree with each other .dude, u need to work real hard

Lmao guy easy flash na my gee.......

f.u.hard you'r m@d for teling me that.. ..dnt ever tag my nick again

after I read hommie's verse,I was like there is no way he can win this,then I read flash verse,all I saw was holy wackiness at its peak..mvgt hommie on most criteria and tie in a few like opener and metaphors ..to be frank, no hating

Flash, u tried but stop using threats. Try nameplay/wordplay and use one particular rhyme in a particular bar
I don't see any direct shots from Richie either; his verse can be used against somebody else. Watch Elymax vs Geo brawl or the recent Limerick vs Jigsaw. .that's how a battle verse is supposed to be. Ur dissing Flash, not 'this dude' or 'this biitch', use a play on 'flash' at least
Weak brawl IMO
Mvgt - Richommie

Krone word////////// FLASH u hear soooo

Bars:
Krone word////////// FLASH u hear soooo

Lol.

Richmonie easy win

kr0ne:
Flash, u tried but stop using threats. Try nameplay/wordplay and use one particular rhyme in a particular bar
I don't see any direct shots from Richie either; his verse can be used against somebody else. Watch Elymax vs Geo brawl or the recent Limerick vs Jigsaw. .that's how a battle verse is supposed to be. Ur dissing Flash, not 'this dude' or 'this biitch', use a play on 'flash' at least
Weak brawl IMO
Mvgt - Richommie

I grab tnk sire

Heywhizzy:
after I read hommie's verse,I was like there is no way he can win this,then I read flash verse,all I saw was holy wackiness at its peak..mvgt hommie on most criteria and tie in a few like opener and metaphors ..to be frank, no hating

c/o u sire

BATTLE CLOSED!!!

Richommie wins this! Congratulations son.

richommie:
c/o u sire

accepted

whats the match about When captainJack keeps recycling bars

even wacklad like me fit whoop this flash self

SuperSauce:
even wacklad like me fit whoop this flash self

dream big

captainflash:
dream big

ehen!...ya dealing with dark rahl himself,lemme practice with like 20bars before i c'o you

captainflash:
dream big

Eh ehm! C.o you

Gladyys:

Eh ehm! C.o you

flash accept glad own first..make she whoop you before i do am...

Vgt- Hommie

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