iLUMeN8:
amazing story! the end kinda pissed me off. Oluchi was forgiven too easily and like someone rightly inferred in an earlier post, second chances are rare in real life so in as much as fairytale endings are nice its sometimes a lot more vivid for us readers to have a semblance of a realistic end as this has been justified by timeless classics like Romeo and Juliet, titanic, etc. that all ended not‘sadly’ but the way they should have ended. endings of such classics keeps readers wondering what could have been.

Thank you, I get your point.

Does the idea of real love pique your interest? By real love, I mean the type they say is blind.

Just consider this for a moment: what if Oluchi jumps on the first fair handsome guy she sees in the university, she's done it with Richard, she could do it again. I think, from that angle, there is enough to wonder what COULD eventually BE.

Thank you, Laurence1

nicholausian:


Thank you, I get your point.

Does the idea of real love pique your interest? By real love, I mean the type they say is blind.

Just consider this for a moment: what if Oluchi jumps on the first fair handsome guy she sees in the university, she's done it with Richard, she could do it again. I think, from that angle, there is enough to wonder what COULD eventually BE.

what you painted was a classic picturesque fairy tale ending. such endings leave no room whatsoever for a what might have been or what could have been scenario. Oluchi ate her cake and had it that's why the end pissed a lot of us off.

Phew! Done....Nice One bruh.. Not the end I so much desired tho.. Thumbsup

AlNelssyn:
Phew! Done....Nice One bruh.. Not the end I so much desired tho.. Thumbsup

Thank you, lol