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Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by Ollyfad(f): 4:36pm On Mar 23, 2016
let me go and read then come back to comment but before i start reading.....i hope ntin has apnd to eric, lisa,nina, alex and esther if anytin has apnd to dem....mr ironkurtain.......*lip sealed*
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by Ollyfad(f): 11:44pm On Mar 23, 2016
one word....WOW!!! i jst finished reading and i so love every piece of it! my eric has simply gotten better! alex has improved and m sooo in love wit d new suzanne....but is it only me or nina is kinda gtin soft and m totally disappointed in barry.....wat apnd to prince chivalrous charming ordinary company he cannot leave...smh! can someone pls tell esther to pack well? eric cant pick her ova nina he wuld rada free nina first and let d old lady take care of herself bcus he knws she is gud....unlike sum wimpy nurse asking y assassins were cruelly killed! and i totally love d new chris.....geeky hacker....nice. and before its too late someone had beta tell kevin or dante dat its a really bad idea using lisa as a bait.....he myt be good but eric remains d boss and he definitely dont wanna f@uck with eric.

all in all....apart from d typos and some grammatical errors, dis is a great improvement from part one and definitely a great read. d only problem i currently av is wia it stopped ryt now.....wen is d next update pwetty pleeaassseee *making puppy face*
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by ironkurtain(m): 4:43am On Mar 24, 2016
Ollyfad:
one word....WOW!!! i jst finished reading and i so love every piece of it! my eric has simply gotten better! alex has improved and m sooo in love wit d new suzanne....but is it only me or nina is kinda gtin soft and m totally disappointed in barry.....wat apnd to prince chivalrous charming ordinary company he cannot leave...smh! can someone pls tell esther to pack well? eric cant pick her ova nina he wuld rada free nina first and let d old lady take care of herself bcus he knws she is gud....unlike sum wimpy nurse asking y assassins were cruelly killed! and i totally love d new chris.....geeky hacker....nice. and before its too late someone had beta tell kevin or dante dat its a really bad idea using lisa as a bait.....he myt be good but eric remains d boss and he definitely dont wanna f@uck with eric.

all in all....apart from d typos and some grammatical errors, dis is a great improvement from part one and definitely a great read. d only problem i currently av is wia it stopped ryt now.....wen is d next update pwetty pleeaassseee *making puppy face*


Probably the best comment so far......thanks and also thanks for pointing out the mistakes. I read through and corrected the ones i could see. smiley smiley
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by Dantee005(m): 6:24am On Mar 24, 2016
I have a feeling dat dante is going to be eric's match in skill,efficiency and brutatilty.....
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by cyberprince8(m): 6:36pm On Mar 24, 2016
Dantee005:
I have a feeling dat dante is going to be eric's match in skill,efficiency and brutatilty.....
if I hear
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by Dantee005(m): 10:14pm On Mar 24, 2016
cyberprince8:

if I hear
Lol...i did not say he was better than eric o....
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by Essyprity(f): 8:41am On Mar 25, 2016
Ollyfad:
one word....WOW!!! i jst finished reading and i so love every piece of it! my eric has simply gotten better! alex has improved and m sooo in love wit d new suzanne....but is it only me or nina is kinda gtin soft and m totally disappointed in barry.....wat apnd to prince chivalrous charming ordinary company he cannot leave...smh! can someone pls tell esther to pack well? eric cant pick her ova nina he wuld rada free nina first and let d old lady take care of herself bcus he knws she is gud....unlike sum wimpy nurse asking y assassins were cruelly killed! and i totally love d new chris.....geeky hacker....nice. and before its too late someone had beta tell kevin or dante dat its a really bad idea using lisa as a bait.....he myt be good but eric remains d boss and he definitely dont wanna f@uck with eric.

all in all....apart from d typos and some grammatical errors, dis is a great improvement from part one and definitely a great read. d only problem i currently av is wia it stopped ryt now.....wen is d next update pwetty pleeaassseee *making puppy face*
Esther park well ke? Esther is more of a mother to Eric than Nina.
Guy wey d update? How r u?
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by ironkurtain(m): 8:47am On Mar 25, 2016
Essyprity:

Esther park well ke? Esther is more of a mother to Eric than Nina.
Guy wey d update? How r u?

