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In The Circle Of Commotion by Rounakid(m): 2:53pm On Jan 23, 2015 |
Am inviting this genius veterans in the field of litterature to this mouth watering story that you can't afford to miss! MightyFortress, Alawokit(f), Nancywealth(f), Spongia1, seunviju(f), lovingangel(f), dyzle(m), Pelelicious(f), smilingazor, ufss(m), titanic1, Adikij(f), Darrydeck, temmylove28(f), TeeAhi(m), smsshola(m), SkyyLord, Flakkydagirl, Chinweblinkz(f), littlemistress(f), retalee3(f), Eroxxy, jojoluv, rhemaplus(m), mistytohcute(f), presley243(m), goddysweb, obinnau , princesa, kingphilip, flakkydagirl, tiffany, d9ty7, divepen, oyinprince, julietakk, therock5555, candy, temitopedaniel, fatalveli, larrysun, adegwurulez, stuff46, dygeasy, tecno4life, niwdog, labaski, ogbarmey, skimpledawg, kinwayne, safarigirl, dastancypayne, maziomenuko, lilyomi, uthman, mznelly and others ... Please your comments and critics... Are the only fuel that i need to kickstart my engine... Plz... Those mentioned should start reporting as we wait for an update...! Tnx... IT IS I ROUNA...! |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by Niwdog(m): 3:19pm On Jan 23, 2015 |
I'm present sir. Thanks for the invitation. |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by kingphilip(m): 3:35pm On Jan 23, 2015 |
following bro Oya kickstart it |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by Rounakid(m): 4:36pm On Jan 23, 2015 |
Niwdog: kingphilip: Niwdog:tnx and Godbless... Bros... Update drops later in eveninq tnx... |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by adegwurulez(m): 5:50pm On Jan 23, 2015 |
present |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by Presley243(m): 6:30pm On Jan 23, 2015 |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by Cybershow(m): 9:05pm On Jan 23, 2015 |
Am here also..bt z jst dat am nt mention abeg start d engine o |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by Fatalveli(m): 9:51pm On Jan 23, 2015 |
Oya I'm here! Where is the story? |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by stuff46(m): 7:46am On Jan 24, 2015 |
oboy i show buh i never see update. Still, make i camp one side until update arrive Btw i havent seen a female here |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by smsshola(m): 5:50pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
Tnk u for d invitation but can't see any update. |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by Cybershow(m): 6:07pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
stuff46:Ahah oga mi se na female u want..dnt wory i go bring 1 4 u..RELAX |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by Rounakid(m): 10:38pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
EPISODE 1 "Emeka, i don die today ooo..." That's comes from my friend Tade. He was a tall, fair boy with average physical appearance, One can't describe as ugly nor can you describe him as a handsome dude. Tade and i grew up in the same neighbourhood. He is a typical Yoruba indigen borned by an Ibo mother. I actually knew the cause of his lamentation, but i just pretends as if i don't knew the source of his grievance. "Na who kill u? What will a sane individual gain from killing a Moth like you?" i asked chuckling. "Emeka your papa! You are pretending as if u don't know what am taking of, If na you dey my shoe i no say u for don dey pee for your pant" He cursed, almost in tears. I just laughed at his grievance, Ofcourse why won't i laugh? I forewarned him of the danger forthcoming before he fails a victim to it. I know, I have been keeping you on suspense, Let me just introduce my self to you. My name is Emeka, am a third child a family of four. Two boys and two girls, I was from a lower class family, my father was a local palmwine tapper, whilst my ,mother a petty trader. Out of the four children in our family, My eldest brother who is the first-born Nkalu is serving as an apperentice in Kano, My elder sister Ada is staying with an uncle in Onitsha. So i was all alone with my parent and kid sister Nkiru. Am a student of Umuokoro Community Secondary school Enugu. Am in The Ss1 class, my best friend both in school and in the street is Tade, Fate makes it for us to be in the same class. Tade and i have been so close to the extense that people started calling us twins. Although, I know that there is no way i can be a twin brother to Tade, Despite that we are of the same age, Tade looks more matured and also taller than me and he have this heavily build structure that we his friend make jest of him by calling him Mike Tyson (former Nigerian Boxer). The only thing that i can boast of surpassing Tade is my cute face and shiny