Illmayor V Supermiy

Voting Criteria :

Opener - 1 point

Rhymes - 2 points

Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points

Punchlines - 3 points

Personals - 2 points

Flow - 1 point

Wordplays - 2 points

Closer - 1 point


Rules

- 10 lines.

- Deadline is 8pm, Sunday 22 February 2014.

- Verses should be posted by both
battlers on or not later than
deadline date.

- No biting, swaying, stretching,
feeding or recycling.

- No complaining about votes.

- A no show attracts a ban.

- No unnecessary comments

- No smearing comments about any
bar OR biting accusations without
proof.

- Whatever you feel is wrong with a
bar or verse - please put it in your
vote. Vote and state what you found
wrong.

- If there's anything you need to say
in defence of your verse please save
them for after voting's over.

- NO argument with established vets
OR voters.

- Battlers should not interject
between votes and voters should
just vote and leave it like that.

Goodluck!!!

where is this guy na!...Stumps in

check!!

Illmayor:
check!!

post and i'll follow Asap!

where the kid na...? ..can't stay long!

SUPERMIY'S FALL OUT!!
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Bygon*buy gun?... can never bygon*buy gun/ why purchase when I could prolly snatch one/ pack sum boxing glove to leave him 'panda' shape then load this cap gun/ so he'll realize I would I will still drop bars even if it guarded by a thousand 'rhinoceros' like 'tai lung'/

I'll swung his brain dazzling with metaphors/ a bitc.h lyk Cynthia was is even a more worthy opponent you should have met her for/ tutor, coz this
Gravity you sprang I'll just melt that force/ so you'll notice your bars won't be landing but I won't spend that much/ of my drug shi.t on toads but will keep them for heads that worth/ supermiy is just some fragile kid I would give sum tender touch/

I'll scatter ur skull using a 'hammer' so you'll see 'thunder' and mistake today for 'Thor's' day*Thursday/ now he'll realize am 'god' even when I keep a low key*'loki' but after unleashing this worst plague/ his verse cannot serve as guard*'asgard' coz this punch jabs & hook will give him quick knock out like 'Chris' Johnson/

I will KICK, SLAP THEN CHOP OFF HIS LEGS/ then GIVE JABS THAT BOX UP HIS HEAD/ coz KIDS THAT MESSED UP WITH VETS/ will MISS LIFE THEN ROCKS WITH DEATH/

I will use mags & rachet so you'll know this vet gonna kill/ but won't forget the bag for his body coz this thread gonna see/ how supermiy falls out like beds on that ringe/ then split his head into two drag him up 'Shere' in an upside down position to get heads over 'hill'/

I will kidnap the pauper torture and slay/ then use an acid to moist up tha face/ scripting his death could best be done by an author like me/ my name is a proof am 'sick' ain't toking 'I need a doctor' like 'dre'/

Supermiy:
bodybag keh..its to early na!

the 'mean' claim drugs and beg giyazzi & obesef for battle but the ignore tha fakers game/ but if that 'average' son claims beast and doubt an early body bag I arrange and tame/ him then change 'mode' use a power saw and mayhem tha lame/ so if he's looking for victory he'll search in vain like looking for that Malaysia plane/

Illmayor's little send off!
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I was paired with this maggot, my pride is hurt
Blazingly about to kill this gay,my hand is hot
For thinking you can win,you be real fool
My bars would either be "teaching him a lesson" or send "eze back to school"!
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You be stick shey,you still no match for me
But if this is a sporting event,you could then march for me
Feminine bars you bring ama let you know something princess
ya punches are like jetli moves without film tricks,they lack the "wowing effects"!
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I pop niggas with both pills
Evidently my rap kills
But am talking about my .45 skills
am always about the shell Even tho i ain't a gangster or a cultist
if ill ever has a "shell",it's because he's an actual "tortoise"!!
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If Its a gun fight and i'd blazing with the auto pistol's
You want bare hands,i'm okay with this too
Bring ya first punch would be Dodged and ya will hands would be hanged
My swift uppercut would leave this kid in the "spiritual world" like he's avatar anng!

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He Tryna face me,I'd punch dude
Like oil drilling,my style is crude
Give the mofo some pain when i
fold ya leg in a right angler manner
burn ya bones meeting point till you have brown knees(brownies),it ain't cookies slacker!
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the kid is evidently not a threat
The mumu's crew is just filled with defects
So i wont be wasting ammo by blazing the techs
Since "ill" and he's goons be "fish",i'l just "barbecue" him along with the rest!
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I ain't following the 3 liner and punch structure
Every line i write is bar that ya whole rap culture
Lets make this a "pin ball" game
Ama be leaving "needles" all over this "Di.ck" head,call that "acupuncture"!
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am the next king,to know how i know ya little mind is curious
You claim to be a werewolf and i'd be Sirius
Nigga you should be ashamed of ya Moniker clown
But wait i think you made history by being the only "mayor" without a town!
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The truth about what ill truly is
the nigga be a troll something people don't eat Or live with
In paper they'll always choose his kid bro as their next of kin
Even when people be asking your parents how they came to have a dumb nitwit
They said dunno but he's "toping our list of mistakes",he should have been named "defects king"!

