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King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by Nobody: 7:17pm On Dec 11, 2015 |
Poets: Llaykorn and MuhdG Poem Title: The Nigerian God Look at how a Nigerian worships his god or God. The hypocrisy involved, the ignorance and wisdom of all adherents. The believe in one source but the hypocritical hatred for different tribes. The worship of men of God as the worship of God. The disturbances of loud speakers and the blessing from a good God with someone's missing or misplaced money. Every evil associated with the Nigerian way of worshipping God. Creativity - 2 points Entertainment(Enjoyability) - 2 points Rhymes - 2 points Flow - 1 point Consistency on Topic - 3 points Vocabulary - 2 points (depending on topic) - 2 points Emotion - 2 points Imagery - 2 points Your verses MUST be in line with the topic. *The maximum number of lines for each verse should be 24Lines, No more, No less!!! *Deadline is 6pm, 11th of December 2015 *Verses should be posted by both battlers on or not later than the deadline date. *No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or recycling. *No complaining about votes. *A no show attracts a ban. *No unnecessary comments. *No smearing comments about any bar OR biting accusations without proof. *If there's anything you need to say in defence of your poem/verses please save them for after voting's over. *No arguments with established vets OR voters. *Battlers should not interject between votes and voters should just vote and leave it like that. *Only vets and regular section posters are allowed to vote.
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Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by llaykorn: 7:29pm On Dec 11, 2015 |
The heedless thirst to acheive consistent holy goals Leaves my kinsmen vulnerable to men of lowly souls Men acting like they had a glimpse through Moses' scrolls But in truth they raising veiled banners for the devil Carving followers into hate objects to get them in heaven So they don't respect people's rights or learn to be gentle I know there should be more dopeness hidden in these lines But some church vigil kept me awoke throughout the night I even have a depressed mind; I couldn't bear the sight When they posted pics of the lil' kid shredded and torn Explosives strapped on her to leave her helpless and burn If it's God that makes people sefless and love Why would someone kill a hundred yelling God is great? Or they mean to say that in the eyes of God, love is hate? Men with Holy Books leaving lil girls with bloodied fates I cry for grown men walking around with baby minds Cringing when the pastor yells "pay the tithe"! Dues for the church and they aint even make the dime. The sordid pastor rides in a late-model Highlander Jeep While dust has turned his old-model white sandals green Running behind the greedy men "Hi Father, please" But guards won't let him near the man he calls Daddy Think! Think bro! You aint a kid; stop that shît! Hahah...Kiddy mindsets! Stinking mindsets; lock that pit! 5 Likes 4 Shares |
Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by Nobody: 7:35pm On Dec 11, 2015 |
Enjoy my half done verse May God bless . . . Help . . . Protect . . . Amen . . . Congregations answering (amen) as leaders end preaches Feeling holy in heart, makes you feel you could bend bridges They eyes teary, clinch together as they catch feelings But once the foot's out they dry up, claiming “ain't That silly” Go to church, go to mosque, pray to God to make that money come Promise you'll give alms and help others when conflict comes But when it's right at your door step, you try to pull some funny stunts Coz Beggars stomachs still same form as their unfilled cups Few naira notes for your cups weren't part of my pay Defying our religious teaching is the act of the day As they bounce off, look sideways and walkaway What u give is yours that's what my religion teaches But that aint logical, i rather keep every dime n still have ma riches Feelings get crushed when my brother aint my brother And blood covers land when ma brother gets me smothered ** Some text missing ** 4 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by Nobody: 7:49pm On Dec 11, 2015 |
Nice one, guys. I will call the judges soon. Writers block is very bad. |
Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by Nobody: 8:13pm On Dec 11, 2015 |
Open For Votes.. Judges Sinizia Funlord Alexpissu Adanna28 Kr0ne Guykhena |
Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by kr0ne(m): 8:38pm On Dec 11, 2015 |
Creativity - 2 points - Tie Entertainment(Enjoyability) - 2 points - Tie Rhymes - 2 points - Tie Flow - 1 point - Tie Consistency on Topic - 3 points - Tie These guys acted like twin brothers the way they matched every criterion with almost the same rhyme scheme and script layout. They both came prepared IMO. But I'm giving the W to Llaykorn for completing his lines. MuhdG was just a lazy lad MVGT - Llaykorn! 1 Like |
Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by Nobody: 8:55pm On Dec 11, 2015 |
kr0ne:Lmao I'm even surprised i got some points 1 Like |
Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by Nobody: 8:55pm On Dec 11, 2015 |
Reyginus:Very bad I tell u |
Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by funlord(m): 9:16am On Dec 12, 2015 |
Okay battle! I have to say llaykorn did quite well in delivering a more rounded and entertaining rap poem! Was not on the level of his 1st poem in the group stages but all join! Muhdg? Why did your effort seem as if you did not "bring it"? Incomplete? Wtf? Anyway you get an "a" for effort but not much else! "If you could not be bothered to complete the task/, you know there is no way in victorys glare you deserve to bask/"... ( Shege funlord! Even while dropping verds he still spits flames!) LOL Creativity - llaykorn Entertainment - llaykorn Rhymes - muhdg Flow - llaykorn Consistency on Topic - tie Vocabulary - llaykorn Emotion - muhdg Imagery - llaykorn MVGT; LLAYKORN Best graph [ by llyakorn]: "Why would someone kill a hundred yelling God is great? Or they mean to say that in the eyes of God, love is hate? Men with Holy Books leaving lil girls with bloodied fates!" Best graph [muhdg] "Coz Beggars stomachs still same form as their unfilled cups Few naira notes for your cups weren't part of my pay Defying our religious teaching is the act of the day" |
Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by sinizia: 9:54am On Dec 12, 2015 |
MVGT: Llaykorn. Muhdg was good as well and would have won but he brought an incomplete verse to the arena. Nice one guys. |
Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by Nobody: 3:16pm On Dec 12, 2015 |
More votes please. I will close the process by 7:30pm. |
Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by Guykhena(m): 4:56pm On Dec 12, 2015 |
Llaykorn verse was amazing on point with the topic,ironically MuhdG verse was great also,but just when his verse was getting more interesting he just stopped . I'm sure if his verse was complete he would have given llaykorn a run for his money. MVGT-Llaykorn |
Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by Nobody: 7:49pm On Dec 12, 2015 |
For the obvious fact that MuhdG didn't complete his verse Llaykorn wins. Thread Closed. Llaykorn advances to Semi Final. |
Re: King Of Poets Quarter Final: Llaykorn Versus Muhdg by Nobody: 10:04pm On Dec 12, 2015 |
Congratulations ma man! Go get the title |
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