KidPaku:
have you ever heard of a talking axe? that's heavy and shave spots/ I'll bring that demonic iron to an airport/ its gonna speak to me, saying all sorts of devilish, evil and cray words/ like your head is looking like 'flight 101' and that shitt is ready for 'take off'/

I will sink you in your armpits/ because your contaminated flesh, like a sinners meat/ if you claim your 'amputating legs' , it must be another joker schemes/ cos the only time you got close to having a 'knee pull' is when you sucked your sisters titts/. . .slow it down
I said the only time you got close to having a nnipple, is when you sucked your sisters titts/

you came online running after guys? your the jobless looser on deck/ you saw poosies but chose to pursue Zach, fluxmind, Jigsawkillah and kang/ since you are a native of Izon man who works quicker with nets/ you obeyed the instruction of Jesus to simon peter and became a fisher of men/


after ranting like a crazy rapper/ kang showed us that your a lazy rapper/ you got humbled by flux days after/ this kid will shit on you now like baby diapers/

retarded monkey, what are you talking about/ your stupidity has now intensified, its worsen now/ am a street thug, who spits real thuggish raps/ this guy is so stupid, he went lips to lips with a 'stallion' just to get words out the 'horses mouth'/


your very slow and cunning, we should rename you a tortoise/ you claimed you would kill 'flux', and that you owned him, I really thought you brought clips/ but when the battle started, Wack, weak, insane and impotent, you were all this/ and you were also out of your 'mind' like some bitch who lost it/

but you really did loose it. . . . you are only good for throwing threats/ your loss against flux, was anticipated by all dopey vets/ you was foolishly blaming jigs for closing threads/ when that battle looked like a teams failed efforts in 'kho kho' , cause you couldn't touch your opponent!/


see am that fucking cray/ this nerdy fool runs his mouth without a fucking race/ he a stupid 'bird' and a monkey gay/ like that 'parrot' , you can tell from my 'opener' that I have been 'popping jay'/

GIYAZZ:
Opener - 1 point (Joewendell) He gets this one.
His opener had that sting KidPaku's opener lost in between the struggle to deliver his ideas tight.)

Though, Joe didn't have the best opener in the world, but he edged Kid with a better structure and a clearer picture of what he intended to spill.

Rhymes - 2 points (Nil) Both of y'all need to level up your game with respect to your rhymes. The nursery monosyllabic rhymes in your verses is an insult to battle rap.

Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points (Joewendell) I see a few references in his verse. But his opponent came almost empty.

Punchlines - 3 points (Joewendell) Though you both came with punches below par. I just had to give it to the man with the upper hand.

But you both really need to do your homework and learn the ropes ASAP. Punchline is the basic criteria in a rap battle. If you can't do it properly, then your career as a battle rapper is yet to become.

Flow - 1 point (Nil) Too much line stretching and a point, y'all made a bar look like 2 bars. Very wrong.

Personals - 2 points (Kidpaku)

After ranting like a crazy rapper/ kang showed us that your a lazy rapper/ you got humbled by flux days after/ this kid will shìt on you now like baby diapers/

Only bar from Kidpaku that impressed me. If only it was delivered right. Could have been a fuckìng Don Demarco!

Wordplays - 2 points (Nil) Corny plays from both sides.

Closer - 1 point (Nil) The setups in your closers are nothing to write home about.

MVGT: Joewendell

RedJohn2:
Smh for that ban,

Voting Criteria :

Opener - kid

Rhymes - joe

Similes/ Metaphors - joe

Punchlines - tie

Flow - tie

Personals - kid

Wordplays - kid ( although they were forced, but he made efforts )

Closer - joe

W - kid

Used the tie breaker

RedJohn2:
Check my Signature. . .It says it All

KidPaku:
Joe your not a mod, how can you call zachs vote null and void, was he banned from voting? Stop derailing the thread, only jigsaw and the mods have rights to what your doing, and first person to get 3votes wins, this section doesn't have enough active members to come and vote.

Paayne:
Lol, smh tho..


Opener- 1pt - tie (both openers were incomplete, so both of you will have to share d spoils equally... Joe had a nice set up buh lacked d punch..kidpaku had a good punch buh d set up wasn't good enough)

Rhymes - 2pts - Kidpaku. (At least his mono rhymes were better, even though he fell off at some points)

Similies/Metaphors - 2pts - Tie (Nothing to really seperate what you guys tendered..)

Punchlines - 3pts - Joewendell.

Flow - 1pt - Tie

Personals - 2pts - kidpaku

Wordplays - 2pts - Nil. I didn't see any played words apart from kidpaku's ''knee pull".

Closer - 1pt - tie

Joewendell 3pts. Vs. Kidpaku. 4pts


So judging by Criteria,

Mvgt ------- kidpaku.

KidPaku:
I think I got 3 votes already. .

KidPaku:
I think I got 3 votes already. .