My sister i'm not feeling very good.....maube it is the change of weather thing. Anyway updates will be coming tomorrow night.
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by ironkurtain(m): 2:19pm On Mar 26, 2016
"I think this room is good enough", Eric said to Lisa as he dropped the keycard on the bedside table and glanced around the hotel room. "And very clean", he continued and went over to the bathroom to check on it.

Lisa dropped her weight heavily on the bed soft mattress and spread her arms apart as she laid on it face down.

"Oh i'm so tired", she moaned and closed her eyes. "And also need a shower", she murmured.

She opened her eyes and looked at Eric as he slightly pushed the window drapes aside to see the activities going on outside the fifth floor hotel room they had booked. Then she turn over and laid on her back.

Eric pick up the remote controller and switched on the flat panel t.v on the wall facing the bed. Lisa stared at him as he took off his jacket and neatly hung it on the cloth rack. Eric glanced at her as he pulled out the Smith and Wesson semi-auto handgun tucked in his waist belt and dropped the weapon on the table standing next to the window. Then he proceed to unbutton the grey tee shirt he had on.

Lisa stared at Eric as he hung the tee shirt on the cloth rack and ran her eyes all over his body. He was handsome, that was obvious, but she was more focused on his lean and mean muscular body. The tight fitted white singlet he wore, showed the features of his hard and well built chest and abs. And with every movement he made, the steely muscles in his arms and biceps seems to tell tales of the works it had put in, and the kind of hurt it could bring; the one she had witnessed a few hours ago.

Lisa smiled faintly with a distant gaze in her eyes as she fondly remembered all the good times they had when they were together. There was never a dull moment between them; always so much fun. Even during one of the missions he was sent to accomplish. She didnt know what was going on, and thought they were on a memorable date. Until Eric came into their hotel room, bleeding quite badly from a knife wound.

But her feelings for him was unfazed when Eric told her everything; the mission and what he was doing for Nina. Infact she even got crazier for him. And after treating the wound, they had the best mind blowing sex they have ever had. Perhaps it was the testosterone that was still in his system after killing a drug cartel leader and his six body guards. Or maybe it was the thoughts of her in bed and in the arms of a man who just did something dangerous. Whatever it is, it made them go hard on each other till they were too exhausted to even lift a finger.

But they still broke up. Eric reasons for breaking up were genuine and she understood and had no choice but to accept it. He didnt want to put her life in danger because of what he was doing, or make her have those looks he had seen in Esther's eyes whenever she looked at Ernest's picture because seeing the next day sunrise is not guaranteed for him.

Now it's just the two of them in a hotel room. It has being long, infact almost seven months, they had seen each other.....or stayed together in a room. Eric standing a few feet away made her wish that they could have one more time together as couples. Even if it's just for the sake of getting the feel of what they once had. And she hoped that Eric feels the same.

"So what took you to St Mary Convent?", Eric interrupted Lisa in her thought and sat on the chair next to the table.

Lisa blinked a few times when she came back to reality and heaved a deep sigh. "Something that had to do with both of your grandfathers", she said.

"My grandfathers?", Eric asked and looked at her.

"Yeah.....Andrew and Cantona", Lisa replied. "Both men really had deep hatred for each other, especially Cantona. Throughout their lives, both of them had being on the opposing sides on almost everything".

"Okay", Eric nodded and started disassembling his handgun.

"They fought against each other during the civil war", Lisa continued. "One was a lawman the other was an outlaw and always tried to kill each other".

"Okay", Eric muttered with a look of indifference and closed one eye as he peered into the handgun barrel.

What Lisa said wasnt new to him because he knew everything about his paternal and maternal grandfathers.

"So.....how is St Mary Convent connected to them?", Eric asked.

"There's this young woman by the named Diane. She was very close to Cantona when he was young and she was also his partner in all the things he did back then, Lisa replied. "And somehow she is responsible for Mr Cantona wanting to have your father killed".

Eric opened the eye slowly and looked at Lisa. Perhaps he didnt know everything about both his grandfathers because it's his first time of hearing that.

"Who is she......and how is she responsible for the Sosai wanting to kill my father", he asked.