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I was taking it easy on you its time to go hard
Previous bars were meant for ya body but this is meant for ya heart
You "Finding" a win,bleep that
Cause when i bring out that 9 ama shoot the "seek" head and watch as he'll die!
....bring that back..i said when i bring out that 9 ama shoot the "sick" head and watch as "ill" die!

Illmayor:
check!!

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mikuz..tag voters... i dy go

mikuz..tag voters...

Ok thanks guys :

Open for votes :

Ema Prince
O4ka
Cooger
Ibime
Kr0ne
Goshikid
Limerick


Please your two cents. Thanks!

Opener - 1 point - Mayor

Rhymes - 2 points - Mayor

Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points - Super

Punchlines - 3 points - Tie

Personals - 2 points - N/A. Mayor had one personal but wasn't really hitting.

Flow - 1 point - Super

Wordplays - 2 points - N/A

Closer - 1 point - Super


MVGT: Super

To be honest, no punches really stood out in thís battle. In şuch a case you tend to go for the person whose flow was easier to follow. If you can follow the flow as a starting point, the person can keep your attention better to follow their puns.

Why are these newbies stretching the hell out of their verse? Who dey teach una this kyn thing? I'm really not happy about this.

Mikuz,you no dey tag me well so I hardly get the mention. Its Emaprince and not Ema prince.


How person wan judge this match? Smh. Yeah the punches aren't nice but super had one or two brilliant ideas,just that the wordings were poor.supermly also got the flow while mayor's got the rhyme.

MVGT- supermiy

Illmayor had a better verse, with a pack of metaphors, though not well arranged

Mvgt - - Illmayor!

------------MY VERDICT---------
opener--mayor
punch---tie
metaphor--super
rhymes--mayor
personal---tie
flow--super
wordplay---nil
closer---super
my vote goes to---super

so goshikid is now more qualified to vote than me or elymax or ksslib...

not that I care though or give a flying ffuck though, i just find it funny
And its Coogar not Cooger ..if you want him to vote and see this, then tag him properly and stop misspelling his name purposely ......
I wonder how you would be in reality if you can't let go of the past on social media ... I feel sorry for your soul ....

You still haven't action on what dj5naira did...
I have told you what I want-- 2 weeks ban or a public apology ...

Illmayor got my vote

Super nice flow

And Nice showing yall.

Thanks guys. Supermiy wins this and qualifies for the second round.

Darkrebel666:
so goshikid is now more qualified to vote than me or elymax or ksslib...

not that I care though or give a flying ffuck though, i just find it funny
And its Coogar not Cooger ..if you want him to vote and see this, then tag him properly and stop misspelling his name purposely ......
I wonder how you would be in reality if you can't let go of the past on social media ... I feel sorry for your soul ....

You still haven't action on what dj5naira did...

hey man. . . .watch what you say. . .even if you drop more lines than me. .which you were caught busted. .that doesnt mean you're better than me. . .owkay? am your senior here. .
so senior. .takes the responsibility. .while guys like micheal sit . .relax and watch. . .. .unhm?? hope it clear??. . . . . .bye!!

goshikid:
hey man. . . .watch what you say. . .even if you drop more lines than me. .which you were caught busted. .that doesnt mean you're better than me. . .owkay? am your senior here. .
so senior. .takes the responsibility. .while guys like micheal sit . .relax and watch. . .. .unhm?? hope it clear??. . . . . .bye!!

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This is why I called you a mmoron ...You hear things and never confirm...
Even that fool called dj5naira hasn't said anything since yesterday because he must have checked the dates we posted the verses...which shows how clueless and idiotic he is ...

I pray someone steals your verses in future and you are the one getting accused instead of the person, then you would know how it feels...

But its impossible anyway..cos you are wack and no one would even bother to steal even a line from you..Peasant

Darkrebel666:

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This is why I called you a mmoron ...You hear things and never confirm...
Even that fool called dj5naira hasn't said anything since yesterday because he must have checked the dates we posted the verses...which shows how clueless and idiotic he is ...

I pray someone steals your verses in future and you are the one getting accused instead of the person, then you would know how it feels...

But its impossible anyway..cos you are wack

owkay. .thats your problem not mine. . .bye*******