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I Am Your Reliquary by llaykorn: 5:53pm On Dec 09, 2015
I never thought I could hunch over to write a love poem.
My pen is saying all the truths I'd rather keep to me.
Every word I never uttered made you felt I had left
Life's hustles are none truly but some complicated mess
Dividing us into boundaries ever ever impossible
Again, your mind has faltered; you have doubted me.

If you could see inside my soul; inside my heart....

See, you might not have said half of what you said.
True you wouldn't know that if I could have a wish,
I would wish to wake up everyday to the warmth of your
Lips on my cheek; touch of your fingers on my skin.
Laughing softly in my ears, curled up, lost in our sins.

Life is worthless without a soul to remember
Or even meaningless without, without a sister.
V'e found a sister in you, a mother, a soul t' remember
Everything, anything, all I've ever wanted ever!

You are always with me in a smile, a memory, a feeling.
Or even in one of those moments you're missing.
Ur scent is always there; you're always with me.

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Re: I Am Your Reliquary by llaykorn: 5:58pm On Dec 09, 2015
joseph1832, did I get this right? grin
Re: I Am Your Reliquary by joseph1832(m): 7:32pm On Dec 09, 2015
llaykorn:
joseph1832, did I get this right? grin
You wrote this in free verse. Its cool, but its not arranged properly.

Em, you're still a virgin right? grin LOL.
Re: I Am Your Reliquary by timpaker(m): 8:10pm On Dec 09, 2015
Hmm mm.. . Someone is in love. grin

Bro. Joe help him make it romance-erotica. cool

Just kidding mehn.

Nice use of words
Re: I Am Your Reliquary by joseph1832(m): 11:16pm On Dec 10, 2015
timpaker:
Hmm mm.. . Someone is in love. grin

Bro. Joe help him make it romance-erotica. cool

Just kidding mehn.

Nice use of words
So na only romance-erotica nahim I sabi abi. Well don oh oga tim, well don eh. LOL.
Re: I Am Your Reliquary by timpaker(m): 11:48pm On Dec 10, 2015
joseph1832:
So na only romance-erotica nahim I sabi abi. Well don oh oga tim, well don eh. LOL.


No ooooo. I didn't say so ooooo. Just that you're a specialist when it comes to such genre/form.

Re: I Am Your Reliquary by llaykorn: 11:52pm On Dec 10, 2015
joseph1832:
You wrote this in free verse. Its cool, but its not arranged properly.

Em, you're still a virgin right? grin LOL.

What is virgin? Is it Virgin Airways? No, I don't work with Virgin Airways. smiley

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Re: I Am Your Reliquary by llaykorn: 11:54pm On Dec 10, 2015
timpaker:
Hmm mm.. . Someone is in love. grin

Bro. Joe help him make it romance-erotica. cool

Just kidding mehn.

Nice use of words

Thank you, sir! cheesy
Re: I Am Your Reliquary by joseph1832(m): 12:15am On Dec 11, 2015
llaykorn:


What is virgin? Is it Virgin Airways? No, I don't work with Virgin Airways. smiley
LMAO. I asked if you've ever had sexual intercourse? tongue.

You aint gonna elude this that easy bruv. tongue

timpaker:



No ooooo. I didn't say so ooooo. Just that you're a specialist when it comes to such genre/form.

Is that right? Tell me something oga Tim, and I was thinking you didn't even read such genre/form of poetry oh. LOL.
Re: I Am Your Reliquary by danbrowndmf(m): 6:41am On Dec 11, 2015
llaykorn:


What is virgin? Is it Virgin Airways? No, I don't work with Virgin Airways. smiley
LOOOOOLS Mad man.cheesy
Re: I Am Your Reliquary by llaykorn: 2:41pm On Dec 11, 2015
joseph1832:
LMAO. I asked if you've ever had sexual intercourse? tongue.

Have I ever had sexual intercourse with what or whom? If you're talking about goats, I've never had sexual intercourse with one. smiley

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Re: I Am Your Reliquary by joseph1832(m): 8:40pm On Dec 11, 2015
llaykorn:


Have I ever had sexual intercourse with what or whom? If you're talking about goats, I've never had sexual intercourse with one. smiley
Oh I didn't know you considered having sexual intercourse with goats.

Tell me, which type of goat did you consider, the he or the he? tongue

Don't act dumb bro, your moniker aint thesonofmack.
Re: I Am Your Reliquary by GIYAZZ(m): 7:26pm On Dec 19, 2015
Studying you. . . wink
Re: I Am Your Reliquary by llaykorn: 7:31pm On Dec 19, 2015
Re: I Am Your Reliquary by GIYAZZ(m): 7:43pm On Dec 19, 2015
Re: I Am Your Reliquary by llaykorn: 8:11pm On Dec 19, 2015
GIYAZZ:
Excuse me undecided I rather do my research myself. Swerve tongue

Na this one you dey smoke for inspiration? grin

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