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10 Memorable Collaborated Poems By Nairaland Poets 2014 - NPC (2) (3) (4)
Again - A Collaborated Poem by Nobody: 9:30pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
Again laykorn: Love; it's fingers spreaded like spun gold Once, gently nestling me to it's fold. I had sung you stupid old lullabys in mirth, Oblivious, to the danger that lurked underneath. Ah! Mama, why thy to a fool gave birth? Because rudepen: Slowly, your hands slid away Just at the very hours of the day When, when you took your love away Just like the western girls at the bay, Every hour came with pain And 4lashy: Tendrils of your hair, Wrapped around my fragile soul. I gasped for air, But my breath goes thin. For I can't feel my soul. Because honjohnbright: Your unexpected waves, Threw me in the lonely caves So now, as my heart aches, I must express my pain Than rather play the game. So laykorn: After today, I won't be lost again. Yo, life you see is an un-ending adventure, so I'll find a way. I'll raise the dust, I'll sail on these curly waves. I'll move in the air - swift, ride on old trains - rickety - wailing rails. And if ever, I find some love again, I'll give half, half, half of my heart away. PS: This is what happens when 4 amateur poets get heartbroken at the same time. Ayamlaykorn 3 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Again - A Collaborated Poem by Nobody: 9:40pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
Now that's what I'm talking about |
Re: Again - A Collaborated Poem by EverestdeBliu(m): 11:04pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
Nice work guys. Please what's the theme or title? |
Re: Again - A Collaborated Poem by Nobody: 11:33pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
Re: Again - A Collaborated Poem by EverestdeBliu(m): 11:44pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
honjohnbright:Kay,why not place it atop,for further clarity? |
Re: Again - A Collaborated Poem by texanomaly(f): 12:13am On Jan 25, 2015 |
Laykorn its nestling not nustling, and is in in the air or just one "in"? Fix those. It's great! 1 Like |
Re: Again - A Collaborated Poem by Anoruo(m): 7:50am On Jan 25, 2015 |
Laykorn its "And if ever", not "and I ever". Pls fix that typo. Beautiful work. I love. 1 Like |
Re: Again - A Collaborated Poem by Nobody: 7:58am On Jan 25, 2015 |
Anoruo:Thank you wo . It is old age. Ayamlaykorn |
Re: Again - A Collaborated Poem by EverestdeBliu(m): 12:04pm On Jan 25, 2015 |
laykorn:Old age ke, did u c mid-eighties? |
Re: Again - A Collaborated Poem by Nobody: 12:35pm On Jan 25, 2015 |
beautiful |
Re: Again - A Collaborated Poem by Nobody: 3:49pm On Jan 25, 2015 |
Re: Again - A Collaborated Poem by OMA4U(m): 4:18pm On Jan 25, 2015 |
Sorry o, but why did you give your hearts to some girls at the first instance? BTW, nice collab. Good one, poets. |
Re: Again - A Collaborated Poem by Nobody: 4:47pm On Jan 25, 2015 |
laykorn: oooooooooooooooooo |
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