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Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by stuff46(m): 12:27pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
Nice updates my guy handie and to that mention (whizpeter) me ma de look for am tho. Sha all the same we welcome him back |
Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by Whizpeter(m): 6:42pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
handie:Nice one and thanks for the dedication |
Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by Whizpeter(m): 6:42pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
handie:Lol... Na long story, Thanks, I missed you guys too |
Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by Whizpeter(m): 6:48pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
stuff46:Thank you |
Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by Hameenat94(f): 6:59pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
Nyc update. Really missed u guys. Handie nids spanking or death do u guys think? He jst kept us here since November. |
Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by handie(m): 7:39pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
Hameenat94:spanking ko spanking ni? onemansquad, fatalveli and bluestarry are solidly behind me. Make i see person wey go get two heads near me say him wan spank me |
Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by Fatalveli(m): 9:47am On Jan 25, 2015 |
handie:abeg ooo, u no say 'mention' don turn whizard peter now, me no get the balls ooo. But I'm very sure of Onemansquad |
Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by Whizpeter(m): 10:25pm On Jan 25, 2015 |
Fatalveli:Lol... Weyrey |
Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by handie(m): 7:15am On Jan 26, 2015 |
17 AWOSIKA CONTD:Nnamdi was still confused about how all of this was still possible, the task they asked of him, he had completed and why was he still here. He had a few ideas of how to break out and re-gain his freedom but he just couldn’t, they had his wife and kids under strict surveillance. He heard the door opening from the other side, 3 guys walked into the room, 2 of them pointing a handgun at him, the last guy stood in the middle, with a cloth and a rope. He said, “We have your next assignment and it involves you travelling.” He moved a step forward towards Nnamdi. “I don’t know if this is your last assignment but before we proceed, I will like to say, please don’t try anything funny. We have your family under constant surveillance; we check in every 15 minutes, if they don’t hear from us, your family gets it. So, please for the sake of your family, no James Bond shit, okay? ” he said. “So, please stand up against the wall” he continued. Nnamdi obeyed like a soldier would do to a superior officer, they put the hood over his face and handcuffed his hands. They dragged him outside, unzipped his trousers and told him “Pee now, it’s gonna be a long journey.” He was hurled into a military type vehicle used for conveying criminals, reinforced vehicle, a super black maria. His captors were all dressed as soldiers. They began their journey to Maiduguri! The President and the Minister of Defence were in a closed door meeting, deciding on the next step of action with all the terror attacks. “We need to lock down all these states where the terror acts are rampant, that’s the only way we can be sure of clamping down on all of this, a complete lockdown, curfew everywhere.” The minister said. “While I agree with your point, I think shutting down 7 states is a bit excessive, we can’t tell people we’re a booming economy with high returns on investments if some part of the country is completely shut down.” The President argued. “Shutting them down is our best option right now, we need to stop the bombs from going off completely, sir” the Minister said. “We need the bombs to stop going off but not at the detriments of Nigerians and their lives, isn’t there a more discreet way of doing this?” The President asked. “Mr. President, we’re doing this discreetly, that’s why we’re doing just 7 states, to fully cut off this cancer, we need to lock down about 12 states, sir…even Lagos” The Minister argued. “I will never give the approval for that to happen, you can’t lock down the economic capital of Nigeria because of terror, we would rather flood the streets with casually dressed security special forces” The President reacted. “We don’t have the manpower for that, sir” The minister responded. “Please, send the relevant documents to back this up to my office, so I can sign it and we can move on.” The President said. ”I want us to try something different but we will have further discussions when I’m done with my next meeting” The President continued. “Yes sir”. The Minister said. The intercom buzzed, the president picked up and said “Send him in”. “That will be all, Mr. Minister” The President said discharging him. As the minister was about leaving, he saw Babakura walking along slowly, they exchanged pleasantries but he was very skeptical with what business the President had with Babakura, people in the military know of his mis-adventure, could it be that no one has told