Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 10:39am On Oct 18, 2016 |
MzMessiTohBadt: Wow, Thanks for this masterpiece ma'am, More grease to your elbow and more of God's blessing and understanding,
And sorry for not always commenting, I just can't help it,i don't know how to But even God no go forgive me if I don't acknowledge this wonderful work of yours.. Keep soaring higher.. The sky is just your starting point. .. Thumbs up bibijay
You have gat an additional fan, hope am welcomed?? ? Smiles Awww Yea you are highly welcome. I appreciate you reading it. Thanks 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Topscoque(f): 10:54am On Oct 18, 2016 |
Wow....... Dis is really a wonderful piece. Bibi, ure good...keep it up dear. Patiently waiting 4 ur nxt story. #driverbibitakeustodnxtstation# #iloveloveubibijay# |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Jumizie13(f): 12:15pm On Oct 18, 2016 |
You are a rare Gem. Keep it up ma'am |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by ADECULATE(f): 3:14pm On Oct 18, 2016 |
dis is truly a masterpiece 4rm d master herself, pls kip d gud work up, pls kip me in mind wen u wnt to start a new one |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Fonydear(f): 6:01pm On Oct 18, 2016 |
thanks for this beautiful masterpiece. God bless you real good. |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by PamelB(f): 6:07pm On Oct 18, 2016 |
Oh! What love. Nice story dear. The sky us your limit |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 7:52pm On Oct 18, 2016 |
PamelB: Oh! What love. Nice story dear. The sky us your limit and yours too sweetie 2 Likes |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 7:53pm On Oct 18, 2016 |
Topscoque: Wow....... Dis is really a wonderful piece. Bibi, ure good...keep it up dear. Patiently waiting 4 ur nxt story. #driverbibitakeustodnxtstation# #iloveloveubibijay# lol Bibi loves you too 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Shakyroh320(f): 7:57pm On Oct 18, 2016 |
u gat me high,more grease to ur elbow. |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Twizzy30(m): 8:21pm On Oct 18, 2016 |
bibijay123:
thank you too for following till d end. Thanks once again bibi. Its been long since I read a complete story on NL. Am unfollowing the thread now but I will start Following you |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by MsOse: 9:50pm On Oct 18, 2016 |
It would be bad and ungrateful of me not to acknowledge this wonderful story....God bless d works of ur hands Bibi.....
Mention me in ur next story |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Domance: 9:51pm On Oct 18, 2016 |
I doff my hat for u joor. Great job |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Elize1(f): 9:57pm On Oct 18, 2016 |
Good work and well-done. mention me in your next story. 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Ridwan1821: 11:42pm On Oct 18, 2016 |
@bibijay123, more ink to ur pen.. Great work from u. |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 11:15am On Oct 19, 2016 |
Ridwan1821: @bibijay123, more ink to ur pen.. Great work from u. Thank u 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by myqel(m): 1:07pm On Oct 19, 2016 |
*outta ghostmode*....I commend you for your great writing skills, you are simply the best *off to read Allen Avenue* |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by MissEfe(f): 3:41am On Oct 20, 2016 |
I have been following this since, what an awesome and amazing story. Reading the update with smile all over my face. Thanks bibijay123 for dis nice story. But please let me know when you start a new story OK. More wisdom to you |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 10:34pm On Oct 20, 2016 |
MissEfe: I have been following this since, what an awesome and amazing story. Reading the update with smile all over my face. Thanks bibijay123 for dis nice story. But please let me know when you start a new story OK. More wisdom to you Thank you dear, i am happy you enjoyed the story. 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Jellymusty(f): 11:17pm On Oct 20, 2016 |
Such a lovely ride, you so made me glue to mah phone, thanks so much Bibi may you increase in knowledge and pls don't forget to mention me if you start another story. 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by slizzyb(m): 4:28pm On Oct 21, 2016 |
Waohhhh, I followed till the end, More Grace Anty Bibi... So happy,, Oct 24 my birthday,,, am expecting gifts from all Bibi fans,, Tanx 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 4:34pm On Oct 21, 2016 |
slizzyb: Waohhhh, I followed till the end,
More Grace Anty Bibi...
