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|Re: United In Betrayal by dominicnuel(m): 12:29am On May 07, 2017|
Really nice story. More ink to ur pen.
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|Re: United In Betrayal by PamelB(f): 10:56am On May 07, 2017|
It's been two days since Claire got admitted to the hospital. She had given no sign of consciousness but Kelvin and Phil never gave up on her.
On the other hand, Micheal wouldn't care less. He was yet to know that his wife was in coma. He would be with Sarah during the day, then at night, he would force himself on Gertrude.
It was on the second night after that incident that Amara came back home. She was looking better except for the black spot on her right cheek.
Micheal was seated on his favourite cushion when Amara walked in. She didn't say a word to him but went straight upstairs.
The house was unusually quiet and her sister's room was locked.
"Gertrude!" She called out
Amara was back to the sitting room since she couldn't find anybody upstairs.
"Where's my sister?"
"She's at the hospital madam."
"What? What happened? How?" She looked from Micheal to Gertrude but no answer was coming.
"You, what happened to my sister huh? And since when has she been there?"
"Two days ma." Gertrude replied.
"What hospital is that?"
"Blessed ma. Kelvin sir and Mr Phil took her there."
Amara left without wasting time.
Micheal sat up. He was no longer comfortable. He had thought she would have followed her lover home. Why was she still at the hospital? He stood up and went upstairs to change. This wasn't what he expected. What will people say?
Phil had gone home to change while Kelvin remained with Claire. She looked so innocent and beautiful even though she was out of the world. He would leave the private ward each time the nurses came to clean her up. She now had patches on her face but she was still that woman he so much respected.
Phil came in some minutes later looking clean and refreshed.
"Yes." He said, sitting beside Claire and touching her forehead.
"You're in love with her right?"
Phil looked at his new friend and nodded.
"But it's no use. I can't have her. So its of no use if I love her or not."
Kelvin gave him a pat on the back.
"Please, you both should take care. I've got some important things I need to handle."
They shook hands and Kelvin left the room, giving Claire a glance. It was time to start dealing with them all. He would make sure she was happy, even if it was the last thing he would do.
Amara stopped at the reception and enquired about Mrs Claire Njama. She was directed to the private ward room C. She opened the door without knocking and couldn't believe her eyes. Her sister was using a life support machine. A handsome gentleman was sitted on a plastic chair, rubbing her forehead. He must have been occupied in thought because he didn't hear her come in.
"Excuse me." Amara said, closing the door behind her.
Phil turned to look at her. He had seen her the other day at the plaza but she was too busy to notice him
"Hey Amara. Hi." He greeted, standing up.
"You know my name?"
"Yea. Claire told me about you. The day I came around, you were busy."
"I'm Phil by the way."
Amara took his hand and shook it. Wow! So her sister really was a player. But one thing though, she has eyes for good things. The three men in her life were all handsome, and judging by Phil's looks, rich as well.
"Nice meeting you Phil."
"The pleasure is all mine." He replied, sitting beside Claire and taking her left hand in his.
Amara watched with interest. This one would definitely be a good catch. Such open show of affection. She was disappointed though because she never believed her sister would cheat on her husband. She too would do same anyways. She's had Kelvin. Micheal and Phil would definitely join that list.
Micheal opened the door and froze in shock. Reality dawned on him and his senses started to return. He had gone far. She was on a life support machine.
Another thing caught his eyes, he was holding his wife's hand. This brought anger to him and he knotted a fist, ready to teach this third party a lesson.
While he was busy feasting his eyes, he didn't see the anger on Phil's face. He didn't see that he too was ready to deal him thousand blows.
"What are you doing here?" Phil asked with clenched teeth.
"She's my wife and I should be asking you what you're doing here. Move aside." Micheal said pushing him aside.
He didn't see the blow coming. It was when he fell to the marbled floor that he shot his eyes up.
Amara went to Phil, who was ready to land on Micheal.
"Why would you hit him?
"Cause he put her in this condition. He beat her up and left her in that room to die."
Happy Sunday house
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|Re: United In Betrayal by TheBlessedMAN: 11:24am On May 07, 2017|
wow! Wow! This is....is....(swallowing hard)..,..i mean....very.....very, very....infact totally.......
Pamelb, to be sincere am short of words!
Have been walking around with a rigid boner since I started reading this masterpiece!
How can I describe this work o! Gawd please endow my brain with complimentary words! Please abeg!
Chisos, how can someone write a story as this? Highly moralative, educative, sexylative, beautilative infact masturbative and rapinglative!
Am totally, spellbound, mesmerized, overwhelmed, floodwhelmed, oceanwhelmed and earthquakewhelmed by your Manchester in Betrayal PamelB.
You are the best o! I set my bomb for you o! Kwantinue and don't stop.
But how can you do this to me when you know that I just gave birth to twins? Its total wickedness, How can you make me want to hmmmmmm Chumzypinky again barely 3wks after the delievery of our twins with this konji provoking story? Eh? What a fvckinglative story!