the president about this. The Minister asked himself one thousand and one questions as he took his exit from Aso Rock. Babakura’s countenance after seeing his old friend, the new defence minister moved from pleasant to vengeance, the same people who sold him out years earlier and lied that it was the foreigners. As soon as his hands grabbed the door knob, his appearance changed from vengeance to borrowed happiness. “Good Evening, Mr. President” Babakura said The President stood up from the chair, stretched forth his hand for a firm handshake with Babakura. The President moved to the lounge couch in his office, Babakura took his seat opposite the president with the gold trimmed coffee table in between them. “We will overcome this terrible period, Mr. President.” Babakura said. “It’s moments like this that carves your name into the fabric of our nation, you’re already one of our nations heroes” Babakura kissing the president’s proverbial ass. “Thank you, Baba. The victory is for all Nigerians everywhere.” The President said. “So, what’s the update on the dialogue with these people”. The President asked. “We’re making progress, Mr. President. I have been able to locate some of their leaders and their requests are really absurd, sir.” Babakura said with the countenance revealing sadness. “What are their conditions, Baba” The President inquired. “it’s not something we can do, we’re literally giving them more ammunitions to fight us.” Baba hinted. “I’m losing patience with you, Babakura. Tell me what they want.” The President seemed unpleased with Babakura’s dilly dallying. “They want us to release Hassan Bakko immediately before proceeding with the rest of their demands” Babakura said “The rest of their demands?” The President said “There is no way we can release Hassan, no one would support that. He made an attempt on my life openly” The President continued. “This is why I didn’t want to say it, it’s quite impossible” Babakura said “He should have been executed, he’s on death row. That’s like giving him a loaded gun and standing in front of him” The President said. ”We can think of something else, the attack in Lagos was very cruel. That can’t be our only option, Mr. President” Babakura said. “Hassan is a very dangerous man, his release will spell doom for this administration, we don’t even know what he has against us that drives him to this cliff of insanity.” The President asked “No one knows, sir. It’s quite the transformation, he was never radical, he was a very good young man” Babakura said “You were his superior officer; you should be able to offer us some insight into this madness?” The President asked. “Mr. President, that was a long time ago, I wish I could read his criminally insane mind but I can’t” Babakura said “I will consult with my advisers and see what we can do but they will not like this” The President said. “No one will like this, but as a messenger, I must deliver the message. We also need to hurry, sir. Who else knows what they have planned” Babakura said. “Thank you, Babakura, your country owes you a debt of gratitude, maybe an MFR when all this is over.” Mr. President said “That is too kind of you, Mr. President, my regards to madam and the kids” Babakura said as he took his leave. Hassan, my boy! Don’t worry, you’re coming home soon, very very soon, we will lead this country into the promised Land. He said to himself as he walked through the properly lit walkway. His phone beeped, a message, It read ”At Maiduguri, Phase 3 is about to kick off”. He replied ”Please proceed”; he put the phone back into his babariga |
Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by stuff46(m): 9:58am On Jan 26, 2015 |
they pretend like they care, rendering harm and destroying innocent lifes and properties of the people. (smh) i pray that fool is caught before he unleashes more harm, God. Handie ma guy, keep up wìth the good work 2 Likes |
Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by kingphilip(m): 11:16am On Jan 26, 2015 |
stuff u really know the deal sometimes it's the people nearest to d seat of power that are selling the country out and most times they are so trusted that it can't be traced down to them God willing Nigeria will get out of this handie great one keep them coming |
Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by Nobody: 4:07pm On Jan 26, 2015 |
I was away......but nobody cares to ask of deadly Marioking ba? Contuniu...God will see us! Stuff46 you got the point right. Its a shame we are at the mercy of the same evil perpetrators in Naija...SMH |
Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by handie(m): 7:46pm On Jan 26, 2015 |
marioking: Marioking the great! I take the blame. My apologies. It won't happen again |
Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by handie(m): 7:50pm On Jan 26, 2015 |
stuff46:Thanks stuff. It might take a while but the truth must prevail. |
Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by Hameenat94(f): 7:56pm On Jan 26, 2015 |
handie:Do that rubbish again nd c d power of followers |
Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by handie(m): 9:34pm On Jan 26, 2015 |
