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Sense Of Patriotism! A Nigerian Use The National Pledge As A Poem by JimsonJaat001(m): 2:21pm On Jan 09, 2016 |
I pledge to Nigeria,my country To face anything on her behalf with courage,effontery and bravery To stand by- whether I am less needed or she needs me most To make her Great Britain; no matter it cost. To be faithful,loyal and honest To do within my power for her nothing but my best To always hold The Truth as my warrant To run for her whether notice or unnoticed,progressive errant. To serve Nigeria with all my strength To give her one hundred percent of me with no curve or bent To always seek the best for her as long as I breath To hold her to my very heart and part with it not even for a second breath. To defend her unity No matter how the future seem cloudy,stormy and full of uncertainty To regard every Nigeria's son and daughter as my kin To do for them the very best of my very self,and if possible everything. To uphold her honour and glory To add my success story to the book that carry her heroes' story I vow to make Julius Caesar's victory and sacrifice for her And to be one of those that live and die for her. So help me,God To be for her,till the last drop of my blood and breath,like a spinal cord To do those good and sweet things I plan to do for Mother Nigeria To fulfill my vow before I breath my last for my country,Nigeria. - Jimson Jaat Taofik |
Re: Sense Of Patriotism! A Nigerian Use The National Pledge As A Poem by obstead200(m): 8:32pm On Jan 11, 2016 |
JimsonJaat001:nice job man. But I think u shud work more on perfecting the rhyme. All those repetition of rhyming words could be removed if u think carefully. Check the bolded for a sample modifications |
Re: Sense Of Patriotism! A Nigerian Use The National Pledge As A Poem by JimsonJaat001(m): 12:57pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
Noted. Thanks for this obstead200: |
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