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To Whom It May Concern. by joseph1832(m): 7:16pm On Oct 31, 2015

I need a girl,
Not any girl,
But the girl,
One who is as bright as the sun
And as white as the moon.
One that smell like the sweet fragrance
Of cherry blossoms, filling into the sky,
On a mid summer afternoon.

I need a girl,
Not any girl,
But the girl,
One who is as beautiful as Aphrodite,
And as fierce and feisty as Athena.
One who will make my heart quake
Like an earthquake, each time I look
Upon her raging beauty and fierce feature.

I need a girl,
Not any girl,
But the girl,
One who is as erudite as Adichie,
And as rugged and resilient as Akunyili,
One who will not fail to show me my errors,
Should I fail to see it in the mirror,
Because beauty without brains in a woman,
Is a total and classic waste of space.

I need a girl,
Not any girl,
But the girl,
One who is as busty as Tohpahz,
And as curvy and stout as Rokiatu,
One who is as dark and assy as Montezz,
And one who is as fare as Kachisbarbie,
One who is as appealing as hannysmilez,
And one who is as annoying as punkyVeer.

Yes I need a girl,
But not any girl,
But the very girl,
The girl who will make me dream beyond dream,
And make my voice echo from soul to soul,
The girl who isn't afraid of being another Sodom and Gomorrah,
And the girl who is at the same time, not afraid of being my veritable joy,
The girl who represents all that is the sacred feminine: wife, mother, sex and goddess.

Yes I need a girl,
Not any girl ,
But the very girl.
But will I ever find her?....

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Re: To Whom It May Concern. by joseph1832(m): 7:17pm On Oct 31, 2015

Timpaker, please don't call me a specialist. LOL.

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by Nobody: 7:29pm On Oct 31, 2015

joseph1832:
I need a girl,
Not any girl,
But the girl,
One who is as bright as the sun
And as white as the moon.
One that smell like the sweet fragrance
Of cherry blossoms, filling into the sky,
On a mid summer afternoon.

I need a girl,
Not any girl,
But the girl,
One who is as beautiful as Aphrodite,
And as fierce and feisty as Athena.
One who will make my heart quake
Like an earthquake, each time I look
Upon her raging beauty and fierce feature.

I need a girl,
Not any girl,
But the girl,
One who is as erudite as Adichie,
And as rugged and resilient as Akunyili,
One who will not fail to show me my errors,
Should I fail to see it the mirror,
Because beauty without brains in a woman,
Is a total and classic waste of space.

I need a girl,
Not any girl,
But the girl,
One who is as busty as Tohpahz,
And as curvy and stout as Rokiatu,
One who is as dark and assy as Montezz,
And one who is as fare as Kachisbarbie,
One who is as appealing as hannysmilez,
And one who is as annoying as punkyVeer.

Yes I need a girl,
But not any girl,
But the very girl,
The girl who will make me dream beyond dream,
And make my voice echo from soul to soul,
The girl who isn't afraid of being another Sodom and Gomorrah,
And the girl who is at the same time, not afraid of being my veritable joy,
The girl who represents all that is the sacred feminine: wife, mother, sex and goddess.

Yes I need a girl,
Not any girl ,
But the very girl.
But will I ever find her?....

Wow, this is a beautiful piece, Joseph, even though it says I'm annoying angry

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by Nobody: 7:41pm On Oct 31, 2015

joseph1832:
I need a girl,
Not any girl,
But the girl,
One who is as bright as the sun
And as white as the moon.
One that smell like the sweet fragrance
Of cherry blossoms, filling into the sky,
On a mid summer afternoon.

I need a girl,
Not any girl,
But the girl,
One who is as beautiful as Aphrodite,
And as fierce and feisty as Athena.
One who will make my heart quake
Like an earthquake, each time I look
Upon her raging beauty and fierce feature.

I need a girl,
Not any girl,
But the girl,
One who is as erudite as Adichie,
And as rugged and resilient as Akunyili,
One who will not fail to show me my errors,
Should I fail to see it the mirror,
Because beauty without brains in a woman,
Is a total and classic waste of space.

