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Re: The Whistle Blower by ClassCaptain(m): 1:02pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
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Re: The Whistle Blower by DanseMacabre(m): 1:08pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
Good one OP. Your tenses could do with a bit of working on sha, and in some cases, the informality therein downplays the seriousness of the work. Except if you want it to remain like that - informal - and for just the nairaland audience who'd mostly just yesman you. Lastly, learn to be conscious of mother tongue interference when writing in English. I wouldn't be far off the mark if I guessed you're Yoruba, would I? Because it shows in your writing. More battery life to your typing device. 3 Likes |
Re: The Whistle Blower by faorex(m): 1:08pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
whistle blowing is now lucrative...thanks to 5% |
Re: The Whistle Blower by BlackMbakara1(m): 1:11pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
Classcaptain kotinu mbok... |
Re: The Whistle Blower by Samogbo1(m): 1:13pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
nice1 op |
Re: The Whistle Blower by ClassCaptain(m): 1:17pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
DanseMacabre:.. Thanks sir. The informality is intentional..Check my other works ( on my profile ) mostly written in pidgin and mixed english and also to fully assume the persona narrating the story , in this case a Yoruba .. 1 Like |
Re: The Whistle Blower by albacete(m): 1:20pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
@ClassCaptain, carry go! |
Re: The Whistle Blower by Nobody: 1:36pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
With all this going on will the whistleblower ever get paid? |
Re: The Whistle Blower by ecclize: 1:49pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
Very whistle blower go get national body like NIGERiA ASSOCIATION OF WHISTLE BLOWERS (NAWB) motto: whistle bowing is our pride it is illegal to blow whistle without being a registered member Very whistle blower go get national body like NIGERiA ASSOCIATION OF WHISTLE BLOWERS (NAWB) motto: whistle bowing is our pride it is illegal to blow whistle without being a registered member Very whistle blower go get national body like NIGERiA ASSOCIATION OF WHISTLE BLOWERS (NAWB) motto: whistle bowing is our pride it is illegal to blow whistle without being a registered member 1 Like |
Re: The Whistle Blower by dhesire(m): 1:55pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
ClassCaptain: Class captain? Please where are we headed to? With you at the driver's seat, no problem. Safe landing! |
Re: The Whistle Blower by Bullhari: 2:17pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
grabs sit...
sits down class captain again... though he failed to finish his story on MMM
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Re: The Whistle Blower by odimbannamdi(m): 2:35pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
Soon, movie directors will create a movie titled "The Whistle Blower" Naija musicians go soon wax music and title it "Whistle Blowing" Aba and Onitsha boys go soon customize T-shirt with the "Whistle Blowing" tag. Nigerians and our habit of making a mountain out of a molehill! Nice story, OP. MEanwhile, these beautiful loafers are for sale
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Re: The Whistle Blower by whyx06(m): 2:37pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
Nice one |
Re: The Whistle Blower by Nobody: 2:38pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
Classacaptain u bera come and finish this story unless u want me to drop your name with EFCC |
Re: The Whistle Blower by DanseMacabre(m): 3:47pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
ClassCaptain: 'I found the story brought up by Prof has complete bullshit. . .' 'Has' instead of 'as' is one of the excerpts you asked for. The sentence is in Episode 2. I couldn't quote because my phone can't quote words in excess of 700 or so. Thanks. 1 Like |
Re: The Whistle Blower by cyojunior1(m): 4:07pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
Berra come n finish d story ! |
Re: The Whistle Blower by Idango(m): 4:07pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
Where is classcaptain Biko ? |
Re: The Whistle Blower by Qriousity(m): 4:31pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
ClassCaptain biko bia eba. |
Re: The Whistle Blower by CrownStarPro(m): 4:45pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
Class Captain....You are supposed to complete this story Based on Logistics |
Re: The Whistle Blower by JamesReacher(m): 5:20pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