Anyways, You never can tell, you may later give me another set of twins if you keep it up. But No let Chumzypinky see that o! That woman can jealous eh? Like Dora like Freda..... Happy sunday to you too
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|Re: United In Betrayal by missyadorable(f): 11:46am On May 07, 2017|
wow! the 2 times my hubby and I DID it in his office remains the best. Table and couch suffered
|Re: United In Betrayal by Chumzypinky(f): 11:57am On May 07, 2017|
TheBlessedMAN:hmm. TheBlessedMAN, i see u oo. E be like say twenty set of twins dey hungry u
|Re: United In Betrayal by TheBlessedMAN: 12:01pm On May 07, 2017|
Chumzypinky:no be only twenty SET, na twenty PHONE, the one wey dey house never let person do extracool with sleep for midnight, you wan add to it. Abeg no try am o!
|Re: United In Betrayal by Tgold1(m): 12:32pm On May 07, 2017|
hehehehe, this man ehn
|Re: United In Betrayal by EvaJael(f): 2:24pm On May 07, 2017|
Nice one PamelB...happy sunday
|Re: United In Betrayal by stephenGee12(m): 2:49pm On May 07, 2017|
So TBM na wetin u dey do for here be dat wey no allow u update for ur own thread abi.
Oya *brings out a twenty mouth koboko with length 100 feets* go and post a very scrupulous and tantalizing update.
Una wicked for here so story like dis dey una con dey make person dey refresh like say tomorrow no dey. PamelB wehdone dis story is fantastically, stupendically, intrestically, tantalically, wonderfull. In one sentence it is da bomb. Shud we be expecting update like right now
|Re: United In Betrayal by TheBlessedMAN: 2:59pm On May 07, 2017|
stephenGee12:abeg o! Oga ah don update o! Ah don update
|Re: United In Betrayal by stephenGee12(m): 3:05pm On May 07, 2017|
Shango save u if not. I for(don't let me talk) . But it too short na. So......
|Re: United In Betrayal by rosalieene(f): 3:24pm On May 07, 2017|
how people change! Just because one slut came into his life, he changed for worst.!
Michael is such a fool.
but come to this of it, in reality, a lot of marriages are experiencing this.
PAMELB nice work... my mb to ya phone
|Re: United In Betrayal by abubakarbabang7(m): 6:11pm On May 07, 2017|
pamelb where are you ,we don't like you killing us with suspense ooo
|Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 6:32pm On May 07, 2017|
United in betrayal, Amara should not even try it with Michael.
PamelB your face is very familiar as in over familiar. Meanwhile nice story, I've read your two previous stories they're good
|Re: United In Betrayal by heemah(f): 6:37pm On May 07, 2017|
I seriously don't understand Gertrude. Why is she still in that house? Don't tell me she is enjoying it already oo. I could agree with the first time; buh subsequently, No!!
As for Amara, hmmmmmmmnnn....
|Re: United In Betrayal by Kimkardashain(f): 6:50pm On May 07, 2017|
Oh God, What Is This
|Re: United In Betrayal by PamelB(f): 6:56pm On May 07, 2017|
Now this is wat I don't like o. Over familiar ke?
|Re: United In Betrayal by Chumzypinky(f): 8:12pm On May 07, 2017|
PamelB:lol, are u scared??
|Re: United In Betrayal by iamloyalty(f): 8:28pm On May 07, 2017|
Who is remoting Michael and what's happening to Geratude and Amara thinking faculty? All except claire and phil are betrayers. Thumbs up for the good story
|Re: United In Betrayal by Alennsar(f): 8:42pm On May 07, 2017|
Geratude or Gertrude?
|Re: United In Betrayal by iamloyalty(f): 9:13pm On May 07, 2017|
Alennsar:IS that the only problem u have? Then look for something else to do.
|Re: United In Betrayal by Alennsar(f): 9:45pm On May 07, 2017|
iamloyalty:don't take it. personal m just joking
|Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 10:49pm On May 07, 2017|
the way this Amara will crash land ehn. I'm pityin her in advance
|Re: United In Betrayal by Chizim1: 11:04pm On May 07, 2017|
thanks I like this episode
|Re: United In Betrayal by Chumzypinky(f): 5:40pm On May 08, 2017|
*in Omawunmi's voice* PamelB do something, akpuyeke
|Re: United In Betrayal by orisunmi(f): 6:05pm On May 08, 2017|
Have been refreshing this page since morning waiting for an update PAMELB hope there's no problem please make it t
|Re: United In Betrayal by BlissfulJeff(m): 6:08pm On May 08, 2017|
nice update dear
|Re: United In Betrayal by aydolar(m): 7:31pm On May 08, 2017|
Nice work keep it up
|Re: United In Betrayal by stainless239(f): 8:49pm On May 08, 2017|
|Re: United In Betrayal by TheBlessedMAN: 10:34pm On May 08, 2017|
[quote author=stainless239 post=56332991][/quote] ahah! U mean u ready to be a tire 4 me?
|Re: United In Betrayal by SmartestPopQUEEN(f): 1:20am On May 09, 2017|
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