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Blunt Thoughts by JigsawKillah(m): 3:42pm On Jul 23, 2016 |
My train of thought is crashing Poets saying Saw, what happened? I'm thinking robbery, whatever ways To make cash, God! I'm blabbing SARS spoiled the show yesterday I'm keeping it all bottled up My baby mama looking at me Saying Jigs, you look tensed What's up? I ain't saying nothing To a female, they do nothing but cry I'm thinking robbing, I'm high Feeling like I should go request Again for the shottie, it's just crossing my mind Born in a street where you have to shoot guns To make it, crisis, guys feed off it Isis, blowing up things, might be I'm hexed, my hands scramble Beneath the chair where a knife be A 1 and half inched dagger Who'd think this is what my life is Smoke in the air yet my vision blurred By anger, frustration, I write this Letter to my kid brother In case I don't return, don't bother To my son: respect your mother I hear violent knocks I quenched the blunt on the bed Sorry for my sister, I'm stressing her Sprayed the air freshener Ran to the peephole, then ran back Threw the dagger in the ceiling Grabbed the other two parcels I've planned to smoke when chilling Threw it into the ceiling Then straightened up, opened the door It's the Police! I wake up ©Jigs 9 Likes 4 Shares |
Re: Blunt Thoughts by ShaqFu: 7:31pm On Jul 23, 2016 |
If I didn't know better i'd say you were dropping bars Jigs. Lol. But nice, seems you were telling a story, would have been nice if you'd wrote the poem in ballad form. |
Re: Blunt Thoughts by JigsawKillah(m): 11:36pm On Jul 23, 2016 |
ShaqFu: i only posted it after convincing myself that it is a poem I think I know you |
Re: Blunt Thoughts by llaykorn: 11:52pm On Jul 23, 2016 |
JigsawKillah, you only needed some rhymes to complete 12 bars. This is an awesome poem. Are your dreams like this everyday? |
Re: Blunt Thoughts by JigsawKillah(m): 8:17am On Jul 24, 2016 |
llaykorn: nope |
Re: Blunt Thoughts by ShaqFu: 9:35am On Jul 24, 2016 |
JigsawKillah:LOL. I wouldn't be surprise if you actually do know me. |
Re: Blunt Thoughts by forandy(m): 9:03am On Aug 03, 2016 |
Re: Blunt Thoughts by Nobody: 2:17pm On Aug 03, 2016 |
JigsawKillah:This is rap, killer, not poetry. Like what Ice Cups said in "it was a good day" |
Re: Blunt Thoughts by JigsawKillah(m): 3:35pm On Aug 03, 2016 |
PoetryInMotion: Ice Cube you mean? is Rap not poetry? 1 Like |
Re: Blunt Thoughts by JigsawKillah(m): 3:37pm On Aug 03, 2016 |
Re: Blunt Thoughts by Nobody: 5:41pm On Aug 03, 2016 |
JigsawKillah: Yeah, Ice Cube. The stories are alike, sh!t, I have an headache, which facilitates this nonsense I'm spurting. I would reply you when my head is clear. |
Re: Blunt Thoughts by forandy(m): 8:01pm On Aug 03, 2016 |
JigsawKillah: Lol, see u U dah ayam following your lead |
Re: Blunt Thoughts by JigsawKillah(m): 1:06am On Aug 04, 2016 |
forandy: what eez wrong wi-me? I am not too dull to Len na, abi? PoetryInMotion: sorry. still waiting for that reply lol |
Re: Blunt Thoughts by Nobody: 3:55pm On Aug 18, 2016 |
JigsawKillah:Yeah, still not changing my view, sounds like Ice Cube's biggest hit. |
Re: Blunt Thoughts by JigsawKillah(m): 2:19am On Aug 31, 2016 |
PoetryInMotion: is rap poetry or not? |
Re: Blunt Thoughts by Nobody: 1:02pm On Dec 05, 2016 |
JigsawKillah: Rap is spoken poetry to form music. But both have different depths. |
Re: Blunt Thoughts by JigsawKillah(m): 1:02am On Apr 17, 2020 |
It must have been the hunger Said the man looking at the mirror Eyes sunken, throat looks longer It could have been the garri Five days without it already Water is all his body now carry Where did it all go wrong He would ponder, palm on chin It was every election day, all along It is also because of the masses Himself inclusive, mindless sheep With whom leaders wipe their asses How long would he stay like this Even though he had decided: not anymore He approached the rope tied to the ceiling - Jigs Lionheart 6 Likes 3 Shares |
Re: Blunt Thoughts by harlos: 11:58am On Apr 17, 2020 |
JigsawKillah: Guy.... There is more to enjoy in this life o. All this are test of time E go be Ma 4 |
Re: Blunt Thoughts by JigsawKillah(m): 3:04am On Apr 20, 2020 |
harlos: my man! how long has it been? |
Re: Blunt Thoughts by harlos: 7:29am On Apr 20, 2020 |
JigsawKillah:So long that I can't remember how to spell your name. Hope you are staying safe |
Re: Blunt Thoughts by JigsawKillah(m): 3:19pm On May 22, 2020 |
harlos: Lol yes, bros. How You? |
Re: Blunt Thoughts by harlos: 7:37pm On May 26, 2020 |
JigsawKillah:I'm doing great. Everyone is now busy like never before |
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