[size=15pt]Giyazz Vs Pdizzle[/size]

Topic:- Emotions My Minions:

Here,each emotion should be embodied as a personality,Fear/anger/sadness/joy/disgust/trust/surprise/anticipation/courage/pity e.t.c ..
You being the Kingpin in a city(where the competition is high)they all under your control,your verse should be in a chain with at least 5 emotions,on how you can use them collectively into scooping out the competition..

Criteria
Creativity - 2 points

Entertainment - 2 points

Rhymes - 2 points

Flow - 1 point

Consistency on Topic - 3 points

Vocabulary - 2 points

Emotion - 2 point

Imagery - 2 points


Your verses MUST be in line with the topic.


*The maximum number of lines for each verse should be 24Lines.

*Deadline is 6pm, 4th December 2015

*Verses should be posted by both battlers on or not later than the deadline date.

*No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or recycling.

*No complaining about votes.

*A no show attracts a ban.

*No unnecessary comments.

*No arguments with established vets OR voters.

*Only Judges and Vets are allowed to vote.


Goodluck...

Check

There's a limit you reach tryna breach my schemes/ your gaze on my throne, I suggest you retract it/ jealousy enhances into hate and I'm caught in between that shìt/
Internet chumps won't get the picture, but wait till I regrann it/
It's not what you see... You don't see the nails on my stool?/
you see the spikes? That's on you/ ignite ya mind and move/
Heart of a young simba/ wonder how my butt's intact?/
I'll leave a clue. . . this same seat my pops been sat/ hence this trust/ convey me over these bums/
But I fear and won't keep calm/ yes of course. . . another reason my stay's reformed/
Driven by emotions to defeat ordinance/ viewed in different shades like i'm weilding holograms/ but contained in one mission; stimulating dominance/
They curiosity is preyed on every second/ finding a gash to teach me a lesson/ end up coming up short. . . as long as my love for power remains my weapon/
Hovering over these lots/ plastic feelings; bended over distrust/
Religion veil or cover me not/ to the element of surprise. . . I'd rather strip every atom of idea on how Jehovah sees us/
So emotions is enslaved warriors like the unsullied/ followers in chains but practically not bullied/ just doing what the bearer demands; similar to truck pushing/
Disgusted by your guts/ you fiend for hell till the fire burns/
When blood of peasants is paid for salvation of the higher born/
Your cause becomes a curse when my wrath's involved/ beaming out my self from the inside. . . provoked by your words/
You shook me with your actions and I feel pain/ but this feeling is fed upon rather than restrained/ vests for my skin since weakness been detained/
I chew the missiles you send this way/ scooping out you fools and whatever you generate/
Every threat strikes an emotion and it becomes my minion. . . so how the fūck you gonna penetrate??

Will vote tomorrow.

So ordinary guys like us cant vote?

Both textcess had a rare tradition I find intriguing. Well, I admire their creativity but Giyazz had more balance in entertainment and imagery.

There is a greatness in every man ....Pdizzle takes possession of valuable quotes that every inclined mind we raise a glass to.Oh! I cannot turn a blind eye to Giyazz metaphors which pleases my heart.

Take a close look at both verses ...From my own perspective

Pdizzle : I like your rare pattern to the art but I find it more poetry than rap . There is a first time to everything we do ...You did great though.

Giyazz : You have the lyrical prowess of a poet ....My sincere thoughts is that you always fly high in poetry than rap battle.I liked Pdizzle openings more than yours ...You had a foot on every criteria but some were on a lighter note.

My 2cents contribution ...Y'all did great so far ...This what I call competition compared to the other poetry battles which has been one-sided .The reason I find most people not wanting to comment was because they find it close. Well, the wrath of God will be upon me ...if I say I wasn't entertained.

There is an in house rule ...I'm just among the audience so my voting won't be necessary since the judges has a standing.

Oh! my bad... I had to read the OP statement once again ...OK, my vote sure needed.

Pdizzle : You had a preference to your emotions ....Already, explained to the audience but that suspense was missing. Well, you have forgotten that you were a poet artist . You will make a very good poetic rapper if you can work more on imagery and taking risk with concepts. In between you had some nice quotes and better opening. Hmmm, to my natural thinking ...Giyazz was better but you did great given newbies HOPE not to shy away .

Giyazz : You had this consciousness and knowledge that was outstanding ...It fascinates me how you have grown to be more dangerous. Well, I liked Pdizzle poetic words than yours ...You should take that with a smile.

I had to modify my post to give my sincere verdict ....In my minds eye I didn't want to vote but for the love of the art and that of dead poets.( just joking)

My Votes goes to Giyazz because he had a better drawing coupled with his rap technique . We cannot forget that our respect grows for Pdizzle also.

#Respect

Creativity Giyazz
Entertainment Pdizzle
Imagery Pdizzle
Rhymes Giyazz
Consistency Tie
Vocabulary I don't really know what this means here
Flow Both
Emotion Giyazz

Giyazz, this is poetry not rap. Punching is not what really matters here. Every line should be a quote. Every word must be there for a reason. Rhyme is not everything here. Pdizzle sounded more poetic. That's how poetry verses are framed. The gap between stanzas helps in identifying when a new emotion takes overt as seen in his. If your verse is going to just a stanza then you should give a pointer to the emotion operational at any time.

Pdizzle, normally I don't fault single rhymes but if you are going to beat anyone in the rhyming category you have to have more of it. I wonder how Uriah and Fire rhyme. What you did is poetry just work on your rhymes and you'd be the King of Poets.

I'll give the win to Giyazz simply because his own verse is more assimilated to the hip hop/rap style. In a poetic setting, Pdizzle would have won this bout hands down because he satisfied every criteria listed. This is even why I don't want to use the criteria. His rhymes are not just better but superior to Giyazz's; (it's not just about multies but perfection) his flow is just on point and he is consistent with the topic. I take the blame of not introducing him to our style on here. Good work, Pdizzle! I'd advise you to start reading verses on FFR to learn out style and get fully incorportated. Nice showing, bro.

MVGT - Giyazz!

I like Pdizzles verse . . .

Better late than never! 'Giyazz' probably won this by sticking to the script but this 'pdizzle' guy also 'came harder than a _porn star' to the party! He is one to watch! Great rhymes, imagery and content by both parties! Best battle of the tourney so far!

Mvgt: giyazz!