Title: THE UNBORN GRAVE


I felt i should try writing poem, though this was borne out of the desire and love for late daddy.

Read and comment.

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[b]In my sleep i weep, in my wake i mourn.

Though it has been a while but my bleeds nonstop like a waterfall.

Who would ever believe you only kicked a bucket and left? when all my life i've kicked buckets of iron, brass, mud, plastic. I also could remember kicking drums; yet i live.

Along the streets i walked, children driven to school by daddy; remembering how you held my hands to school, the stories you told me - smiles written on my face.

I hear them giggle and say "i love you daddy" to the class and school at large.

My sanity, i am losing, the pains i can bear nomore.

Daily i watch mummy weep; on sighting me she wipes her tears and pretends all is well. The once chubby and lovely mum, the choice of your life as you both fundly call yourselves is now a shaddow of herself.

Amanda has been mute since your demise, almost a dummy; refusing to eat only wishing to see you and your voice she longs for. In her wails she yearns for daddy.

Oh, what a world?

Who would believe you'll be gone so soon?

The train of death too quickly for this ride for a journey never ending it came.

The night seems so long, the day seems not gleeful to exist anymore.

Who would help do my home works now?

Into your room i walked in, your clothes on the hanger they hung, dust all over them - i see them hoping you would come someday to wear them again; probably they think you travelled as usual.

Yea, i also saw your precious watch, the golden one that you wore always to all functions. It lay on your desk amidst your books ticking tik-tak. Oh! you must have forgotten it.

Quickly i picked the watch clutching your finest coat, worn out as it may but still your best.

Fast i ran to your grave, knocked on it for an answer; waited for the door to open.

Only if i had known that the journey is of no return.

Make ways for me there for someday i come on my way to meet you, buy cars, jets, houses; own oil blocks and contest for presidecy because the suffering here i cant live with there. Work hard and be as successful as never seen.

A life well lived you have lead, i wish my heart comes to terms with reality caus life's cruelty knows no bounds. What an unborn grave!


IN MEMORY OF DADDY - 01-08-2014 REST IN PEACE.

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DEDICATED TO

[size=20pt]REPOGIRL FOR THE LOSS OF HER DAD... (R.I.P.P) SIR.[/size]

AND ALL MY FRIENDS, FOLLOWERS AND WELLWISHERS.


and to you standd my new found love, my darling...

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ACKNOLEWDGEMENT

I sincerely with open heart acknoledge NIGERIAN INFO FM, COOL FM & WAZOBIA FM all based in PORT HARCOURT NIGERIA for their efforts in inciting my spirit to write this poem.

I thank you all.

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cg

Nice poem and sorry about daddy...

Nice lines! May his soul find peace in Heaven. Amen.

Make ways for me there for someday i
come on my way to meet you, buy cars,
jets, houses own oil blocks and contest
for presidecy because the suffering
here i cant live with their. Struggle
hard and be as successful as never
seen.

The bold got me laughing though!

So sorry about that

I could remember when I lost my dad,I really want the world to end then,but life goes on

kitnah:
So sorry about that

I could remember when I lost my dad,I really want the world to end then,but life goes on

hmhmhm

Dyoungstar:

And to you standd my new found love, my darling...

Op kindly come and explain this coz I don't understand. Your new found what?

softapple:
hmhmhm

Somebody disturbs your sleep abi??

kitnah:



Somebody disturbs your sleep abi??

u dn cm bak 4rm work? hw many fried fishes u sell 2day.

softapple:
u dn cm bak 4rm work? hw many fried fishes u sell 2day.

I dont sell fish,okay??

'I've gat fish to fry' is different from 'Am selling fish'.

The first was an idiom and that was what i used.

Is that too much to comprehend??

kitnah:

I dont sell fish,okay??

'I've gat fish to fry' is different from 'Am selling fish'.

The first was an idiom and that was what i used.

Is that too much to comprehend??

i undastand if u wnt 2 protect ur ego on nairaland, bt dnt worry a friend of mine said ur fried fishes are always half done, nxt time pls improve.

softapple:
i undastand if u wnt 2 protect ur ego on nairaland, bt dnt worry a friend of mine said ur fried fishes are always half done, nxt time pls improve.

Many are mad,few are roaming

kitnah:

Many are mad,few are roaming

mheeeeeeeeew!!!!!!!!!!! hws ur les___ian partner named cynthia?

Dyoungstar sorry about the loss of your dad.
Such a special dedication. I got emotional while reading it. Thanks for the mention.

Thanks for inviting me

standd:


Op kindly come and explain this coz I don't understand. Your new found what?

Secrete admiration.

You are wiser than this, and i know you understand what i meant.

Beamborla:
Nice poem and sorry about daddy...

Thanks dearest dear.

marioking:
Nice lines! May his soul find peace in Heaven. Amen.

Make ways for me there for someday i
come on my way to meet you, buy cars,
jets, houses own oil blocks and contest
for presidecy because the suffering
here i cant live with their. Struggle
hard and be as successful as never
seen.

The bold got me laughing though!

Ever read a book titled "WEEP NOT CHILD" By NGUGI WATHIONGO?

Here i would say after heeding to the above you should be glad and joyous.

kitnah:
So sorry about that

I could remember when I lost my dad,I really want the world to end then,but life goes on

Thanks Kitty-Cat.

Sorry, Kitnah.

Such is life.

LadyX:
Dyoungstar sorry about the loss of your dad.
Such a special dedication. I got emotional while reading it. Thanks for the mention.

Thanks deary, you are an angel.

TiffanyJ:
Thanks for inviting me

You are welcome bae, kissed you

I mean missed you jare.

Dyoungstar:


Secrete admiration.

You are wiser than this, and i know you understand what i meant.

Thanks but no thanks
Too many sh*t happening on this forum, I really can't deal. Sorry.

standd:


Thanks but no thanks
Too many sh*t happening on this forum, I really can't deal. Sorry.

I GOT YOU.

NO STRINGS ATTACHED.

Hmmmmmmm

Nice poem.....
May ur dad continue to rest in perfect peace "Same with mine too"
I'd lost my dad on January 13, 2014"
So reading this touching poem of urs tonight bring back the ugly memories, am trying so hard to forget ( Now I can't sleep ) #Sad

pinkycute:
Hmmmmmmm

Nice poem.....
May ur dad continue to rest in perfect peace "Same with mine too"
I'd lost my dad on January 13, 2014"
So reading this touching poem of urs tonight bring back the ugly memories, am trying so hard to forget ( Now I can't sleep ) #Sad

Hello dear, you need to sleep.

Dyoungstar:


Thanks Kitty-Cat.

Sorry, Kitnah.

Such is life.

Lmao,Kitty-cat indeed

Life goes on,tho I still miss him

Dyoungstar:


Thanks deary, you are an angel.

Welcome.
Am humbled

Nyc poem. May daddy's soul continue to rest in peace. Amen

Ciela:
Nyc poem. May daddy's soul continue to rest in peace. Amen

Amen dear.

Dyoungstar, sorry about ur lost....... I have to copy some of ur work here, just some not all I also lost Daddy sometime in January. Nice Poem.

cocoberry:
Dyoungstar, sorry about ur lost....... I have to copy some of ur work here, just some not all I also lost Daddy sometime in January. Nice Poem.