Lisa was glad that she has gotten his attention. She turned over and her elbows sank into the bed soft mattress as she rested her chin in her palms.

"Do you know that Andrew used to be the agressive and no nonsense guy while Cantona was the cool one, even though he was crazy and the most dangerous of the two men?", she said to Eric who was listening to her attentively.

Eric shook his head and said, "Nope".

"Well, after Diane was supposedly killed, both men changed", Lisa continued. "Andrew retired from the police force and led a quiet life, while Cantona became an out of control aggressive and ruthless gangster, out to control everything he puts his mind on......the reason why he is what he is today".

"Wait.......", Eric placed the gun barrel next to the other gun parts on the table. "......what do you mean by Diane was supposedly killed?", he asked.

"At what seemed to be the height of their 'cat and mouse' games, Cantona gave himself up when Andrew and the other detectives got hold of Diane. He promised to cooperate with police in exchange for a lighter sentence for Diane. But Diane tried to escape and died in the process. Andrew was the one who shot out the tires of her getaway vehicle and she ended up crashing into the river and drowned".

Eric stared at Lisa thoughtfully.

"Andrew was the only one on the scene during that incident and the person that filed the police report", Lisa added.

"So he lied and falsified Dianes death", Eric muttered.

"Not only that", Lisa smirked and sat up on the bed. "Diane was never caught by the police. Infact she was the one that met Andrew and somehow convinced him to help her fake her own death", Lisa said excitedly.

"My guess is this Diane now stays in St Mary convent", Eric said.

"Yeah that's what i thought", Lisa sighed with a downcast gaze. "I thought she changed her name and identity to Diviana Cruz. But when i met this Diviana Cruz who happens to be a Nun in the convent, i found out she was just another person who resembled Diane. She even showed me the files and photos", she smirked again. "Your paternal grandfather really did a good job hiding Diane. That's why he took her to the convent because If anyone who knew her very well spotted her there, Diviana would be presented and the person would be told that it was a case of mistaken identity. If the authorities got involved, different thumbprints will close the case".

"But what about Diane.....where is she?", Eric asked.

"She is dead", Lisa replied.

"What?......how?", Eric was baffled.

"Diviana told me. She also revealed something else......Diane was pregnant when she came to the convent and died while giving birth to the baby. The baby itself also passed away".

Eric sighed and bowed his head. Then he picked up another part of the handgun and started inspecting it. Lisa remained silent and looked at the well manicured nails of her right hand with pursed lips.

"I thought i was very close to finding the diamonds that your maternal grandfather wants", Lisa then said to Eric after about a minute of silence. "Because i strongly believe that Diane is the one who took it. That's a very good reason for someone to fake their own death, especially if it belonged to a very dangerous person like Cantona".

Then Lisa got up from the bed and went over to where Eric was seated. "Eric i'm sorry if i disappointed you", she apologized and placed her hand on his broad shoulder. "But i will take these documents and present it to your grandfather during our interview tomorrow. Perhaps it will convince him to free your dad", she said and rubbed his shoulder gently.

"Oh it's not in anyway your fault, and you dont have to worry about convincing the old man", Eric said and started assembling the gun parts.

Lisa thought for a few seconds and glanced at the gun that was coming together, part by part. "Why do you say so?", she asked nervously.

"I'm gonna kill him tomorrow", Eric replied and looked at her as he slapped in the handgun clip and cocked back the hammer. "Why dont you go take your shower and also take a rest. You will probably have a long day tomorrow.



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Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by ironkurtain(m): 2:32pm On Mar 26, 2016
Dante adjusted his necktie with his eyes fixed at his image in the mirror of the men's restroom. He rubbed his well trimmed hair and reached for the tiny bottle of cologne in his pocket. He put a few drops in his hand and rubbed his palms together as he stared at his image in the mirror, making a few facial expressions to see the one that best fit for the occasion.

As Dante applied the cologne on his face, a man walked into the restroom. He was burly looking, quite tall and dandily dressed in a bright coloured Hawaiian tee shirt and black designer jeans with gold chains around his neck and wrist. The man whistled a tune as he stood beside Dante to check himself in the mirror and glanced at Dante with a funny look on his face. A funny look that was quite belittling and condescending.

