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A Poem To Adore Her Beauty by Nobody: 12:37pm On May 24, 2015 |
Beauty without Vain Oh, I am pleased to be your beholder For Lady, your beauty is like a gander Of which every goose must adore A thousand times did I fall Like d rain that has lost temper I saw you being Kissed by Aphrodite Your beauty is worthy of makin me The mammon of unrighteousness I shall gaze on the sun for centuries A decade nd half in admiration of your charm There was chaos among the Angels For Lady, You have impressed your maker A perfect beautiful touch that Glooms like a candle in a cimerian darkness Your beauty is ointment that soothes my soul Your beauty is as mild as the mornin dew It wets my warm soul nd makes me anew Ask me to wait for Ages, nd not even a wrinkle Your face illuminates my spirit Nothing will take away d glory from ur wrath Sadly, your beauty is vain without love But, my heart I give as a token Loving you shouldnt be that easy The whirl wind is mine to wrestle Just for a moment of every passing love's day. |
Re: A Poem To Adore Her Beauty by Nobody: 3:02pm On May 24, 2015 |
cupsofxo: Wow, awesome poem! I like the paradoxical effect in line 20 especially. I hope to see you post more of your works. Please check your abbreviations; they could be confusing to readers and avoiding them makes your work neater, sir. |
Re: A Poem To Adore Her Beauty by Nobody: 8:51pm On May 25, 2015 |
laykorn:Thanx Bro, I dedicate d poem to my Angel, as for the abberviation, I didnt really take note of dat, but will surely adjust it, and I posted a poem last week pls read it here, www.nairaland.com/2324735/tears-unity |
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