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Drunken In Love by Morelaa: 8:42pm On Oct 20, 2016
Oh my lover, thou art has Fair as the moon, your smiles are like ray of sunshine, your words as cold has winter.

You have me me drunken in love nevertheless, I can't restrain my fast heart bites, I can't stop the glow in mine eyes all because am drunken in love.

Yet, it tickles ,yes I feel butterfly in my stomach I can't stop my feet from tanting , nor my lips from chanting ur name.

oh my love for every word u speak, are like music in mine ears, and like little bairds singing sweetly in the tree.
younder I wander , have I been enchanted or am I drunken in love....

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Re: Drunken In Love by redon12(m): 9:24pm On Oct 20, 2016
Morelaa:
Oh my lover, thou art has Fair as the moon, your smiles are like ray of sunshine, your words as cold has winter.

You have me me drunken in love nevertheless, I can't restrain my fast heart bites, I can't stop the glow in mine eyes all because am drunken in love.

Yet, it tickles ,yes I feel butterfly in my stomach I can't stop my feet from tanting , nor my lips from chanting ur name.

oh my love for every word u speak, are like music in mine ears, and like little bairds singing sweetly in the tree.
younder I wander , have I been enchanted or am I drunken in love....
Awesome!!!!... wait till my buddies read this
Re: Drunken In Love by SalomonKane: 7:37am On Nov 05, 2016
Morelaa:

Oh my lover,
thou art has Fair as the moon,
your smiles are like ray of sunshine,
your words as cold has winter.


You have me me drunken in love
nevertheless, I can't restrain my fast heart bites,
I can't stop the glow in mine eyes
all because am drunken in love.


Yet, it tickles ,yes I feel butterfly in my stomach
I can't stop my feet from tanting ,
nor my lips from chanting ur name.


oh my love for every word u speak,
are like music in mine ears,
and like little bairds singing sweetly
in the tree.

younder I wander , have I been
enchanted or am I drunken in love....
Your poem is not properly arranged. How come you only used archaic words on the first stanza alone?

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