Dante noticed it. But he returned the glance with a friendly smile on his face and continue patting his face with his palm.

The burly man ignored Dante and kept whistling the tune as he checked his face and well trimmed sideburns. Then he dipped one hand inside his jeans side pocket and took out its content; a hotel room keycard and a credit card. He dipped the other hand inside the back pocket and took out his wallet. He pushed Dante's cologne bottle aside, almost spilling its content and dropped the cards and wallet on the table.

Dante paused with his hands infront his face and looked at his cologne bottle. He glanced at the man's wallet and hotel keycard. And then looked at the man through the mirror infront of them. The man seemed less concerned. He tucked both cards inside his wallet and reached for the water faucet to wash his hands while Dante sighed and quietly adjusted the collar of his black suit jacket.

The burly man continued whistling after he was done washing his hands and waved them carelessly, sending water droplets that fell on Dante's suit jacket. Then he wiped his hands with the restroom tissue and dropped it carelessly. And it ended up falling on Dante's shoe before reaching the floor.

"Excuse me sir", Dante began as the man turned to leave.

The burly man looked over his shoulder. "What?", he demanded.

"I dont mean to be rude, but you suppose to drop the used tissue in the trashcan. Not on the floor", he said to the man quietly and politely.

"Oh really?", the man began and faced Dante. "So what are you, the f@cking janitor of this shitter?", he asked, gesturing his hand around the restroom.

"No.....i'm just saying that it is improper and untidy to leave tissues lying around the floor", Dante noted.

"Well if you dont like it there, then pick it up and put it in your f@cking mouth", the man said and left the restroom, muttering some inaudible curses at Dante.

Dante turned his face to the mirror and continue adjusting his suit with a faint smile on his face.


"Sir would you like to take your orders now?", the man dressed as a steward asked as Dante adjusted his chair and opened the menu book.

Dante took a quick glance at the menu book and looked at the man with a smile. "No. I'm waiting for someone who will be here soon", he said and closed the menu book. "I will let you know when i'm ready".

"Okay sir", the steward nodded and left to attend to another customer.

Dante smiled and glanced at the other seated guests in the upscale restaurant and the white gloved waiters waiting on them. The place has an expensive and well detailed decor with a relaxed and romantic ambience by the lighting and the man playing a beautiful and soft note on the piano.

What Dante loves most about the place is their exquisite cuisines, being a man with a good taste for food and wine. The place topped his list of his favourite restaurants in Easthill and he always goes there whenever he is in town, sometimes in the company of a client, and a few times with his target. But the restaurant management that usually give out a v.i.p card to its regular customers are not aware of his regular visits. They wouldn't know because he had never being there as the same person that came last time. But today he is not wearing a disguise because he had being working on the contract given to him by Gus without any.

Dante glanced at his gold wristwatch and took out his cellphone to check for miss calls.

There was none.

Then he placed the phone on the clean white cloth covered table beside the cutlery. Resting his clasped hands on the table, he looked to his side and saw the burly man. The man was sitting with his back at Dante and talking to a beautiful woman who wore a tight fitted blouse that showed her surgery enhanced bossoms.

The woman seems to have all her attention on the burly man with a superficial bright smile on her face as he spoke to her. The burly man was holding her hand with one hand as he spoke, and made gestures with the other hand.

Dante looked at their table and saw the remnants of the expensive lobster and seafood dinner they had eaten and the bottle of expensive wine they were chilling themselves with.

'Escort', Dante thought with a faint smile as he stared at the woman. He had dealt with alot of them and know very well how they operate; specialist in draining a man's pocket. And she was probably fleecing the man of all his worth because alot of good money would have been spent to make a woman like that to put an unending smile on her face for the burly fellow who was quite ugly. And to patiently listen to probably some garbages he is spewing as the stories of his life.

The woman seems somewhat new in the job, Dante thought as he continue staring at her. From her body movements and her superficial expressions, he could see that she was putting alot of effort to hide her disgust for the burly man.

Dante's cellphone vibrated and he almost knocked down the cutlery as he immediately reached for it. The number of the incoming call was unknown. Not what he had being expecting. But he pressed the answer button anyway.

"Hello Dante".