I need a girl,
Not any girl,
But the girl,
One who is as busty as Tohpahz,
And as curvy and stout as Rokiatu,
One who is as dark and assy as Montezz,
And one who is as fare as Kachisbarbie,
One who is as appealing as hannysmilez,
And one who is as annoying as punkyVeer.

Yes I need a girl,
But not any girl,
But the very girl,
The girl who will make me dream beyond dream,
And make my voice echo from soul to soul,
The girl who isn't afraid of being another Sodom and Gomorrah,
And the girl who is at the same time, not afraid of being my veritable joy,
The girl who represents all that is the sacred feminine: wife, mother, sex and goddess.

Yes I need a girl,
Not any girl ,
But the very girl.
But will I ever find her?....

Take mud and mould her cheesy

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by Nobody: 7:42pm On Oct 31, 2015

And one who is as fare as Kachisbarbie

*fair*

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by joseph1832(m): 8:08pm On Oct 31, 2015

PunkyVeer:

Wow, this is a beautiful piece, Joseph, even though it says I'm annoying

Thanks for liking it, and my name isn't Joseph. But really, you're annoying, not as an insult, but as a compliment. tongue

LaraiBoluwaji:

Take mud and mould her

I just might do that. Sincerely, when I'm done molding her, I hope she doesn't look like you though. grin

LOL.

LaraiBoluwaji:
And one who is as fare as Kachisbarbie

*fair*

Yes as 'fare' as Karchisbarbie. The word is a verb, not a noun.

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by Nobody: 8:25pm On Oct 31, 2015

joseph1832:
Thanks for liking it, and my name isn't Joseph. But really, you're annoying, not as an insult, but as a compliment.

I just might do that. Sincerely, when I'm done molding her, I hope she doesn't look like you though. LOL.

How is "annoying" ever a compliment? Whatever.

As beautiful as that piece is, if that's really what you're searching for, then I think you're in for a rude awakening, pal tongue

I don't believe the woman/man of our dreams exists. They're as real as the little green man. A few people may embody just SOME of his/her qualities though. Does that mean we should dismiss them just because they're not the total package? I think not. What's your take on "the one"? Just curious.

SN: I heard Halle Berry is currently on her 3rd divorce. Love truly is elusive. It doesn't make sense for someone as beautiful as her, to be separated this many times. So in the end, I guess it's really not about looks but something else. What? IDK.

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by joseph1832(m): 9:07pm On Oct 31, 2015

PunkyVeer:

How is "annoying" ever a compliment? Whatever.

As beautiful as that piece is, if that's really what you're searching for, then I think you're in for a rude awakening, pal I don't believe the woman/man of our dreams exists. They're as real as the little green man. A few people may embody just SOME of his/her qualities though. Does that mean we should dismiss them just because they're not the total package? I think not. What's your take on "the one"? Just curious.

SN: I heard Halle Berry is currently on her 3rd divorce. Love truly is elusive. It doesn't make sense for someone as beautiful as her, to be separated this many times. So in the end, I guess it's really not about looks but something else. What? IDK.

In poetry, there is something call poetic device. Saying you're annoying is just a compressed simile (metaphor) thus, I just meant you're challenging. Or haven't you met that person that challenges you in an annoying way? Yet you still like them and habor them no ill will or grudge?.

Your beliefs are not my beliefs, you believe the woman/man of your dreams don't exist, I believe they do. I know because I've seen, so I believe.

My take on 'the one' is simple: they exist, just because we haven't met/seen them, doesn't mean they're not out there, and sometimes when we see/find them, we can't be together with them, because LIFE usually have its own way of happening,

Now Halle Berry is another case entirely, love didn't elude her, she just wants to eat her cake and have it (something every woman tend to want) only she and she alone will know what she's looking for in a man. The truth is, when you find that man, will you now choose to separate from him just because he offended you? Or did something worth not forgiven? So the way I see it, what can't we forgive?. Halle Berry did not take time to ask herself what she wants in a man. That's why she keeps getting divorced.

