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A Poem About Soldiers In Doubts:open To Criticism by Nobody: 8:20pm On Jun 30, 2015 |
Souls of honor As the medals of honors Were being hung on my chest I began to shed tears of shame For it were not ribbons being hung on my shoulders But the souls of men I had killed in battle The crowd thought they were tears of joy As some began to cry with me They could not read my the contents of my mind To them I was a war hero worthy of medals I had killed in order to protect them In a far away land Others were mourning at the various graves For such they hung the medals of death While confined to the recess of the earth I looked at my loved ones It could have been them Had we lost the battle I killed in order to protect my own I justified the end by the means Looking up into the skies brought no answers Nations will go into battle Due to the foolishness of immature leaders Who had never learnt the art Of constructive dialogue I wondered if those Applauding before me were enough Justification to wipe away the guilt Hanging from my shoulders As more tears began to drop These were questions that would haunt me For the rest of my life As my baby was handed over to me Smiling at the cameras Ignorant of my tears I wonder if he would have to kill In order to protect me when I am old I would have traded the whole world For the opportunity of holding my baby @copyright |
Re: A Poem About Soldiers In Doubts:open To Criticism by nicholausian(m): 8:56am On Jul 01, 2015 |
I love this poem for being simple. When things that we want to say are important to us, we needn't mask them in poetic exuberance and language. Beautiful prose poetry on a tacky sensitive subject, that can be argued for eternity. It's wonderful that the poet presents his argument in a subjective yet objective view. Perhaps, it is too safe a view. Excellent poem nonetheless. 1 Like |
Re: A Poem About Soldiers In Doubts:open To Criticism by Nobody: 11:18am On Jul 01, 2015 |
nicholausian:u dey make my head they swell...thanks for the review. I tend to write my poems in simple language and it has its pros and cons. Thanks again |
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