Dante recognized the voice but he never expected to get a call from its owner.

"Hello again sir", Dante replied in his usual polite voice and moved uncomfortably in his seat. "I never expected a call from you. I thought you said any feedback should be given to Gus, who will relay the message to you".

"Correct Mr Dante but this is of utmost importance that's why i'm calling you directly", the voice said.

"Well you called at a time that i'm too preoccupied to conduct any business", Dante said as he looked at the woman sitting with burly man and winked at her when she turned her eyes at him. "But......i will make an exception for you. So you better make it fast", he continued and gave the woman a smile with another wink.

"Good. There is another subject for you to take care of", the voice said

Dante thought for a while. "Well i'm yet to be done with the subject given to me and i intend to execute my plan tomorrow", he then said. "A distraction is the last thing that i want. You know very well how things could go.....especially for you if any kind of mistake is made", he warned.

"I understand. But this subject need to be taken care of as soon as possible".

"Then give it to Gus.....or even Hector and his band of so called killers......By the way i have seen it on the news. It's like those men are doing an excellent job in getting killed. I warned you not to rely on those fools".

"You are right, that's why i want you to do this job. The price is the same as the first subject. Double if captured alive".

"Hm.....", Dante smiled. "Sir you sound kind of desperate. Did this subject rubbed you in the wrong way?", he asked. "Anyway it is triple if i capture the subject alive".

"Why?", the voice asked.

"Well.....", Dante grunted as he moved his weight abit. "I have to know who the subject is, the person's background and the people this person is connected to", he replied.

"I'm sure that you already have all those info....Mr Dante", the voice said.

Dante stared at his cellphone with a slighly furrow eyebrow and then held it in its former position. "What do you mean?", he asked.

"The infos are the least of your problem. Taking care of the subject is the problem", the voice replied. "Anyway, half of your payment have been transferred into your bank account.....".

Almost immediately, Dante's cellphone vibrated a bank alert message.

"......the other half will be paid when the job is done", the voice continued.

Dante's cellphone alerted him of another message.

"The pictures of the subject has also been sent to you", the voice added. "Remember, this subject need to be taken care of as soon as possible.....i will contact you later".

The call ended before Dante could say anything. He glanced at his wristwatch again and dialled another number. The line rang for over a minute before the automated voice told him that the recipient is not answering the phone. He sighed and poured himself a glass of water as he checked the second text message he had recieved to see picture sent to him. He picked up the glass of water to drink as the file downloaded. And stopped midway when he saw the face of the subject. The face of his new victim.

Dante stared at the face for over a minute with the glass held halfway to his lips. Then he gently set the glass back on the table and dialled the number he had called earlier. He did it with a smile on his face.


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Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by SPDAZZY(f): 5:57pm On Mar 26, 2016
This is getting heated.
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by orijintv(m): 6:16pm On Mar 26, 2016
More ooooooo cry
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by Emmyphey(m): 7:52pm On Mar 26, 2016
GUD story
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by Orlolahdey(f): 8:28pm On Mar 26, 2016
Tanx for the update.. BT I nid moreeeee
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by omotalkie(f): 10:40pm On Mar 26, 2016
I suspect its Eric..now dis is going to be war shocked shocked Tanx for d update tho
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by shegs2009(m): 9:14am On Mar 27, 2016
THE highly Anticipated match
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by johnspurgeon014(m): 5:56pm On Mar 27, 2016
You dey spew fine yarns bros. Carry on.
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by princessadeola(f): 8:35am On Mar 28, 2016
today is holiday, add another update o, great work
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by ironkurtain(m): 11:31pm On Mar 29, 2016
shegs2009:
THE highly Anticipated match

smiley smiley
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by cyberprince8(m): 10:28am On Mar 30, 2016
l love Dis story 2 d last,nice work boss
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by dimssy(m): 11:44am On Mar 30, 2016
Thanks for the update manh... I'm starting to feel like Eric.
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by kingphilip(m): 1:13pm On Mar 30, 2016
Wow this is really a great piece and I can confidently say I enjoyed every bit of it from the part one up to the last update.

Well Eric had that tendency in him from time to be ruthless and just needed a little touch to make him become the baddest he presently is. I think he and Liza will make a perfect couple and I hope they end up together after this whole brouhaha.

