Delilah on point.... eve located...Rhoda activated... good work larry

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Brotherly jejely finish this story, I take God n devil beg u

B

Black dnt go against basket cos of Rhoda. Tnx 4 d update

be like say this rhoda na virus for black life........jst because of the girl he's already misbehaving ...he has remembered stealing again

Choi!!!......diz suspense z badt gan.....nyz 1 Larry

Egban LArrytheDon..abeg wen we go get the continuation naaa..u wan kill person?

Sbebi dis guy talk say him don dey chop frog wey d effect

Nice update Larrysun. Great job, so far.

You sure you not using black's character to portray your perception about the christain doctrine? LOL.

I dont know but somehow, you've been able to make me know your personal stance on some pressing public opinions through the charracters in your stories.

Cheerio man! And please we await more of your updates.

Good work Larrysun,quite intriguing.

Nmeri17:
plot twist: Basket will find Peter bedding his girl then the two would break up as we all know. Then Rhoda will abscond with Peter like Ese and Yunusa After which Basket--in an attempt to spite his thieving arch rival--will join the police force so he can bring about Peter's Waterloo Following a raid on Peter's hideout, basket will mistakenly shoot Rhoda fatally, leaving Peter at the mercy of vivacious hatred for the world. He'll then go on a rampage
1) Chief Salami
2) John Balewa

E go kill dem finish + their children then go sidon for maternity ward in case their wives wanno born a descendant so he can terminate them a.k.a catch dem young It was now in the process of being on the run from his massacre, that Peter's daughter in law went into labour (which is where the story began ) But Lemmi stop here. I noticed half the writers on nairaland literature section hate nmeri17 because he scatters their stories with his plot twists....TWA!!!

Thanks! Thanks so much! For bastardizing my story!

DzTzl:
i dunno wt made me go baq to d first post, but this statement said it all >>>>>>>>>>>>"But amidst this national excitement, some of the masses had
set up a fan club in honour of the escapees. They called
themselves TBF—The Black Followers."

Nothing is always as it seems.

Akposb:
Okay, the two posters above me just want us to leap rather than walk.

Well done Mr Larry...ages don't matter as these three teenagers words and expressions are what we could attribute to adults. A secret duel is gradually brewing but I hope it does not escalate into something fatal.

Words are the palm oil with which we eat the yam of emotion.

meekmiki6:
Delilah on point.... eve located...Rhoda activated... good work larry

And so the devil that lures her lust is missing.

ibokoharam:
Brotherly jejely finish this story, I take God n devil beg u

B

The end is not imminent, sir.

TheNathan:
be like say this rhoda na virus for black life........jst because of the girl he's already misbehaving ...he has remembered stealing again

A good stream does not forget its source.

shegs2009:
Sbebi dis guy talk say him don dey chop frog wey d effect

Hehehe! The prospect of dining on amphibians isn't gratifying.

Dklef:
Nice update Larrysun. Great job, so far.

You sure you not using black's character to portray your perception about the christain doctrine? LOL.

I dont know but somehow, you've been able to make me know your personal stance on some pressing public opinions through the charracters in your stories.

Cheerio man! And please we await more of your updates.

Lol! I believe in God. But not so much in Religion.

LarrySun:
Nothing is always as it seems.

m not a newbie reading ur stories, and i trust you to twist & turn this one too!! so m not surprised i might be wrong

LarrySun:
Thanks! Thanks so much! For bastardizing my story!

sorry.

Ay-dit
I can't help it most of the time

LarrySun:
Hehehe! The prospec t of dining on amphibians isn't gratifying.

wo mr son, abi wat do u call it in ur language, whether it is gratifying or not d fact dat u chop frog, and we saw good update afterwards until now dat something is not gratifying...if frogs are not available in ur area again tell me direct and stop all dis language u learn at seme, cos i can supply u frog oo...if it reptile nairalanders can supply u dat 1 (every front page is about lizard and snakes

Nice as always... tnx fr d update.

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shegs2009:
wo mr son, abi wat do u call it in ur language, whether it is gratifying or not d fact dat u chop frog, and we saw good update afterwards until now dat something is not gratifying...if frogs are not available in ur area again tell me direct and stop all dis language u learn at seme, cos i can supply u frog oo...if it reptile nairalanders can supply u dat 1 (every front page is about lizard and snakes

I'm no more interested in frogs. I want fried rice and chicken.

LarrySun:


I'm no more interested in frogs. I want fried rice and chicken.

hey shut up der, shebi u ate rice dis morning...no b turkey u wan chop

Nice story bro, well done

Hmm... Larrysun, i dey hail oo.. What a scenic story that gets anyone glued as if u watching a movie!

Come o,Larrysun where you leave this tori waka go,oya come complete am u hear,i will tiger nuts and la casera.

Larrysun pls come back and update.

Officially following this masterpiece *smiley*

^^^ because of what I said na. If he likes let him manufacture a shabby storyline just to prove me wrong. Who e go pain pass

Olaide59:
Nice story bro, well done

Thank you, sister.