classicaldon:
Goodday NLers... This actually is my first post here.

I had problems accessing my former Linkedin profile, so I decided to create a new one. My profile summary has been receiving rave reviews and I decided to share it with my NLers to know their take on it.

It's a bit lengthy though but just patiently peruse through and rate me over 100... Bashing is allowed!
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I am a graduate from the Department of Microbiology. I am proficient in the usage of Microsoft Suite, Internet and also possess basic knowledge in web designing (HTML, Wordpress) and blogging. My excellent communication skills and elocution has made me a great Front Desk Officer in which I also featured as a Customer Service Representative. My outstanding interpersonal relationship and persuasive skills with both colleagues and clients alike made me excel in previous job roles. I am a go-getter who believes in reaching desired goals before deadlines and does not give space to mediocrity; always striving to be the best I can be. I am also a good teamplayer, always contributing my best to the advancement of the team and organization, thereby providing splendid results. My meticulous and humble nature has made me a good follower while my choleric part has made me a good leader in various offices I have served especially religious activities. I might not be the best there is but I am investing on myself by reading and socializing to be able to operate at the best level I can be.

classicaldon:
Goodday NLers... This actually is my first post here.

I had problems accessing my former Linkedin profile, so I decided to create a new one. My profile summary has been receiving rave reviews and I decided to share it with my NLers to know their take on it.

It's a bit lengthy though but just patiently peruse through and rate me over 100... Bashing is allowed!
...
This is poorly written statement; please focus on your achievements if any and how you can be a success on your career path. Stop stating generic attributes they u can't justify. If u need help on this let me know.
I am a graduate from the Department of Microbiology. I am proficient in the usage of Microsoft Suite, Internet and also possess basic knowledge in web designing (HTML, Wordpress) and blogging. My excellent communication skills and elocution has made me a great Front Desk Officer in which I also featured as a Customer Service Representative. My outstanding interpersonal relationship and persuasive skills with both colleagues and clients alike made me excel in previous job roles. I am a go-getter who believes in reaching desired goals before deadlines and does not give space to mediocrity; always striving to be the best I can be. I am also a good teamplayer, always contributing my best to the advancement of the team and organization, thereby providing splendid results. My meticulous and humble nature has made me a good follower while my choleric part has made me a good leader in various offices I have served especially religious activities. I might not be the best there is but I am investing on myself by reading and socializing to be able to operate at the best level I can be.