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weedtheweeds:
Bless you, bro! Nevertheless, nature somehow placed me above your level and there's nothing you can do about it. You should rather sit in my class for free. Check your grammar above For a certainty you need beginners help in what we call 'basic sentence structure'.
I only wanted to surprise you with a call earlier. It could have been fun but you will not get that surprise anymore lol.
I hope I can reach out to your parents someday and console them with a third of the school fees they invested in your education.
NEVER LOOK DOWN ON THE MAN BELOW YOUR SHOULDERS FOR HE COULD BE AS HIGH AS THE SKY WHEN HE STANDS ON HIS ACHIEVEMENTS.

you are the worst illiterate I have ever seen, even a primary school pupil can't decipher your writing. You hid your dirty self under faceless forum to say rubbish, you are a big disgrace to your miserable parents. Well, I'm not surprised you inherit your uselessness from them. Hissss

Afrocentric:
you (the first letter of every sentence must be capitalized) are the worst illiterate I have ever seen (where did we see? You may use options like chatted or come across), (The sentence was completed and it should have a period) even a primary school pupil can't decipher your writing.(understand your composition or sentences. Or understand the sense of what you typed) your dirty self under faceless forum (faceless forum Haba aboki, what happened to anonymous?) say rubbish, (Malam this is the second time I am correcting the same error. The sentence was completed and it should have a period. you (Again, capitalize every first letter in a sentence) are a big disgrace to your miserable parents. Well, I'm not surprised you inherit (revert to primary 4 English textbook on past participle) your uselessness from them. Hissss

Just read through the corrections and evaluate your level of English.

Pretty basic, isn't it?

weedtheweeds:

Just read through the corrections and evaluate your level of English.

Pretty basic, isn't it?

get away you bastard. What was there to correct, useless illiterate, from foolish parents

Afrocentric:
get away (Aboki, you should take corrections seriously. You were taught in my last lesson how to use block letters in a sentence. There should have been a comma before YOU BASTARD, ain't it?) you bastard. What was there to correct(shouldn't there have been a question mark?), useless illiterate(what is the use of this comma here?), from foolish parents(you definitely know of a punctuation called fool'stop, dont you?)

What was there to correct? Go through it again and you might find even more. Your English is totally preliminary. I advise you to be humble and never feel you are better than anyone. Take this as a challenge and improve your English comprehension.

Afrocentric:
I stayed (stayed) at mafoloku Oshodi, but we can meet at mile 2

My dear, your English is dehydrated LOL. I stayed

weedtheweeds:
What was there to correct? Go through it again and you might find even more. Your English is totally preliminary. I advise you to be humble and never feel you are better than anyone. Take this as a challenge and improve your English comprehension.

you are a bastard, how can I big man like me be humble to an idiot and non entity like you?

weedtheweeds:
My dear, your English is dehydrated LOL. I stayed

what is the difference between staying and domicile? You are a proper goat