JIGSAWKILLAH VS SOCRATES


Voting Criteria :

Opener - 1 point

Rhymes - 2 points

Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points

Punchlines - 3 points

Flow - 1 point

Wordplays - 2 points

Closer - 1 point

Rules

- 20 lines.

- Deadline is 4pm, Thursday 17 September 2015.

- Verses should be posted by both battlers on or not later than deadline date.

- No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or recycling.

- No complaining about votes.

- A no show attracts a ban.

- No unnecessary comments

- No smearing comments about any bar OR biting accusations without proof.

- Whatever you feel is wrong with a bar or verse - please put it in your vote. Vote and state what you found wrong.

- If there's anything you need to say in defence of your verse please save them for after voting's over.

- NO argument with established vets OR voters.

- Battlers should not interject between votes and voters should just vote and leave it like that.

- Only vets and regular section posters are allowed to vote.

Goodluck!!!

Check!


Iceskidd, pop up

he's here and dropping 4pm sharp

Yo!




I'm the Last Don, on your marriage night, I'ma start the murder
Aristocrat records, Ice gon' melt as I start the Burner
We see you and see 'L in front'. . . That's how we mark the Learner
Ice can't stand the heat in this Arsenal. . . Carlos Vela

Heard yo girl loyal, and you braggin' of course
You got taste? Only thing you have is a tongue
Unwashed, the last time you talked, 'twas like Ammonia, see the damage it caused?
Who else gon' eat her bad kponmo, when it's lackin' the sauce!

Act tough. . . Mask on. . . Slash your brain
Put Spikes around your wrists, then drag the chain
Drive 4-inch nails into the bästard's vein
That's just me droppin' Ice, in a glass of 'Pagne/pain

My Nina rude to this nigga, she loyal to a fault
You never bring inventions, like Locals in a cult
You prolly gon' diss my gun bars, the fofo is for sport
We always nominate you for wackest bars, like Popo for escort

You killed me? Now I'm back, Jesus Christ
Bat your balls to the far end, it's cricket night
Your pop swells, overdose of this Fist/feast tonight
Your whole family experiencin' boxin' day, like it's a day after Christmas night.

I drive into your hood, with a nine in hand
On your bicycle, you gon' get capped, Ice cream man
Your fam gettin' burnt by shock, like it's I.C, man

I had this talk sometime back with Ice woman
She said Ice addicted to the Jacking like High Sea men
She said Ice doesn't talk until Ice see men
See said Ice is Bisexual, because then she sees Ice Semèn

Your best writtens, I best ten times when stormin'
I made the Shotty rap on stage, like it's M.I performin'

I used to respect you, you were supposed to be a better Giyazz
But Ice got whopped by Tester and them, you ended up a better bîtch äss

I got an advice for you bro, quit rap, stop foolin' yourself
You're better off stickin' a tool in yourself
Wanna find your worst enemy? Look in yourself
You can't learn from us until you start schoolin' yourself!





Jigs!

Yo, this nigga be on d1cks 24/7 he an unwise fan/
You been broke half your life, that ain't nice man/
If i was your pops I'd be tryna make a spice grind/
You'd know you def getting greens the moment 'ice land'/

Goons everywhere kidnap Niggas claiming what they aren't/
'Jig'll' jiggle get took when he tryna run an errrand/
Then we chain saw down, then split the fam in two like his separated parents/

His last two battles niggas said he disappointed but nigga brought his thing/
He got ghostwritten for against max, to make us think the dawg is sick/
With a clear loss to kinglahkay, i pondered what did the judges think/
He 'cop 4' votes, but to be fair you didn't rodney 'king'/

The blackass nigga he in love with lanicki, bro i feel fo you/
She gone be your crush forever, you got nothing to do/
She won't date a nigga who black as hell/
I mean I'll dance outside nàkèd, the day she calls 'jig a boo'/

He battled khena and got a heavy beaten/
He only got votes from me and cooger, it was clear we were kidding/
Now i aint saying khena is peter griffin/
But you lost to 'GUY', that make you the bitter chicken/

Y'all know whatever he says bout me, i'm not that/
In this shoot out i shoot till he fall back/
Capture the kid, pull out a 50 cal on this rugrat/
Tell him don't move, but if 'J walk' we kill him for crossing the wrong path/

This saw 'sore' loser is gon get a poor loss/
Try to run when he saw us/
Bury the carpenter son and make saw dust/

I beat you twice after this 3rd whooping I won't touch you again/
but fúck around and son will be maimed/
but i just taught y'all that, whatever doesn't kill you don't make you stronger but come to hunt you again

mikuz unhide his verse

Open for votes :


Ibime
Emaprince
Airmark
Elymaxiimus
Giyazz



Please vote on this.

