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Stay With Me by toprate(m): 1:45pm On Oct 04, 2006 |
It hurts (me) like a bee sting stings (me) as salt on a wound What a hell on earth? this idea of you leaving, bring-forth You may have suffered here but I suffered most What if you stay tonight In the morning there shall be light. |
Re: Stay With Me by toprate(m): 12:45pm On Oct 06, 2006 |
hey people aren't you checking out this poem. let me have your judgement of it. |
Re: Stay With Me by money22(m): 6:17pm On Oct 07, 2006 |
its cool keep it up. i post a few of my own |
Re: Stay With Me by ifymine: 1:06am On Oct 19, 2006 |
hi,reallyt am new into the deal of nairaland's fun humm this cool pls keep it up!!! |
Re: Stay With Me by ope0lu(m): 1:41pm On Oct 21, 2006 |
hey, pple are viewing ur poem, just not posting reply, u already have 337 reads, methinks its quiet short and i dont get he context as in, what are u addressing, i'm really thinking of more than one topic right now, but its a good piece short, sharpa nd rhymes |
Re: Stay With Me by toprate(m): 1:56pm On Oct 21, 2006 |
yes quite short but I thought it's precise. just talking about a lady giving her guy a red card cause she no longer can cope with the harsh situations. So the guy now trying to plead with her to stay, that things may be as they are now but there will soon be soccur. "in the morning there shall be light" I appreciate ur critical comment |
Re: Stay With Me by thimbook2(m): 7:54pm On Oct 22, 2006 |
nice, keep it up, watch the use of lang. though, good work |
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