Hameenat94:sister calm down. Na una get power. Nobody dey drag am...... But i still get loyal men for una camp. onemansquad, fatalveli, whizpeter, stuff46 and the great marioking dey dia for me gidigba |
Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by Nobody: 6:27am On Jan 27, 2015 |
handie: No Wahala my boss. How waz the exam. And if I'm right....Hapi new Year |
Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by handie(m): 7:12am On Jan 27, 2015 |
marioking:happy new year bro. Exams went well 1 Like |
Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by Fatalveli(m): 7:37am On Jan 27, 2015 |
[b]Good Morning Nairalanders, I've got a real discussion with you guys and I want your cooperation, you all know that many writers in this literature section are really vexed with us right now simply because we are selfish. Plagiarism rate on NL is becoming alarming and we can't do nothing about it, writers are sacrificing there work being plagiarised and their precious time to satisfy us and we are not paying them for it, but princesa has taking that upon herself and all we just have to do is Vote. Let's show this people love, maybe writers like myself and Tiffany would give it a second thought about not posting our work in here anymore. I know we can all do it, we are not selfish and we will show this writers that we love them more than they can ever imagine. If you haven't go voted for the best writer of the month and the best newcomer in the awards thread. Just go over there and type, I vote tiffany- best writer and I vote Kinwayne for the best newcomer, these are the writers of my choice and you are all free to vote for the writer of your choice. Note: We cannot reward this people for the entertainment their giving us but we can very much award them and that what we are gonna do. Thanks ya'll in anticipation, your vote counts [/b] www.nairaland.com/1804027/free-n5000-writer-here-every/42#29685014. |
Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by Whizpeter(m): 9:23am On Jan 27, 2015 |
handie:I remain Loyal to ya government sir |
Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by stuff46(m): 12:47pm On Jan 29, 2015 |
Dyoungstar: |
Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by MightyFortress: 6:36am On Feb 07, 2015 |
Cool. |
Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by handie(m): 7:41am On Mar 18, 2015 |
17 Awosika CONTD: Shout out to stuff46, marioking, whizpeter, onemansquad, bluestarry, tescoleps, Hameenat94, labaski, mariamfeanmi and every other reader of this story. Una dey my mind 24/7. Nnamdi was bundled out of the vehicle, rushed into a room with everything neatly arranged, with weapons and instructions. His mission here was simple, use the sniper rifle to assassinate the Borno state Governor, one of Babakura’s boys that snitched on him, he thought they would kill him but he thought wrong. The rally was in full swing, the state chairman of the party was on the stage, dancing and gesticulating, singing high praises of the governor even before he came on stage, this was the kick off of his second term bid as the governor of the state, Borno state has been in serious turmoil but with pressure mounting on him from different angles, he was sure the emergency rule won’t be executed to the full extent, he would still maintain his seat as the governor of the state. The city square was filled to the brim with sea of heads waving the party flag, also bomb squad vehicles littered all over the venue, JTF and DSS officers armed to the teeth parading the scene looking for what is to be the slightest manifestation of terror. The anti- terror agents roamed freely within the crowd with vigour especially when the dj played dorobucci, the crowd went ecstatic as the chairman of the party on the stage dug to the floor to do justice to the music been played. Nnamdi was on top of a hill, laying on the ground surrounded by leaves with his sniper gun, looking through the rifle scope, adjusting to see better and further, he could see the stage visibly now, he almost chuckled as he saw the state party chairman dancing on the stage. He surveyed around more and saw the loads of security operatives, some driving around in sport bikes, armored vehicles, also horses. The task is herculean, the issue won’t be carrying out the assignment, the issue will be escaping from the scene unarmed, Nnamdi knew he wasn’t meant to escape this, no extraction plan was discussed with him prior to him been dropped here, no one was coming to get him. Nnamdi was giving this whole thing a lot of thought but then he remembered they had his family under surveillance, it will be wise to just do as they ask. He didn’t mind dying if it meant his family will be safe. His thought was brought back to the present time when he saw a familiar face behind the governor walking closely with him, with full special forces gear, he wasn’t wearing facial gear like the rest behind him. The person looked round, surveying the mountain surrounding the venue. The mission just became impossible, What is Seye doing here? He should be in Lagos or Abuja, what is he doing in Maiduguri, Nnamdi began to rethink his strategies of execution, crossing all his t’s and dotting all the i’s. This could