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Pls See Through My Poetry; All Criticisms Are Welcome by Switup: 5:13pm On Sep 22, 2016 |
It takes two to tango On a thread that is narrow. And even when beset by arrows They shall conquer their sorrows Be it in a deep hollow Or just a road in a row Their war shall not be known. But whence a man grown And a damsel blown Have chosen not to head for the unknown Hence, relapse so and merry in the known For which even the poor heart bleeds for more; Their days, one in many is filled with bore. And though they let their egos soar Above nature’s loving roar for care, Alas! It is indeed that along with them they bear The burden of loneliness so near. But, you there, beware That he, when at sixty-eight and a year Will he beget a maiden so dear… And for him shall she bear A son and a pair. And volia! He gets buried the next year Only to leave behind a weeping widow there And children all so tender. So why merry for so long in that lonely known? When I so know That it takes two to tango? 1 Like |
Re: Pls See Through My Poetry; All Criticisms Are Welcome by Switup: 5:19pm On Sep 22, 2016 |
whosh.... i wasnt expectin this poetry to come out like a prose. i bet i did not do d right thing.... #lemme try making amends |
Re: Pls See Through My Poetry; All Criticisms Are Welcome by Nobody: 5:52pm On Sep 22, 2016 |
U're good!! It takes talent to write a poem dat flows as fluently as urs did....D consistency z superb too! |
Re: Pls See Through My Poetry; All Criticisms Are Welcome by Switup: 5:57pm On Sep 22, 2016 |
GODKID98:wow u read that. it came out like a prose pls permit me to make it better. thanx though. am grateful |
Re: Pls See Through My Poetry; All Criticisms Are Welcome by senrino(m): 6:09pm On Sep 22, 2016 |
It takes two to Tango.. I like it |
Re: Pls See Through My Poetry; All Criticisms Are Welcome by dingbang(m): 10:32pm On Dec 04, 2016 |
I like dis... At first I thought the first part only had a meaning buh wen I read four times, I got d message.. Switup.. |
Re: Pls See Through My Poetry; All Criticisms Are Welcome by Switup: 2:55pm On Dec 06, 2016 |
dingbang:thanx u. |
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