dentition accompanied with sexy dimples that ladies longed to see whenever i smiled. Going back to the story, My friend Tade stoled a fowl from one of the most quarelsome woman in our street called Ma' Ejide. Tade stoled the fowl the previous day and tooked it to a hideout where he roasted and ate it up, not knowing that their is an eye witness that saw him when he carried out those satanic act. Now, the eye witness have reported what he saw to Ma' Ejide and the woman is looking for him all over the street. Tade's worst fear was the fear of Ma' Ejide reporting him to his parent, he can't just withstand the almighty strokecane of his father. That have been the reason behind his agony. Though am even happy of his grievance because, his greediness and selfishness make him to consume the whole fowl all by himself without even caring to share with me his best friend. At the same time am thanking my stars that am not in his shoe, As he sitted ther lamenting am also cracking my brain inorder to come up with a idea on how to clear him out of his present mess. I later came up with the idea of him following me for us to go and apologise to Ma' Ejide maybe she should forgive my friend, and do him the favour of not revealing his evil act to his parent. We then set off to Ma' Ejide's house, If only we had known what would had be the outcome of the outcome of our jouney to Ma' Ejide's Compound, we would have forgeted about crossing there! |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by Rounakid(m): 10:47pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
Plz... Sirs and ma's in the house you are all welcomed... Pls do not be annoyed because of my delayed update... Plz something... Happened, but i thank God, all is well now... Promise to try my best... Plz i want ur critics in this update, tnx.. IT IS I ROUNA! |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by Cybershow(m): 10:49pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
Ronakid i dae gbadun u..cont..i dae follow u like d shel at d back of a snail..bt guy dnt hesitate to visit ma thread thru d link at ma signature post |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by Rounakid(m): 10:50pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
Cybershow:tnx bro... I will do just as u say... |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by Cybershow(m): 10:54pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
Rounakid:U wlcm..m very grateful |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by Rounakid(m): 11:00pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
Cybershow:my pleasure sir...! |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by Rounakid(m): 11:04pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
smsshola:update don drop sir. |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by Cybershow(m): 11:05pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
Rounakid:Alrit sir...hope al z wel sir...nyc meetin u |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by Rounakid(m): 11:06pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
Cybershow:u too... Boss... |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by Cybershow(m): 11:09pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
Rounakid:Dat nyc...so hapi new yr 4 d first we gt 2 know each oda boss.. |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by Rounakid(m): 11:17pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
Cybershow:i wish u all ur desire oooo.... Are u on social netwrk... Lik fb or whassap, 2go etc? |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by Cybershow(m): 11:35pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
Rounakid:Yea m on fb and 2go and eskimi bt nt yet on wassap |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by Rounakid(m): 12:07am On Jan 25, 2015 |
Cybershow:kk... Nice... Do drop me ur usernames through my mail... |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by Cybershow(m): 12:16am On Jan 25, 2015 |
Rounakid:Alrit boss i wil du dat nw |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by Cybershow(m): 12:22am On Jan 25, 2015 |
Rounakid:Let me gv u tru here...my fb uxername z: cybershow emmanuel my 2go username z: ayshow135,gen2soulminded My eskimi username is: emmanuel100871 |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by kingphilip(m): 1:39am On Jan 26, 2015 |
one or two typos here and there aside that u r trying |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by Oyinprince(m): 8:49pm On Jan 26, 2015 |
Present! |
Re: In The Circle Of Commotion by smsshola(m): 4:01pm On Feb 01, 2015 |
Need update jus check ur typing is k...am following. |
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