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Re: To Whom It May Concern. by Hannysmilez(f): 9:13pm On Oct 31, 2015

joseph1832:
I need a girl,
Not any girl,
But the girl,
One who is as bright as the sun
And as white as the moon.
One that smell like the sweet fragrance
Of cherry blossoms, filling into the sky,
On a mid summer afternoon.

I need a girl,
Not any girl,
But the girl,
One who is as beautiful as Aphrodite,
And as fierce and feisty as Athena.
One who will make my heart quake
Like an earthquake, each time I look
Upon her raging beauty and fierce feature.

I need a girl,
Not any girl,
But the girl,
One who is as erudite as Adichie,
And as rugged and resilient as Akunyili,
One who will not fail to show me my errors,
Should I fail to see it the mirror,
Because beauty without brains in a woman,
Is a total and classic waste of space.

I need a girl,
Not any girl,
But the girl,
One who is as busty as Tohpahz,
And as curvy and stout as Rokiatu,
One who is as dark and assy as Montezz,
And one who is as fare as Kachisbarbie,
One who is as appealing as hannysmilez,
And one who is as annoying as punkyVeer.

Yes I need a girl,
But not any girl,
But the very girl,
The girl who will make me dream beyond dream,
And make my voice echo from soul to soul,
The girl who isn't afraid of being another Sodom and Gomorrah,
And the girl who is at the same time, not afraid of being my veritable joy,
The girl who represents all that is the sacred feminine: wife, mother, sex and goddess.

Yes I need a girl,
Not any girl ,
But the very girl.
But will I ever find her?....

Keep searching ehn,I'm sure you'd find her.

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Re: To Whom It May Concern. by joseph1832(m): 9:18pm On Oct 31, 2015

Hannysmilez:
Keep searching ehn,I'm sure you'd find her.

Read my diary, it will enlighten you. grin

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by Nobody: 9:21pm On Oct 31, 2015

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by Hannysmilez(f): 9:21pm On Oct 31, 2015

joseph1832:
Read my diary, it will enlighten you.

All righty ho!

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by Nobody: 9:23pm On Oct 31, 2015

joseph1832:
In poetry, there is something call poetic device. Saying you're annoying is just a compressed simile (metaphor) thus, I just meant you're challenging. Or haven't you met that person that challenges you in an annoying way? Yet you still like them and habor them no ill will or grudge?.

Your beliefs are not my beliefs, you believe the woman/man of your dreams don't exist, I believe they do. I know because I've seen, so I believe.

My take on 'the one' is simple: they exist, just because we haven't met/seen them, doesn't mean they're not out there, and sometimes when we see/find them, we can't be together with them, because LIFE usually have its own way of happening,

Now Halle Berry is another case entirely, love didn't elude her, she just wants to eat her cake and have it (something every woman tend to want) only she and she alone will know what she's looking for in a man. The truth is, when you find that man, will you now choose to separate from him just because he offended you? Or did something worth not forgiven? So the way I see it, what can't we forgive?. Halle Berry did not take time to ask herself what she wants in a man. That's why she keeps getting divorced.

I didn't say my beliefs were your beliefs. What do you think I asked your view for? Unlike some people, I'm aware that we aren't all wired the same, hence I will never impose my opinion on someone else.

Anyway, I see your point on the "the one" issue. And meh, all relationships imo start off feeling like something special, only to flop like a soufflè in the end

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by joseph1832(m): 9:39pm On Oct 31, 2015

PunkyVeer:

I didn't say my beliefs were your beliefs. What do you think I asked your view for? Unlike some people, I'm aware that we aren't all wired the same, hence I will never impose my opinion on someone else.

Anyway, I see your point on the "the one" issue. And meh, all relationships imo start off feeling like something special, only to flop like a soufflè in the end

Temper temper your majesty. LOL.

'All relationships" you say? That sound like you're generalizing. Lemme borrow dygeasy's signature here: "the trick isn't falling in love, but staying in love". Not all relationship start off feeling like something special and indeed, not all start off with the special feeling. So the trick is making those moments count. Remember, love is a feeling. Like almost every feeling, it must be nurtured, lemme borrow texanomaly's signature: "children, marriages and flower gardens reflect the kind of care they get".