ClassCaptain:Guy how far! No be you I see for Law side dey jack one night like 2sessions back, I wear one blue bucket hat so. What's up bro |
Re: The Whistle Blower by ClassCaptain(m): 5:22pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
JamesReacher: lol..na Unilorin u day ?? am good my G |
Re: The Whistle Blower by GallantEmory: 5:26pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
Classcaptain I go blow the whistle oo |
Re: The Whistle Blower by GallantEmory: 5:27pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
Classcaptain I go blow this whistle oo |
Re: The Whistle Blower by ClassCaptain(m): 5:39pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
Episode 6 EFCC headquarters !!! Paa !!!! I was woken up by an ear echoing slap ....Here I was , seated and my hands cuffed ... I still dont understand what was going on or why I was being treated this way .. " Treat him gently , He is still a suspect until arraigned before the law court – The man in suit, standing in the room into said to the mopol officers. I looked at the person who gave me the slap and it was the same officer that kicked me in the face at my house !!!He and the other other officers withdrew a bit !!!!.. “ Whats all this ?? .What the hell is happening?? Did u just call me a Suspect !!!… I shouted , infuriated . “ You call me a suspect, is this how you people treat a whistle blower now.. Why was i arrested and handcuffed ..I was trying to salvage… “ mr boo, the man in suit said in a crisp commanding voice, he turned around and walked towards me . He had a rather mean look and as he was about to say his next words , a weak smile spread across his face, “ You sir, mr boo , you re not a whistle blower…. You are a killer and a fraud .... . “ what is all this bullshit .. I stated,already getting tensed and angry as I looked into the faces of the armed men and back to the man in suit.. “ look, you cant play games with me, I know my rights,,, you found the money there.. where I told you the money was, the building or didn’t you ??…. “ Yes, Mr Boo, we found the money but it was not where you told us we would find it.. we instead found your armed men there waiting “ what the are u saying ...I have no... “( cuts In as he bangs the table ) .. Two of my men are fucking dead , shot dead by your guys because you called and gave them a wrong location ...You informed them of a wrong location so as to distract them to allow you pack the money in the real location while they waste time there.. Mr boo, Someone how u knew someone blew your whistle over the money you hid and you planned it out “ The money I hid officer am confused..I didn't hide ….. “ don’t play games with me mr boo osin , “ no am not.... “ why did you give us a fake address then . Cos of this kind of things, cos … wait how did u get my address then.. I inquired He looked at me for a minute as if to stab me and smiled .. “ you will enjoy your time in prison mr boo osin, you are under arrest for the conversion of the monies of the federal institution, Isale Eko University of to the tune of 200 million…. At least, you stole less money than your vc but you won't go Scot free also for the murder of my men.I promise u... Listen to me !!!! something is wrong ...Let me explain.... Officers take him ..... He said as he left and slammed the door.. The Last thing I remembered was me struggling with one of the mopol as they tried to drag me up !!!! |
Re: The Whistle Blower by JamesReacher(m): 5:46pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
ClassCaptain:I sha dey look say I don see that face before, ur dp no do u justice, u fine pass am na, homo no dey . Come finish ur tori |
Re: The Whistle Blower by KECNG: 5:51pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
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Re: The Whistle Blower by Okaakoko(m): 6:32pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
Classcaptain, this is getting more interesting. The hunter has become the hunted. We are still in the class waiting. Remain blessed, brother 1 Like |
Re: The Whistle Blower by abbaapple: 6:50pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
guy come and finish this tory oh! |
Re: The Whistle Blower by ClassCaptain(m): 7:31pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
JamesReacher: I don comot my dp naa..if u say so boss.. I hail oo |
Re: The Whistle Blower by Bank450(m): 9:10pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
ClassCaptain: Hello, I would love to get in touch with you can I get your email? |
Re: The Whistle Blower by ClassCaptain(m): 9:12pm On Apr 18, 2017 |
Bank450:antispambot113@gmail.com |
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