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Again - A Collaborated Poem by Nobody: 9:30pm On Jan 24, 2015

Again
laykorn:

Love; it's fingers spreaded like spun gold
Once, gently nestling me to it's fold.
I had sung you stupid old lullabys in mirth,
Oblivious, to the danger that lurked underneath.
Ah! Mama, why thy to a fool gave birth?


Because

rudepen:

Slowly, your hands slid away
Just at the very hours of the day
When, when you took your love away
Just like the western girls at the bay,
Every hour came with pain

And

4lashy:

Tendrils of your hair,
Wrapped around my fragile soul.
I gasped for air,
But my breath goes thin.
For I can't feel my soul.

Because

honjohnbright:
Your unexpected waves,
Threw me in the lonely caves
So now, as my heart aches,
I must express my pain
Than rather play the game.

So

laykorn:

After today, I won't be lost again.
Yo, life you see is an un-ending adventure, so I'll find a way.
I'll raise the dust, I'll sail on these curly waves.
I'll move in the air - swift, ride on old trains - rickety - wailing rails.
And if ever, I find some love again,
I'll give half, half, half of my heart away.


PS: This is what happens when 4 amateur poets get heartbroken at the same time. cheesy
Ayamlaykorn

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Re: Again - A Collaborated Poem by Nobody: 9:40pm On Jan 24, 2015
cheesy Now that's what I'm talking about
Re: Again - A Collaborated Poem by EverestdeBliu(m): 11:04pm On Jan 24, 2015
Nice work guys. Please what's the theme or title?
Re: Again - A Collaborated Poem by Nobody: 11:33pm On Jan 24, 2015
EverestdeBliu:
Nice work guys. Please what's the theme or title?


The pains of a broken heart
Re: Again - A Collaborated Poem by EverestdeBliu(m): 11:44pm On Jan 24, 2015
honjohnbright:



The pains of a broken heart
Kay,why not place it atop,for further clarity?
Re: Again - A Collaborated Poem by texanomaly(f): 12:13am On Jan 25, 2015
Laykorn its nestling not nustling, and is in in the air or just one "in"? Fix those. It's great!

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Re: Again - A Collaborated Poem by Anoruo(m): 7:50am On Jan 25, 2015
Laykorn its "And if ever", not "and I ever". Pls fix that typo. Beautiful work. I love.

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Re: Again - A Collaborated Poem by Nobody: 7:58am On Jan 25, 2015
Anoruo:
Laykorn its "And if ever", not "and I ever". Pls fix that typo. Beautiful work. I love.
Thank you wo cheesy. It is old age.
Ayamlaykorn
Re: Again - A Collaborated Poem by EverestdeBliu(m): 12:04pm On Jan 25, 2015
laykorn:

Thank you wo cheesy. It is old age.
Ayamlaykorn
Old age ke, did u c mid-eighties?
Re: Again - A Collaborated Poem by Nobody: 12:35pm On Jan 25, 2015
beautiful smiley
Re: Again - A Collaborated Poem by Nobody: 3:49pm On Jan 25, 2015
standd:
beautiful smiley
Fine girl grin.
Thank you wo.
Ayamlaykorn
Re: Again - A Collaborated Poem by OMA4U(m): 4:18pm On Jan 25, 2015
Sorry o, but why did you give your hearts to some girls at the first instance?

BTW, nice collab. Good one, poets.
Re: Again - A Collaborated Poem by Nobody: 4:47pm On Jan 25, 2015
laykorn:

Fine girl grin.
Thank you wo.
Ayamlaykorn

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