So your opinions are your opinions, but, that doesn't make them a standard truth. I believe you get what I'm saying?.

Hannysmilez:
All righty ho!

Don't fail to lemme know your thoughts!. LOL.

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by Hannysmilez(f): 10:02pm On Oct 31, 2015

joseph1832:
Read my diary, it will enlighten you.

I ran through it and its really entertaining. I find your honesty and unbiased attitude refreshing.
Someone said "Be the change you want to see" and you obviously have begun as seen with the way you handled the pupils. I think its a good thing you began the diary,hoping to read more about "The One."

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by Nobody: 10:04pm On Oct 31, 2015

joseph1832:
Temper temper your majesty. LOL.

'All relationships" you say? That sound like you're generalizing. Lemme borrow dygeasy's signature here: "the trick isn't falling in love, but staying in love". Not all relationship start off feeling like something special and indeed, not all start off with the special feeling. So the trick is making those moments count. Remember, love is a feeling. Like almost every feeling, it must be nurtured, lemme borrow texanomaly's signature: "children, marriages and flower gardens reflect the kind of care they get".

So your opinions are your opinions, but, that doesn't make them a standard truth. I believe you get what I'm saying?.

Don't fail to lemme know your thoughts!. LOL.

Whoo, it's gonna be a long night! By "all", I didn't mean everybody's relationships. However, I'm sure everyone have high hopes with every new relationship but in the end, things don't always turn out as expected...most of the time. Or am I wrong?

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by Nobody: 10:07pm On Oct 31, 2015

:Dam the one op,search no more

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by joseph1832(m): 10:26pm On Oct 31, 2015

Hannysmilez:
I ran through it and its really entertaining. I find your honesty and unbiased attitude refreshing.
Someone said "Be the change you want to see" and you obviously have begun as seen with the way you handled the pupils. I think its a good thing you began the diary,hoping to read more about "The One."

LOL. I stopped writing the diary. I really don't think its a nice idea putting your life online, especially when you're as vociferous as me. LOL. There are people who make it their habit to use it against you. And if there's one golden rule I've learnt, its never give anyone any reason to point a finger at you.

PunkyVeer:

Whoo, it's gonna be a long night! By "all", I didn't mean everybody's relationships. However, I'm sure everyone have high hopes with every new relationship but in the end, things don't always turn out as expected...most of the time. Or am I wrong?

You're partly wrong and partly right. Read my poem "yin and yang". You'll understand.

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by Nobody: 10:29pm On Oct 31, 2015

joseph1832:
LOL. I stopped writing the diary. I really don't think its a nice idea putting your life online, especially when you're as vociferous as me. LOL. There are people who make it their habit to use it against you. And if there's one golden rule I've learnt, its never give anyone any reason to point a finger at you.

You're partly wrong and partly right. Read my poem "yin and yang". You'll understand.

Hmm, ok.

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by Hannysmilez(f): 10:48pm On Oct 31, 2015

joseph1832:
LOL. I stopped writing the diary. I really don't think its a nice idea putting your life online, especially when you're as vociferous as me. LOL. There are people who make it their habit to use it against you. And if there's one golden rule I've learnt, its never give anyone any reason to point a finger at you.

You're partly wrong and partly right. Read my poem "yin and yang". You'll understand.

Yeah,you've read the laws of power?

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by joseph1832(m): 10:53pm On Oct 31, 2015

Hannysmilez:
Yeah,you've read the laws of power?

I've read all the laws of power. Frankly, life thought me most of them. But what tickled my fancy was Ronda Bryne's "The Secret". The law of attraction isn't something one should trifle with.

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by joseph1832(m): 10:56pm On Oct 31, 2015

Jollyjoy:
:Dam the one op,search no more

LOL!. You're welcome.

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by montezz(f): 10:56pm On Oct 31, 2015

joseph1832:
I need a girl,
Not any girl,
But the girl,
One who is as bright as the sun
And as white as the moon.
One that smell like the sweet fragrance
Of cherry blossoms, filling into the sky,
On a mid summer afternoon.