Alex, I can't really remember what transformation he went through in order to become a little harder he is presently but I think he's very very far from been ruthless unlike his brother and probably Suzanne.. Please give us a little hint about what brought out the little hardness in Alex. He's presently a player and I can't point on who he should end up with

Suzanne, her own motivation in joining though very very absurd is laughable.. But I'm happy she's catching up and I'm even tempting to rate her ahead of Alex sha but lemme keep that to myself.. I hope she ends up with Chris though. He seems like a nice guy and will take care of her for us.

Chris, though he has found a very good profession for himself in which I'm sure he's gonna be making headway, I also want him to be given a little training too so that wherever he sees any obstacle he should be able to handle the minutest of them. Suzanne for him.

Esther, I think my wife should be like this.. She's the envy of the baddest of women because of her humane character in which every decent lady should have.. She's a thousand yard wife material.

Liza, I think she's just like the average day lady who loves the bad guys ahead of the good guys no matter how hard the good guys tries to impress them.. I also think she's a perfect bride for Eric and I hope they end up together if Eric survives this though

Nina, the seemingly toughest of all who was pushed into assassination because of something I can't place my hands on but I'm very sure deep inside her heart of hearts she still wants to be that innocent lady who goes her own way without hurting a fly.. I hope she finds peace and she ends up with the Philips too.

I don't really like how Eric wanna end the Sosai's life just like that sha.. I'll rather they like sit on a round table and finally become one big happy family together with his grandpa, mum his twin brother and his wife..

All in all its a great piece except for some typographical errors which I noticed but couldn't point out specifically because I wanted to see the end of the piece in no time

Ironkurtain I doff my hat for you and thank you very very much for sharing this..

But I'm earnestly waiting for my welcome updates though and that of my guests I'm going to invite in the next post of mine

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Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by kingphilip(m): 1:21pm On Mar 30, 2016
I can't just enjoy this alone without calling on others to come have some taste of how yummy it is

I'll use this medium to invite the presence of these honorable individuals to come grace this page and also come along with others..
Missmossy
Calmie
harjibolar10
MhizEnkay
Mourin
SexySapphire
Aipete2
Hawlahscho


The story actually begins from the below link which is the part 1 before this
https://www.nairaland.com/2268155/bloodline.......part-one-family

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Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by ironkurtain(m): 1:57pm On Mar 30, 2016
kingphilip:
Wow this is really a great piece and I can confidently say I enjoyed every bit of it from the part one up to the last update.

Well Eric had that tendency in him from time to be ruthless and just needed a little touch to make him become the baddest he presently is. I think he and Liza will make a perfect couple and I hope they end up together after this whole brouhaha.

Alex, I can't really remember what transformation he went through in order to become a little harder he is presently but I think he's very very far from been ruthless unlike his brother and probably Suzanne.. Please give us a little hint about what brought out the little hardness in Alex. He's presently a player and I can't point on who he should end up with

Suzanne, her own motivation in joining though very very absurd is laughable.. But I'm happy she's catching up and I'm even tempting to rate her ahead of Alex sha but lemme keep that to myself.. I hope she ends up with Chris though. He seems like a nice guy and will take care of her for us.

Chris, though he has found a very good profession for himself in which I'm sure he's gonna be making headway, I also want him to be given a little training too so that wherever he sees any obstacle he should be able to handle the minutest of them. Suzanne for him.

Esther, I think my wife should be like this.. She's the envy of the baddest of women because of her humane character in which every decent lady should have.. She's a thousand yard wife material.

Liza, I think she's just like the average day lady who loves the bad guys ahead of the good guys no matter how hard the good guys tries to impress them.. I also think she's a perfect bride for Eric and I hope they end up together if Eric survives this though

Nina, the seemingly toughest of all who was pushed into assassination because of something I can't place my hands on but I'm very sure deep inside her heart of hearts she still wants to be that innocent lady who goes her own way without hurting a fly.. I hope she finds peace and she ends up with the Philips too.

I don't really like how Eric wanna end the Sosai's life just like that sha.. I'll rather they like sit on a round table and finally become one big happy family together with his grandpa, mum his twin brother and his wife..