entirely mar all of this plans here and the punishment for failure outweighs everything now. The governor climbed the podium, the crowd cheer increased as he danced on stage like he had won the re-election already, he was been hailed by his people, the love and attention he was getting was huge. Seye was standing at the back of the stage flanked by 3 guys left and right, and with another set of guys 10 feet away from the crowd. As the governor read his speech to the cheering crowd, Seye had an uneasy feeling about all of this, staring ahead into the mountains facing the stage. He grabbed his walkie-talkie by his side and mumbled somethings into it, and put it back by his side. Nnamdi could see 2 security operatives get on their bike and head towards the mountain. Its now or never, Nnamdi told himself, with his hand on the trigger, he calculated the wind speed and his angle, as the governor got to the high point of his address, raising his hand to wave to the crowd, Nnamdi squeezed the triggered hard, the bullet pierced the forehead of the governor, he went downward as he stood, in slow motion. The other security operatives swooped in on the podium, trying to protect other high value targets at the event, the crowd went into frenzy screaming and running in different directions, the stampede began. Seye called the rest of the security operatives to his side and pointed to the mountains, 4 more guys got on their bikes and headed towards him. He looked at the time, they would get to him in another 8 times due to the rocky terrain. In the meantime, the two that were sent few minutes ago will be here anytime soon. He got up from where he laid on his belly, hid behind a tree, the bike riders began speeding up to the mountain as they heard the update that there is a shooter on the mountain, Nnamdi squatted behind the tree, with the butt of the gun in between his thighs. When he sensed they were very close to him, he got up and with the strength he could muster, hit the first rider in the nose with the butt of the gun in one swift motion, shot the second rider in the head, looking closely at which one was more of his physique, the passed out operative was more of his height, he quickly changed into his outfit and dragged their bodies into a ditch and covered it with dirt, he pushed one of the bike off the other side of mountain into a what seems to be a huge ditch. He wiped the face mask to wipe off blood stain and put it on and sped down the mountain on a bike, he saw them coming and started firing shots up the mountain, they got to him, he pointed up the mountain to them, they fired their engines and race up the mountain. Nnamdi rode the bike down the mountain,the rest of the agents helping the injured, Seye stood there co-ordinating the surrounding, waiting on the ambulance to take the governor to the hospital. As he continued the conversations on the phone, a particular bike caught his attention, as he was leaving the area without his permission, he put the phone on hold and screamed stop to the agent but the agent didn’t stop, he noticed blood stain on him. He jumped on his bike and sped off after him with the other agents wondering what the hell was happening. Nnamdi paid no attention to Seye’s warning, Seye brought out his gun and shot at Nnamdi’s tyre derailing him and sent him tumbling a couple of times. It looked really bad, Seye parked his bike and walked up to the body spread on the ground, he tried to sneak a peek at the guy under the mask, as he was about to remove the face mask. Nnamdi sent a right hook into Seye’s neck, jumping up on his feet, left leg injured, blood stained. Seye got up and threw a punch to Nnamdi face which he blocked, and then punched in the rib then sent another punch to his face, all Nnamdi’s punches landed at the place he intended them to. Seye down and groaning, rubbing his face, as Nnamdi moved closer to him, Seye rolled around, and held his injured leg, and moved to his back, holding him a choke hold, Seye’s muscles expanded as he struggled him to hold him down. Nnamdi struggling to get out of Seye’s hold, rubbed him hands all around the floor, around Seye’s back, he found his handgun and pointed it against Seye’s temple, Seye removed his hands from his neck, but as he let go, he grabbed the mask off Nnamdi’s face to reveal his greatest surprise. Nnamdi pointed the gun at Seye as he picked up Seye’s bike and rode off. 1 Like |
Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by stuff46(m): 11:44am On Mar 18, 2015 |
Seye should have just left the biker slide, now that he has known who was behind the max; would he charge him? The law must take its cause on whoever does not abide to it. Nice update after a break 1 Like |
Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by Nobody: 7:44am On Oct 19, 2015 |
NA SO E TAKE END? YOU TRY!!! |
Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by MerryMe1(f): 5:59pm On Dec 06, 2015 |
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Re: 17 Awosika-a Crime/action Thriller by iphie17: 3:58am On Apr 25, 2016 |
handie I dey great, hv bn MIA for long....buh is dx d end of d story |
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