I need a girl,
Not any girl,
But the girl,
One who is as beautiful as Aphrodite,
And as fierce and feisty as Athena.
One who will make my heart quake
Like an earthquake, each time I look
Upon her raging beauty and fierce feature.

I need a girl,
Not any girl,
But the girl,
One who is as erudite as Adichie,
And as rugged and resilient as Akunyili,
One who will not fail to show me my errors,
Should I fail to see it the mirror,
Because beauty without brains in a woman,
Is a total and classic waste of space.

I need a girl,
Not any girl,
But the girl,
One who is as busty as Tohpahz,
And as curvy and stout as Rokiatu,
One who is as dark and assy as Montezz,
And one who is as fare as Kachisbarbie,
One who is as appealing as hannysmilez,
And one who is as annoying as punkyVeer.

Yes I need a girl,
But not any girl,
But the very girl,
The girl who will make me dream beyond dream,
And make my voice echo from soul to soul,
The girl who isn't afraid of being another Sodom and Gomorrah,
And the girl who is at the same time, not afraid of being my veritable joy,
The girl who represents all that is the sacred feminine: wife, mother, sex and goddess.

Yes I need a girl,
Not any girl ,
But the very girl.
But will I ever find her?....

What an amazing piece! Keep searching dear...!

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Re: To Whom It May Concern. by Hannysmilez(f): 11:01pm On Oct 31, 2015

joseph1832:
I've read all the laws of power. Frankly, life thought me most of them. But what tickled my fancy was Ronda Bryne's "The Secret". The law of attraction isn't something one should trifle with.

Unfortunately,most people are ignorant of these. I was talking to someone about this the other day and she said "Ignorance is bliss." The Magic is also a nice one.
I'm one those lucky enough to have learnt from the experience of others. I didn't wait for life to teach me personally.

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by joseph1832(m): 11:17pm On Oct 31, 2015

Hannysmilez:
Unfortunately,most people are ignorant of these. I was talking to someone about this the other day and she said "Ignorance is bliss." The Magic is also a nice one.
I'm one those lucky enough to have learnt from the experience of others. I didn't wait for life to teach me personally.

Yes in a way, "ignorance is bliss" its like two side of a coin. I've learnt terrible lessons from life, and I've also learnt from other people's experience. Experience is the best teacher they say, but only when you survive that experience! That's something they forget to say. That's why I tell people that 'trust' is a luxury I really can't afford.

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by timpaker(m): 10:43pm On Nov 01, 2015

joseph1832:
Timpaker, please don't call me a specialist. LOL.

Such girl(s) can only be gotten with money received from pension

Are those monikers (ladies) your crush?

BTW, what's with you and women huh?

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by joseph1832(m): 11:11pm On Nov 01, 2015

timpaker:

Such girl(s) can only be gotten with money received from pension

Are those monikers (ladies) your crush?

BTW, what's with you and women huh?

I just pamper them that's all. Besides, you never complained about me being political before bro, so why complain about me and women? LOL.

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by Nobody: 11:06am On Nov 03, 2015

You will never find her, your preference too much abeg.

what's FARE?_ transport fare?
I know it wasn't supposed to be fair, because you know I ain't "fair".

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by joseph1832(m): 3:43pm On Nov 03, 2015

Kachisbarbie:
You will never find her, your preference too much abeg.

what's FARE?_ transport fare?
I know it wasn't supposed to be fair, because you know I ain't "fair".

Remember when I said you like to dilly dally? You've been behaving that way over a particular period of time and you do it in a specific way...

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by Nobody: 6:03pm On Nov 03, 2015

joseph1832:
Remember when I said you like to dilly dally? You've been behaving that way over a particular period of time and you do it in a specific way...

Aii

Re: To Whom It May Concern. by joseph1832(m): 10:10pm On Nov 03, 2015

Kachisbarbie:

Aii

One of these days, I guarantee you that, you will really smile. tongue

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