Thanks guys!!!!!

Lol. Nice nice... ll be back

Best bars. . . .

JigsawKillah:
Yo!
I'm the Last Don, on your marriage night, I'ma start the murder
Aristocrat records, Ice gon' melt as I start the Burner
We see you and see 'L in front'. . . That's how we mark the Learner
Ice can't stand the heat in this Arsenal. . . Carlos Vela


I got an advice for you bro, quit rap, stop foolin' yourself
You're better off stickin' a tool in yourself
Wanna find your worst enemy? Look in yourself
You can't learn from us until you start schoolin' yourself!
Jigs!

Iceskidd:

Y'all know whatever he says bout me, i'm not that/
In this shoot out i shoot till he fall back/
Capture the kid, pull out a 50 cal on this rugrat/
Tell him don't move, but if 'J walk' we kill him for crossing the wrong path/

This saw 'sore' loser is gon get a poor loss/
Try to run when he saw us/
Bury the carpenter son and make saw dust/

I beat you twice after this 3rd whooping I won't touch you again/
but fúck around and son will be maimed/
but i just taught y'all that, whatever doesn't kill you don't make you stronger but come to hunt you again

Opener - 1 point - Jigs

Rhymes - 2 points - Jigs

Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points - Tie

Punchlines - 3 points - Ice

Flow - 1 point - Jigs

Wordplays - 2 points - Ice

Closer - 1 point - Ice


Ice 6 - 4 Jigs

MVGT - Ice


Jigs is way more polished as an emcee, but on punchline and wordplay criteria, those last 3 bars gave Ice the big scoring categories.

Thanks bro. More votes please.

I don't know why Jig keeps coming up short against Iceskidd. Are you underestimating the dawg or what?

Ice has got ideas, and I'm very sure if he works on his buildups, punchlines and try to be more technical, he will be a feared gladiator on here. The dude is just lazy.

But for this battle, hin try sha. His punchlines were sleek.

Jigsawkillah was just talking and "flowing for rank"

MVGT: Iceskidd

I'll have to differ with bis nd giy. I think they both did great.


The bars i felt most

jigsawkillah:

I'm the Last Don, on your marriage night,
I'ma start the murder
Aristocrat records, Ice gon' melt as I start the Burner
We see you and see 'L in front'. . . That's how we mark the Learner
Ice can't stand the heat in this Arsenal. . . Carlos Vela lool


I got an advice for you bro, quit rap, stop foolin' yourself
You're better off stickin' a tool in yourself
Wanna find your worst enemy? Look in yourself
You can't learn from us until you start schoolin' yourself! Lol

iceskidd:
The blackass nigga he in love with lanicki,
bro i feel fo you/
She gone be your crush forever, you got nothing to do/
She won't date a nigga who black as hell/
I mean I'll dance outside nàkèd, the day she calls 'jig a boo'/ lol

Y'all know whatever he says bout me, i'm not that/
In this shoot out i shoot till he fall back/
Capture the kid, pull out a 50 cal on this rugrat/
Tell him don't move, but if 'J walk' we kill him for crossing the wrong path/ daaaaaaamn!

opener = jigsaw

rhymes = jigsaw

flow = tie

mets = tie

punch = tie

w/p = iceskidd

personal = iceskidd .

Closer = jigsaw

MVT = TIE

opener: The punchline is enough to give Jigsaw this point

Rhymes: Jigsaw has better multies

similes/metaphor: Tie

punchlines: ice made use of his past glory to rewrite the present and even the future with witty punches

flow: jigsaw has it

wordplays: icekidd has more fresher ones

closer: i gave this to iceskidd, nice way to summarise and end a verse with a crescendo.

MVGT : Iceskidd

Thanks alot guys.

Icekidd wins this and makes it to the final.

mikuz:
Thanks alot guys.
Icekidd wins this and makes it to the final.

final? obesem.f pulled out?

JigsawKillah:



final? obesem.f pulled out?

No, hes in the final too.