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A Word For All by devilmaycry: 12:16am On Nov 17, 2015 |
The path crazy . When you stay and think how the rich oppress the poor lately . Their lands taken . Itz heart breaking... And what's the Law saying ? . They got nothing to say...cos its all mixed up like when you love making . The government??..we should stop blaming . But politicians that dnt care...karma is all waiting . Cos if they think they gon remain high forever....like walls of jericho,they will fall greatly . Saw a beggar today...he coughed heavy . Cars passed by..no one cared..my heart raced me . Tears flowed...he could be your father..yet it seem the world hate him . Had just 70bucks..I dropped it..he smiled,thanked and waved plenty . A burden dropped...I prayed gravely . Why have a house with 20 bedrooms..live alone..and yet many stay wailing . No shatter and food..not even a pay waiting . How many cars you gat ?..10 or more...yet you always pass by wen a fellow trekks daily . Or worst u do..wind down..and then hailings . but sir...if you tink you way ready . Wen trumpet blows...and you tink you gat your play steady . Dnt be suprised you won't make it . Or start crying when you see others getting there....even the poor ones u neglected or taught they stayed lazy . Wait...ever crossed your mind what our so called pastors been up praising . They create societies...for more money..that's how they operating . Tithes actually going wer.. ..next we see their pockets weight sink . Or bad...a foreign account,they stuff plenty . Even those truly serving God aint really coperating . I mean...look at some of ur church members...financially help the poor praying . oohh..sowiee..u gat 7 private jets..that wil fly you to heaven?..am jst saying . Its good to live comfortable...but why build a school even some of ur members cnt attend..sir that's tough way in . Aint judging tho..who am I to judge?..really..m jst saying . But Let's call a spade a spade....and stop framing . Ever sat down to think...what's your life rating ? . Outta 10...you either two,one or half may b . Think life all about the sex....money even blind dating . Smoke weed...smoke shisha ..til ya heart failing . Rapp and dump one gal today..pick another tomao..nigg is dah a new work...pakaging? . A mechanic...or bricklayer...yet you tryna be fly claiming . Work after six..u bath quickly then jump on FB and post how u left your office work early . Or how ur car got scratched...then u happy as you start seeing "likes" many . But bro...jst one question...when blocks start getting tyres lately . Sell tomatoes in the market...yet you say "am working" in an oil factory . School in one dead poly...but all we knw is "am a graduate" frm harvard..ooh Lord save me ! . How about we stop been fake on social medias...and gladly be... . Who we really are.....but we hardly will . Cos Everyone wnts "high shoulder"...they mad with silk . Wait...I changed ryhmes??...forget that...what matters how my message badly stick . Remember how a lil boy neva got scared to speak the truth...even wen his dad beat him . this is the message...am passing please . What have I forgotten...emm..ohh..you knw mourinho ??..yes they sacking him . Bye |
Re: A Word For All by Nickydrake(m): 12:58am On Nov 17, 2015 |
The cadence of your piece suggests a rap song rather than a poem. Is that what you intended? The subject-matter is one on we can never be admonished enough. Well done for making an effort. Don't stop. And if you are looking to improve the quality of your output, I would suggest that you begin by paying a little more attention to your spelling and grammar. Spell words in full and punctuate appropriately and with purpose. Most serious people are repulsed by textspeak -- dat iz, writin lk dz iz nt gon do u any gud. Ppl wnt lk to read ur wrk. I wish you the best. 1 Like |
Re: A Word For All by devilmaycry: 6:18am On Nov 17, 2015 |
Okkay bro
Note taken
Thanks tho |
Re: A Word For All by Osaze20091: 6:40am On Nov 17, 2015 |
This one of the best poem have read lately.
Sincerely it the best am just saying thumb up bro |
Re: A Word For All by devilmaycry: 10:44am On Nov 17, 2015 |
Thank yoU bro |
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