So happy,,
Oct 24 my birthday,,, am expecting gifts from all Bibi fans,,
Tanx
awww thank u dear. happy birthday in advance! |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by mirapee: 7:25pm On Oct 21, 2016 |
Thank you Bibi it was fun chilling with you all the way. 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by costal(m): 3:32pm On Oct 22, 2016 |
bibijay123:
lol abeg wetin dey fear you o? abeg when u one to start new story try mention oo because nah only u story fit make me pass exam |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by edimahgurl(f): 4:32pm On Oct 22, 2016 |
Twisting twister tanx so much for making my day... No lectures 2day had to read frm beginin to d end..meanwhile aint happy wit u,u neva mentioned me aint we frns anymore? |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Michelle55: 7:35pm On Oct 22, 2016 |
tnx dearie for dis wonderful masterpiece.. God bless you abundantly swty |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 10:47am On Oct 23, 2016 |
Michelle55: tnx dearie for dis wonderful masterpiece.. God bless you abundantly swty thank u. Pls do ff my new story which i will post later today. Titled, Almost Perfect. God bless u too dear 2 Likes |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by veekid(m): 10:50am On Oct 23, 2016 |
bibijay123:
thank u. Pls do ff my new story which i will post later today. Titled, Almost Perfect. God bless u too dear Copy me plz |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by austine4real(m): 5:15pm On Oct 25, 2016 |
ozeepresh: I love u babe....second time am telling u this happy brthday sweety |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by spokesman3k(m): 11:35am On Oct 28, 2016 |
bibijay123: Epilogue
Tomi
A year later.........
" No baby Ade. Bad! Bad" i grabbed the chubby little troublemaker, he was pulling the tray i left on the table.I carried him into my arm while the tray on the table crashed to the floor. My sitting room was a big mess, the cushions were on the floor. There was a puddle of water in the middle of the room, all thanks to baby Adeolu. I shrieked, pulling my hand away. The little devil had bitten my little finger. He was grinning happily while spittle dribbled down his chin. I placed him on the rug, made to retrieve the cushions and the little man pulled down another one.
" Daddy will be home soon! we have to tidy up on time " i complained. " naughty Ade"
He laughed and i grabbed him into my arms before he could dip his little fingers into the water on the ground. My phone rang, and i picked it up.
" Happy anniversary best friend" Linda shouted happily." How are you celebrating your first wedding anniversary? "
" Hello best friend" i said, " thank you! I should be sunbathing on some romantic island but here i am chasing after Ade! You won't believe how naughty your godson has been! My nerves are frayed already!"
My wedding and Ade' s birth had brought us close. We became even closer during her own wedding ceremony. She was so emotional because both of her parents weren't alive to see her walk down the aisle. Her fiancé' s grandma too didn't help matters. She seemed to find fault with everything Linda did, she always had something to complain about until i advised her to put the old woman in her place. The wedding had been a success in the end, everyone was teary eyed when the beautiful ceremony ended and grandma had cried the most, hugging Linda and welcoming her to the family. She had no choice tho, she had met a match in Linda. Her mother_in law had also reunited with her ex_ husband on the wedding day and they renewed their vows few weeks later although Tosin was yet to embrace his father.
She laughed heartily." Why don't you get a maid?"
" Someone comes to clean the house thrice a week. The wash man comes for our laundry on weekends. What else do i need a live_ in maid for?. What's up with you?"
" Guess!" Linda said, excitedly."
" Tosin bought you a new car " i said, " Perfect wedding gift".
" No. Its something better. I am pregnant!" She said happily.
" Wow! congrats girl! that's so fast.....hmmmn" i said, considering the fact that the wedding took place only five months ago.
We both laughed knowingly." We have been hard at work" She said.
" I am so happy for you Mrs.Williams. I welcome you to the club of sleepless nights and emotional rollercoaster days but i can assure you it is worth it." i said.
She roared with laughter. " Thank you for the warm welcome Ma' am".
" You are welcome" i said with laughter.
" I could babysit Ade while you go out with your boo tonight."