All in all its a great piece except for some typographical errors which I noticed but couldn't point out specifically because I wanted to see the end of the piece in no time

Ironkurtain I doff my hat for you and thank you very very much for sharing this..

But I'm earnestly waiting for my welcome updates though and that of my guests I'm going to invite in the next post of mine


Bro, i have one question. Are you a psychologist by profession?.....or perhaps a mind reader. Being amazed by this comment is an understatement. Everything you said above is exactly what i had in mind when i started this story. Infact it gave me alot of ideas. Thanks man......this is by far the best comment i have ever read.

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Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by kingphilip(m): 2:38pm On Mar 30, 2016
ironkurtain:



Bro, i have one question. Are you a psychologist by profession?.....or perhaps a mind reader. Being amazed by this comment is an understatement. Everything you said above is exactly what i had in mind when i started this story. Infact it gave me alot of ideas. Thanks man......this is by far the best comment i have ever read.
thanks for the commendation boss.

I just poured out my mind nothing more and how it should go and not that I'm a mind reader

Please are we going to get a welcome update today. Pleeeeaaassseeee
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by ironkurtain(m): 3:34pm On Mar 30, 2016
kingphilip:
thanks for the commendation boss.

I just poured out my mind nothing more and how it should go and not that I'm a mind reader

Please are we going to get a welcome update today. Pleeeeaaassseeee

Bro its not possible today......i wish i could, but i cant put up an update today. Pls bear with me
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by kingphilip(m): 3:58pm On Mar 30, 2016
ironkurtain:


Bro its not possible today......i wish i could, but i cant put up an update today. Pls bear with me
so when should we be expecting another sir

BTW cute baby you've got
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by ironkurtain(m): 4:12pm On Mar 30, 2016
kingphilip:
so when should we be expecting another sir

BTW cute baby you've got

Saturday......but i have to write hard cos i finish work by 9 pm. And the baby is my daughter.....she is a few months old and also the reason i dont post updates regularly. smiley
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by calmie(f): 2:22pm On Mar 31, 2016
Thanks boo .... Im on it now! grin grin grin




kingphilip:
I can't just enjoy this alone without calling on others to come have some taste of how yummy it is

I'll use this medium to invite the presence of these honorable individuals to come grace this page and also come along with others..
Missmossy
Calmie
harjibolar10
MhizEnkay
Mourin
SexySapphire
Aipete2
Hawlahscho


The story actually begins from the below link which is the part 1 before this
https://www.nairaland.com/2268155/bloodline.......part-one-family

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Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by Mourin(f): 5:41pm On Mar 31, 2016
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by ironkurtain(m): 8:06am On Apr 01, 2016
Fellow Nairalanders, it is obvious that we are now heading to the final stage or rather final chapters of this story. I know that some of my followers seem to be losing interest in this write up due to the slow 'once in a week update', which i'm really really sorry for. So i have a proposition to make. Can you guys wait till i finish the entire story then i make what i call a 'super weekend updates'. Updates on Friday, Saturday and Sunday nights.

Though i cant say when it will be finished, but a day or two before that weekend, i will let you guys know through Mentions. By doing so i'm sure you guys will enjoy the story more and know how it all ends, than waiting and waiting for the next update.

Pls do let me know what you think and other suggestions are welcomed. Have a happy weekend smiley smiley
Re: Bloodline.......part Two[Blood And Diamonds] by Emmyphey(m): 8:44am On Apr 01, 2016
ironkurtain:
Fellow Nairalanders, it is obvious that we are now heading to the final stage or rather final chapters of this story. I know that some of my followers seem to be losing interest in this write up due to the slow 'once in a week update', which i'm really really sorry for. So i have a proposition to make. Can you guys wait till i finish the entire story then i make what i call a 'super weekend updates'. Updates on Friday, Saturday and Sunday nights.

Though i cant say when it will be finished, but a day or two before that weekend, i will let you guys know through Mentions. By doing so i'm sure you guys will enjoy the story more and know how it all ends, than waiting and waiting for the next update.

Pls do let me know what you think and other suggestions are welcomed. Have a happy weekend smiley smiley

i don't know what others think but its ok by me
JUST MENTION EMMYPHEY

btw ur story is really great

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