PROLOGUE
25th april 1375
hey, i am henry harnwell, am a thousand years old but have the stature of a 21 years adult, have travelled far and wide and changed my name because my name brings back memories, unwanted memories.
i was dressed in suits, with a long black hat but coloured red on the inside, my long black coat which makes a V shape at the end just below my knees with a black boot(the fashion back then) it was dark maybe around 10 pm or so.
vooom, i ran past my victim,
'wh..o is th....at', he stammered.
me, came my reply.
and before he could say a word i stuck my sharp fangs in his neck sucking sweet fresh blood till he died, and i removed a small towel from my inner shirt and just as i was about to clean my lips, i heard a voice,i turned swiftly and saw an old man with a wooden cross (he made the cross to face me) and started saying:
"i bound this soul and burn thine body, never to see the light, i send this cursed soul down to hades, where he will be tortured day and night".

[/color][color=#990000]my body was burning i can't take it any more then the pain gradually faded away when i opened my eyes i say terror, horror i was in HELL.

please should i kwantinue

continue please

Ofcourse

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please anyone is the story good or not should I proceed?

guy continue many people will not comment on a blank story

25th April 2017 chapter 1a
walking down the hall way seems like a mission impossible as i received deadly stares from my so called 'school mates' i know am not that cool but i ain't bad, am i? well am on a short gown, not to short just below my knees the gown is coloured black with huge red flowers as it's design with a big google and a flat red shoe.
i was as nervous as ever, i tried to increase my pace but seems like the more i try to be fast the more am slow, i was almost at the door when a boy approached me and i was like wow so handsome, tall, muscular and i was like...
hey girl, i looked up immediately to realise that i was thinking way too much and practically forgot about the handsome teen in front of me.
hey am kelvin. i took a moment to look around and saw the girls giving me a look that says *he's mine, stay away* i smiled.
am joe. april joe.
nice name u know. i looked around again and saw jealousy it was damn obvious.
yeah i know, i replied
wanna take a walk? he asked
okay no p,let