stonecoldcafe:
I enjoyed your story. You are a very good writer and your delivery is top notch. I love your use of language. It was pretty sophisticated for me (in a very good way) and not too many writers write that way here.

Having said that, I felt squeamish as I read the rap.e bit. It seemed a tad long and detailed to me. (I've read worse though. In that case, I quickly called that writer to order and jumped off his thread)

Anyway your story ended great so I'm pacified. LOL
I'll be looking out for your other works. Well done!

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oga come and tell others to vote for me oh, please

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It has started guys. 9am don reach and voting
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Just type: I vote aipete2, adeh39 Cc: Nljega Your votes count.
These two ladies are users of this section, let the
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Ohibenemma:
Done so, myself. For you!

nicholausian:
I'm trying to find right words for this, to say that your story is excellent, top-notch writing is perhaps too mediocre. I didn't find it that interesting. Ordinary plot, ordinary flat characters. No, it's not an excellent piece. It however has effort . Effort in expression and I believe with more practice, you can become very good. I bother to comment because from the comments I've read so far, there's a likelihood for you to become complacent. You have potentials.

Fembleez1:



I'm happy to have been mentioned on this piece. You are one of them bosses here who write well. I'll surely learn from you to improve meself.





The story was an interesting one. The height of suspense I pictured when I got to the resolution was that `the door knob moving' makes me think Ade would just walk in to clear Osagie of not being the first to check Itohan out but I got bull-dozed.


Just an excellent piece boss. Keep up the good work.

Ollyfad:
wen a supposed uncle cnt converse for 5mins witout telling u ow endowed/beautiful u r....my dear collect title for ussein bolt hand ooo...ruuunnnnn. nd pray make God no hate u enof to make u stay home alone wit him kus na tuface implication you go c.
nyc one op

Ohibenemma:

Ohibenemma:

Thanks for answering my call. 2nd installment as soon in 3hours.