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12 Steps to Creating Suspense by DaVinci24(m): 11:54am On Jan 22, 2016 |
Your heart is slamming against your rib cage, your fingertips are moist and you turn another page. The antagonist is setting up a trap. You wish you could do something to prevent the protagonist from walking into it, but you can’t. You’re helpless, totally at the mercy of the writer. All you can do is turn another page. If you’ve ever felt this way reading a book, then the writer has done a great job of creating suspense. If you continue to feel this way until the last page, the writer has also done a great job maintaining it. That’s no easy feat, as you’ll discover when trying to write a suspense thriller. 1. Dramatic Irony Let the reader see the points of view of both the protagonist and antagonist. This narrative mode is known as the third person omniscient. It will allow the reader to see when the protagonist is making a mistake and about to run into trouble. Let the reader see the man who is in the bush waiting in ambush for the protagonist who thinks he is alone. The reader will be helpless to prevent the disaster that's coming and so wants to know what happens next. Does the protagonist escape? Does he get killed? Does he get kidnapped? 2.Create a really good protagonist/hero. Katniss Everdeen from the Hunger Games novels by Suzanne Collins happens to be one of my favorite. She becomes the really good hero in just nine pages. How? She volunteered herself to save her sister. Let your protagonist do something unselfish but difficult. Let your hero be the hero and don't let it happen easily. Create a truly heroic protagonist that the reader will identify with. Give him or her allies, enemies, quirks and skills. The reader will worry about what might happen to her. Maintaining suspense is easier when the reader cares about the protagonist. 3.Use time limits. Another key way to build suspense is through the use of time. The protagonist should be working against the clock, and the clock should be working for the bad guys. In Rogue Nation, the protagonist Ethan Hunt has to get some files from an underwater reservoir but he can only hold his breath for a shorter time. This makes him work and think faster. Let the protagonist work under limited time. Now that's a tool for suspense. 4. Keep the stakes high for the protagonist. This doesn’t necessarily mean the story’s hook has to be about global annihilation. But the story must be about a crisis that’s devastating to the protagonist’s world, and the hero must be willing to do anything to prevent it from occurring. Therefore, the story could be about a father trying to rescue his wife and child from an impending flood, or an innocent man who’s framed for murder going on the run to establish his innocence. The crisis has to be important to ensure readers will empathize with the protagonist. Whatever it is that the protagonist is trying to accomplish in the story, failure means utter devastation to everything the protagonist cares about. 5.Complicate matters. Pile on the problems. Give the protagonist more things to do than he can handle. The hero has to be stretched wafer-thin. If you’ve ever seen one of those old music-hall acts where spinning plates are perched on top of flimsy bamboo poles, and there’s some poor guy running himself ragged trying to keep all the plates from crashing down, well, that’s how it should be for the protagonist. The hero should be that guy trying to keep all those plates spinning, while the antagonist is forever adding another plate to the line. By the end of the book, the protagonist should be just barely preventing everything from crashing to the ground. Let’s use The Altman Code and 24 Hours as examples. In The Altman Code, Jon Smith’s problems are further complicated by having to break the president’s father out of a Chinese prison camp. In 24 Hours, Will and Karen Jennings’ daughter is diabetic, and the kidnappers don’t have her insulin. Both these examples add another layer of complication to their respective stories You can read all about it on my book titled 12 secrets to creating suspense. Free download links will be made available soon.
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