" Awww. Thank you..... His grandma has already offered to babysit him for us. You also need some alone time tonight with your boo or have you told him already?" I replied.
" No. Ermmm... well don't tell anyone yet, OK?"
" Alright. How's Vicky? i haven't seen her this week and her line is not available. She promised to come take Ade for a walk". I said
She sighed." She traveled out of the country with Dantata again. Honestly, i don't know what is going on with her. She has become so.....distanced since i came back from my honeymoon. Do you think she could still be in love with Tosin?"
" That is ridiculous! the only guy she has eyes for is Dantata. She has been through a lot and she might still feel displaced and lonely. You are married, Auntie Maggie is in prison and your dad is late. She's bound to feel lonely. I invited her to stay with us as long as she want but she didn't want to be a burden to us so she declined it, although she didn't actually say it. Dantata is good for her, he will treat her well. If junketting all over the world will make her happy then i think she deserves it. Give her time, let her know she has a friend in you and she will come to trust you with her problems in time." I said.
" Whew! i was worried sick. Thank you " Linda said.
The honk of a car sounded.
" Kelvin is back already! " i exclaimed." I still haven't put my sitting room in order".
She laughed. " I also have to pick Kelly from school"
" Hows she doing?"
" She's fine. She can identify her alphabets now. She's also reading little by little. " She replied.
" She will eventually overcome" i said.
" I am optimistic that she will. Talk to you later bestie! don't get knocked up tonight" she joked.
I laughed." I will try not to. Talk to you later" i disconnected the call, squatting down to retrieve the fallen cushions.
The door opened and Kelvin walked in. He reached for baby Ade, kissing me on my cheek without batting an eyelid at the mess in the room.
" How are you Wifey?" he asked.
" I am fine hubby"
" Mind stepping out with me?" He said, pulling my hand, i followed him out of the room. I paused in shock, staring at the new sleek black car in the compound. He fished out the key from his pocket, dropped it in my hand. I hugged him happily.
" Happy Anniversary baby" he said with a kiss.
" Awww......baby i didn't get anything for you..." I trailed off" this is just.....too much"
" You did." He replied, pointing to our son in his arms." He's the best gift i have ever received"
I hugged him,ran to the car happily and opened the door.The sweet scent of fresh roses filled my nostril. There was a bouquet of it in the car. I picked up the bunch of roses, in amazement.
" How? how did you get these my love? fresh roses......"
" Nah. Nah" he laughed " i can't tell you about that "
" What do you say we start the night early? let's take Ade to his grandma." I said, getting on my tiptoes to kiss him.
" That's one grand idea" he laughed.
" DA_DA" baby Ade squealed suddenly.
We both laughed heartily.
" Wow! he just called me dad! i feel on top of the world!" He screamed at the top of his lungs." and i just won myself the sum of fifty thousand naira.I bet he would say DA_DA before MA_MA. Wifey when do i get my money?"
" Oh come on! Can't i pay with kisses?"
He considered it briefly. " Can i have kisses for breakfast for the rest of our lives?"
i pretended to ponder it over." Yes. You got yourself a deal Mr. Kelvin Adediwura "
He captured my lips in a kiss." Nice doing business with you, Mrs. Adediwura "
" I love you baby". I said, returning his kiss.
" I love you more" he replied.
We both laughed happily.He placed his arm around my shoulder and we walked back into our messy but love filled home.
THE END
Am speechless Bibi your creativity is just but wow God bless u |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by nma4god(f): 2:33pm On Oct 31, 2016 |
gosh!!!...this is more than good and beautiful ...I can't believe my ba3 is just 2% right now and am not even worried or bothered .....girl u nailed it real well....kudos |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 6:47pm On Oct 31, 2016 |
nma4god: gosh!!!...this is more than good and beautiful ...I can't believe my ba3 is just 2% right now and am not even worried or bothered .....girl u nailed it real well....kudos Thank you dearie! check out the new one later. 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by AnnieC(f): 8:37am On Nov 01, 2016 |
[quote author=bibijay123 post=50232003]Dedicated to Kajiang02, mirapee,annieC,Riog, barag.
* Continues*
Victoria
Thanks for the mention bibijay123 |