.

softsparkyy:

Hahahahahhahaha just sit on the fence datz all. I am supporting both of them.

My dear na fence I dey o

Ochon you stretch Lines alot which is NT really a gud thing and then ur rhymes are also what you should pay Proper attentions to....do this and lets begin 4rm there
Meanwhile mvgt:olubukato

softsparkyy:

Don't worry I believe you will bounce back with time.

Don't worry mami, imma make you proud.

Testerfuze:
Ochon you stretch Lines alot which is NT really a gud thing and then ur rhymes are also what you should pay Proper attentions to....do this and lets begin 4rm there
Meanwhile mvgt:olubukato

Thanks a lot bro.. I'll make proper corrections if I'm to battle again. I appreciate.

Ochon

Your bars ain't REALLY THAT NICE/ coz I've seen SIMILAR LINES/ from whack rappers with SIMILAR MINDS/
I'm SPILLING YA SPINES/ cuz you'd have to spit with throat cancer for ya shiit to sound ILLER THAN MINE!

^ ^ ^ That was a bar made of 5 lines with 4-syllabic rhyme scheme (the ones in caps). Always note that ur punch must come last, while the rest are referred to as build-ups. Unless wanna make it complex like Coogar and the rest. . so u can start with a punch and u MUST end it with a punch.
See what I mean by 4 syllables. .taking the last line: ill-er-than-mine.

kr0ne:
Ochon

Your bars ain't REALLY THAT NICE/ coz I've seen SIMILAR LINES/ from whack rappers with SIMILAR MINDS/
I'm SPILLING YA SPINES/ cuz you'd have to spit with throat cancer for ya shiit to sound ILLER THAN MINE!

^ ^ ^ That was a bar made of 5 lines with 4-syllabic rhyme scheme (the ones in caps). Always note that ur punch must come last, while the rest are referred to as build-ups. Unless wanna make it complex like Coogar and the rest. . so u can start with a punch and u MUST end it with a punch.
See what I mean by 4 syllables. .taking the last line: ill-er-than-mine.

i would avoid the repetitive use of the word "similar" in that verse.......that's for modo's level.

Your bars ain't REALLY THAT NICE/ coz I've seen SIMILAR LINES/ from whack rappers with INSULAR MINDS/
I'm SPILLING YA SPINES/ cuz you'd have to spit with throat cancer for ya shiit to sound ILLER THAN MINE

coogar:


i would avoid the repetitive use of the word "similar" in that verse.......that's for modo's level.

Your bars ain't REALLY THAT NICE/ coz I've seen SIMILAR LINES/ from whack rappers with INSULAR MINDS/
I'm SPILLING YA SPINES/ cuz you'd have to spit with throat cancer for ya shiit to sound ILLER THAN MINE

Yeah, that's right. If actually I was doing a complete verse I'd avoid that. Just wanted to show him how a bar should be

kr0ne:

Yeah, that's right. If actually I was doing a complete verse I'd avoid that. Just wanted to show him how a bar should be

nice one, kr0ne!
can you include yeyenatu & lertee in the phoenix crew? they need you to smoothen their verses & punches.

coogar:


nice one, kr0ne!
can you include yeyenatu & lertee in the phoenix crew? they need you to smoothen their verses & punches.

Lmao! most Phoenix members picked up on their own, or say by observing others. Like that Gladyys girl that just dropped a free on FFR. I remember how sloppy she used to be then. PaulThor is usually the one doing the coaching.Me I no dey get chance at all
The only two people I can boast I coached are Fyh and Teddybiyasi
There's one other guy, Pein, the one fund of u. If that boy join NL he go wound many people here. I'll post one of his recent brawls on FFR

kr0ne:

Lmao! most Phoenix members picked up on their own, or say by observing others. Like that Gladyys girl that just dropped a free on FFR. I remember how sloppy she used to be then. PaulThor is usually the one doing the coaching.Me I no dey get chance at all
The only two people I can boast I coached are Fyh and Teddybiyasi
There's one other guy, Pein, the one fund of u. If that boy join NL he go wound many people here. I'll post one of his recent brawls on FFR

Ehen, so teddy na phoenix member

Lagunna:


Ehen, so teddy na phoenix member

Nah, both of them ain't Phoenix members. Whatsapp

kr0ne:
Nah, both of them ain't Phoenix members. Whatsapp

okay..i wan battle u sef

Lagunna:


okay..i wan battle u sef

Lmao! Tell Guykhena na

kr0ne:

Lmao! most Phoenix members picked up on their own, or say by observing others. Like that Gladyys girl that just dropped a free on FFR. I remember how sloppy she used to be then. PaulThor is usually the one doing the coaching. Me I no dey get chance at all
The only two people I can boast I coached are Fyh and Teddybiyasi
There's one other guy, Pein, the one fund of u. If that boy join NL he go wound many people here. I'll post one of his recent brawls on FFR

this is revealing.....
so you coached teddymiyaki? and that skinny girl would be bragging like she's foxy brown.

coogar:


this is revealing.....
so you coached teddymiyaki? and that skinny girl would be bragging like she's foxy brown.

Yeah, she can brag now, same way Fyh Is bragging, but God know say I don try for dem

kr0ne:

Yeah, she can brag now, same way Fyh Is bragging, but God know say I don try for dem

FYH is dopë
he puts in the work, i like his tenacity. he's always willing to learn & his scripts get better and better every time.

teddymiyaki started as a clown - with incomplete letters & text-typing slangs. she has improved a lot too though but her bragging no get part 2.

coogar:


FYH is dopë
he puts in the work, i like his tenacity. he's always willing to learn & his scripts get better and better every time.

teddymiyaki started as a clown - with incomplete letters & text-typing slangs. she has improved a lot too though but her bragging no get part 2.

