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Hell by Nobody: 8:20am On Nov 24, 2014
Fire on the mountain
But I won't run
I want to feel devils rage
I want to feel a bit of hell
Hell a place were all sinners shall dwell
Hell a place were a pot of noddles can be prepared for just 2seconds
A place God described as everlasting torment
A place where you shall wine and dine with lucifer
HELL a place were death is no more
Hell a place for our corupt leaders



Yes am going to escape hell
I will go to a place filled with milk and honey
A place were songs of praise is the other of the day
Yes heaven
Ama make it

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Re: Hell by Nobody: 9:47am On Nov 24, 2014
Wow! Never knew you write poetry.
Ayamlaykorn
Re: Hell by Nobody: 10:24am On Nov 24, 2014
laykorn:
Wow! Never knew you write poetry.
Ayamlaykorn
yes I do oo how was it I try?

I mentioned you in my other poetry I wrote earlier today
Re: Hell by texanomaly(f): 11:20am On Nov 24, 2014
samflexxy:
Fire on the mountain
But I won't run
I want to feel devils rage
I want to feel a bit of hell
Hell a place were all sinners shall dwell
Hell a place were a pot of noddles can be prepared for just 2seconds
A place God described as everlasting torment
A place where you shall wine and dine with lucifer
HELL a place were death is no more
Hell a place for our corupt leaders



Yes am going to escape hell
I will go to a place filled with milk and Hot
A place were songs of praise is the other of the day
Yes heaven
Ama make it

I left a comment after your poem from earlier today. Keep writing. It'll keep you sane...or at least just sane enough anyway.
Re: Hell by texanomaly(f): 11:21am On Nov 24, 2014
Have you joined the poetry club?
Re: Hell by Nobody: 11:24am On Nov 24, 2014
texanomaly:
Have you joined the poetry club?
no not yet I haven't heard from oma4u
Re: Hell by texanomaly(f): 11:26am On Nov 24, 2014
samflexxy:
no not yet I haven't heard from oma4u

OMA4U...this guy needs in! grin
Re: Hell by Nobody: 11:27am On Nov 24, 2014
texanomaly:


I left a comment after your poem from earlier today. Keep writing. It'll keep you sane...or at least just sane enough anyway.
lols thank you am an english student I just started taking poetry class
Re: Hell by ggrin(f): 11:27am On Nov 24, 2014
Wowundecided



tongue
Re: Hell by texanomaly(f): 11:29am On Nov 24, 2014
samflexxy:
lols thank you am an english student I just started taking poetry class

A newbie! smiley I'm impressed. You are poised for greatness. Keep it up.
Re: Hell by Nobody: 11:43am On Nov 24, 2014
texanomaly:


A newbie! smiley I'm impressed. You are poised for greatness. Keep it up.
thank you ma'am

Pls I would love to get poetry lessons from you and oma4u
Re: Hell by Nobody: 11:45am On Nov 24, 2014
ggrin:
Wowundecided



tongue
Re: Hell by ggrin(f): 12:54pm On Nov 24, 2014
samflexxy:
that man don ban me again osad
Re: Hell by Nobody: 1:51pm On Nov 24, 2014
Wow!!!i'm impressed,you need to join the club Asap.
Good work.
Re: Hell by Nobody: 1:56pm On Nov 24, 2014
Sam,sincerely I didn't get the mention. For a beginner you're awesome. It seems like you write better than I do sef. You need to be on the club. Please send a message to OMA4U's number. Thank you sir
Ayamlaykorn
Re: Hell by Nobody: 10:33pm On Nov 24, 2014
ggrin:
that man don ban me again osad
lols make sense if you like this time no mail am again hahahaha I think the guy is on to you what did you do to him better apologize if not he'll make nl boring for you
Re: Hell by Nobody: 10:36pm On Nov 24, 2014
Bunsky:
Wow!!!i'm impressed,you need to join the club Asap.
Good work.
lols thank you ma'am but I haven't seen oma4u invite to join any group even do I already gave him my no.
Re: Hell by Nobody: 10:37pm On Nov 24, 2014
laykorn:
Sam,sincerely I didn't get the mention. For a beginner you're awesome. It seems like you write better than I do sef. You need to be on the club. Please send a message to OMA4U's number. Thank you sir
Ayamlaykorn
lols thank you sir my head is (biging) I will thanks a lot for your words of encouragement.
Re: Hell by OMA4U(m): 11:39pm On Nov 24, 2014
samflexxy:
lols thank you ma'am but I haven't seen oma4u invite to join any group even do I already gave him my no.

Join us on 08039594156
Re: Hell by Nobody: 11:56pm On Nov 24, 2014
OMA4U:


Join us on 08039594156
have sent you a msg via whatsapp
Re: Hell by texanomaly(f): 12:56am On Nov 25, 2014
Yaaaaaay!!!

Re: Hell by ggrin(f): 9:30am On Nov 25, 2014
samflexxy:
lols make sense if you like this time no mail am again hahahaha I think the guy is on to you what did you do to him better apologize if not he'll make nl boring for you
I don't know for him o grin
Is the guy a He or she?
Re: Hell by Nobody: 10:17pm On Nov 25, 2014
ggrin:
I don't know for him o grin
Is the guy a He or she?
he is a he
Lols


Good evening jare have been having network probs since morning

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