Yeah, she used to write her words incomplete
As for the bragging, what else do expect from a lil girl whopping his elders
Check out the battle from Pein I posted on FFR

kr0ne:

Yeah, she used to write her words incomplete
As for the bragging, what else do expect from a lil girl whopping his elders
Check out the battle from Pein I posted on FFR

link, please.....
how come you guys don't copy/paste battles from the other forums here? we should be seeing these battles - not everyone use facebook or 2go or whatever.

there should be a thread where we can view "foreign" battles. besides, i suspect you have been writing for teddy. her set-ups have been real good of late. there's a change in the style of writing too.

coogar:


link, please.....
how come you guys don't copy/paste battles from the other forums here? we should be seeing these battles - not everyone use facebook or 2go or whatever.

there should be a thread where we can view "foreign" battles. besides, i suspect you have been writing for teddy. her set-ups have been real good of late. there's a change in the style of writing too.

Nah! If I do that it would be cheating and won't be encouraging her na. I only show her examples and advise her to practice. Me I don't even have time
The verse is on FFR. Posted already

kr0ne:
Ochon

Your bars ain't REALLY THAT NICE/ coz I've seen SIMILAR LINES/ from whack rappers with SIMILAR MINDS/
I'm SPILLING YA SPINES/ cuz you'd have to spit with throat cancer for ya shiit to sound ILLER THAN MINE!

^ ^ ^ That was a bar made of 5 lines with 4-syllabic rhyme scheme (the ones in caps). Always note that ur punch must come last, while the rest are referred to as build-ups. Unless wanna make it complex like Coogar and the rest. . so u can start with a punch and u MUST end it with a punch.
See what I mean by 4 syllables. .taking the last line: ill-er-than-mine.

This is great. Thanks lot..and Coogar too for the "similar" lesson.

One more thing.. I don't know what simile/metaphor is in text-battling.. An example will be highly appreciated.

kr0ne:

Nah! If I do that it would be cheating and won't be encouraging her na. I only show her examples and advise her to practice. Me I don't even have time.

okay - we are watching.

The verse is on FFR. Posted already

who is david pein?
the dude even referenced my name.....see me see wahala.

.........Me?? I'm a born vet. ./with strong techs. ./i've got babes, chicks. .when I insert my dick they all dead!/but u broke, and that's the only way u bleeped mehn!/but this ur love for 'COOGER' only means. .u even way broke 2 afford Young Girls!!/(Cooger. .cougar)

someone should please bring david pein here....he's got some explanation to do.

ochon:

This is great. Thanks lot..and Coogar too for the "similar" lesson.
One more thing.. I don't know what simile/metaphor is in text-battling.. An example will be highly appreciated.

https://www.nairaland.com/1936826/nairaland-rapbattles-learning-thread

coogar:


okay - we are watching.



who is david pein?
the dude even referenced my name.....see me see wahala.



someone should please bring david pein here....he's got some explanation to do.




https://www.nairaland.com/1936826/nairaland-rapbattles-learning-thread

That's Geophrey's verse, dissing Pein that he's fond of u
Pein doesn't have account here yet

kr0ne:

That's Geophrey's verse, dissing Pein that he's fond of u

who is geoffrey & who is pein?
how do they know me, biko?

coogar:


who is geoffrey & who is pein?
how do they know me, biko?

Nl has more guest viewers than members, so they know. Ibime is well-known in almost every site u find many Nigerians. I remember one guy impersonating him back then on 2go and we were all scared to diss him. The guy even use the name dey fu-ck Stu.pid girls wey wan learn rap by all means, until we blew his cover. He was stealing Ibime's lines
Meanwhile, 2go is not really a place for kids like some claim. Evilchapterz was once there and evn almighty U3 has an account there too

kr0ne:

Nl has more guest viewers than members, so they know. Ibime is well-known in almost every site u find many Nigerians. I remember one guy impersonating him back then on 2go and we were all scared to diss him. The guy even use the name dey fu-ck Stu.pid girls wey wan learn rap by all means, until we blew his cover. He was stealing Ibime's lines
Meanwhile, 2go is not really a place for kids like some claim. Evilchapterz was once there and evn almighty U3 has an account there too

i pursued evilchapterz from here.
i remember telling him i would turn his evilchapters into a holyparagraph.

he never came back since then. that nigga is a püssy!

coogar:


i pursued evilchapterz from here.
i remember telling him i would turn his evilchapters into a holyparagraph.

he never came back since then. that nigga is a püssy!

The guy is dope. He just has annoying attitude problem

coogar:


nice one, kr0ne!
can you include yeyenatu & lertee in the phoenix crew? they need you to smoothen their verses & punches.

kr0ne:

Lmao! Tell Guykhena na

Lolzz.. On a serious note though.. I think you should battle coogar, ibime or mikuz..

Those guys no dey battle again sef..

coogar vs kr0ne..

make we pop thread na..

Lagunna:

Lolzz.. On a serious note though.. I think you should battle coogar, ibime or mikuz..

Those guys no dey battle again sef..

coogar vs kr0ne..

make we pop thread na..

hehehehe - let him battle mikuz.
my head is elsewhere these days - FUT has taken my interest away completely in writing.

coogar:


hehehehe - let him battle mikuz.
my head is elsewhere these days - FUT has taken my interest away completely in writing.

Alright..

So it's gonna be kr0ne vs emaprince then..

Lagunna:


Alright..

So it's gonna be kr0ne vs emaprince then..

kr0ne vs teddymiyaki(please)
that would be a proper grudge match - we would get to read some personals.