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Beyond The Closed Doors by AlamienDagash(m): 11:39am On Aug 22, 2017 |
Be aware... no part of this story should be copied or reproduced in any form without the author's permission. allright reserved Alameen Dagash 2017. as an amateur writer sensible criticism is highly welcomed here. this is a pure fiction story inspired by myself. |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by AlamienDagash(m): 11:42am On Aug 22, 2017 |
Beyond The Closed Doors ..Part one.. It was a lull Monday morning, Dr Zayyan was in his car with his two ever lovingly twins, the sun haven't gleam yet, it was the year 2000. Sons, you are in your final year in primary, you've to be more attentive in class said Dr Zayyan as he beam looking at his beautiful identical twins. "Ok Dad we won't let you down we promise hasan said. By the way may I ask you a question? Sure son as he gestures, what's your greatest wish? " my Paramount wish is to establish hospitals in all over the thirty six states we have, both kids are absorbed of the aim of their Dad in life. Dr Zayyan bade farewell to his kids after dropping them off at the gate of their school, hasan and husayn hold each others' hand as they walk, there father hopes to see the day they grow up holding hands without a bit of strife, but reverse was the case, the future folds different destiny for them,if he had known, he should've seek a clairvoyant knowledge to cognizes him about his two kids, maybe he might be able to alter some dilemma to be happened but fate always make its way despite the obstacles. Dr Zayyan was halfway to his office when he remembered that he had forgotten his eyeglasses, but had he known what his bare eyes will witnesses, he would've have cease using eyeglasses for his entire life. Dr Zayyan reached his house, he horns continuously but neither the gateman nor his wife were to be found, so he switch off his car and steps out, as he walked into the house, he saw Ammar (his younger brother) coming towards him. “good morning sir" said Ammar, "morning , how are you, hope everything is good? Wait! Where are you going Ammar said as he sees his brother walking towards the closed doors that contain covert not to be unveils to any organism be it plant or animal, " what kind of question is this? I'm walking through my house and you're asking! Dr Zayyan has smelled the rat, something in the atmosphere feels eccentric, but it is too late for Ammar to stop his brother for he has already see damp of blood in his wife shoe, abruptly he become perplexed yasira! Yasira! He keeps shouting his wife's name hoping to see her hale and healthy but had he known, he shouldn't waste his voice, because corpse doesn't hear nor can they talk. He try to restraint himself but as his eyes witness the greatest shock of his life, how gruesomely his wife is in blood, he become more devastated and bewildered, what have you done Ammar? Gateman! Gateman! Dr Zayyan shouted but it was too late as "gateman" was the last word he utters before he was been sent to the land of the dead too, before he gave up the ghost, his twins was the last image that evoked to him. 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by AlamienDagash(m): 11:43am On Aug 22, 2017 |
Beyond The Closed Doors ..Part one.. It was a lull Monday morning, Dr Zayyan was in his car with his two ever lovingly twins, the sun haven't gleam yet, it was the year 2000. Sons, you are in your final year in primary, you've to be more attentive in class said Dr Zayyan as he beam looking at his beautiful identical twins. "Ok Dad we won't let you down we promise hasan said. By the way may I ask you a question? Sure son as he gestures, what's your greatest wish? " my Paramount wish is to establish hospitals in all over the thirty six states we have, both kids are absorbed of the aim of their Dad in life. Dr Zayyan bade farewell to his kids after dropping them off at the gate of their school, hasan and husayn hold each others' hand as they walk, there father hopes to see the day they grow up holding hands without a bit of strife, but reverse was the case, the future folds different destiny for them,if he had known, he should've seek a clairvoyant knowledge to cognizes him about his two kids, maybe he might be able to alter some dilemma to be happened but fate always make its way despite the obstacles. Dr Zayyan was halfway to his office when he remembered that he had forgotten his eyeglasses, but had he known what his bare eyes will witnesses, he would've have cease using eyeglasses for his entire life. Dr Zayyan reached his house, he horns continuously but neither the gateman nor his wife were to be found, so he switch off his car and steps out, as he walked into the house, he saw Ammar (his younger brother) coming towards him. “good morning sir" said Ammar, "morning , how are you, hope everything is good? Wait! Where are you going Ammar said as he sees his brother walking towards the closed doors that contain covert not to be unveils to any organism be it plant or animal, " what kind of question is this? I'm walking through my house and you're asking! Dr Zayyan has smelled the rat, something in the atmosphere feels eccentric, but it is too late for Ammar to stop his brother for he has already see damp of blood in his wife shoe, abruptly he become perplexed yasira! Yasira! He keeps shouting his wife's name hoping to see her hale and healthy but had he known, he shouldn't waste his voice, because corpse doesn't hear nor can they talk. He try to restraint himself but as his eyes witness the greatest shock of his life, how gruesomely his wife is in blood, he become more devastated and bewildered, what have you done Ammar? Gateman! Gateman! Dr Zayyan shouted but it was too late as "gateman" was the last word he utters before he was been sent to the land of the dead too, before he gave up the ghost, his twins was the last image that evoked to him. thanks for reading 4 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by AlamienDagash(m): 11:59am On Aug 22, 2017 |
lemme call the people which without them literature would've been a dull and pale place to visit they are one big family modified: we are one big family! Hadampson my boss Stephengee12 my bro fmartin my dude my role models Ghostwritter lesky3 souloho19 Kimberlywest Larrysun kimkardashian rest of the family rachealfst pamelib SurestG marianneada bibi294 yewandequeen TiffanyJ Toyin223 Evajeal shewrites Queenitee kerenjay Adesina12 Yhungbrowhne Xaviercasmir uminem02 Theblessedman Gtin chizzymaris Davidhero 1 Like |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by AlamienDagash(m): 12:15pm On Aug 22, 2017 |
Princ007 where are you tho |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by Nobody: 1:23pm On Aug 22, 2017 |
AlamienDagash:I'm here dear.. Nice story, pls continue |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by Deji124(m): 8:24pm On Aug 22, 2017 |
nice story u got here man oya pls come and continue, |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by AlamienDagash(m): 9:18pm On Aug 22, 2017 |
Deji124:thanks mehn |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by Hadampson(m): 8:54am On Aug 23, 2017 |
AlamienDagash:I'm humble blooda Thanks for calling me here. Op i greet you.. In Falz's voice...weldone sir 1 Like |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by Hadampson(m): 9:04am On Aug 23, 2017 |
Chai see me oh I didn't know alamiendagash is the OP. I get talented blooda.. Stepheegee12 and alamiendagash. gtin when are we going to write our own story? I kuku know hormobolanle is not capable of writing a small poem not to talk of STORY. Na AMEBO she sabi, shio Akinwale14, adontcare, kimberlywest, samyfreshsmooth, cerowo, oly23, evajael and herosakin777. Your seats are reserved 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by Hadampson(m): 9:05am On Aug 23, 2017 |
I sight you princ007 |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by Nobody: 9:06am On Aug 23, 2017 |
Hadampson:Lol |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by Hadampson(m): 9:08am On Aug 23, 2017 |
princ007:How is you? |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by Nobody: 9:10am On Aug 23, 2017 |
Hadampson:I'm fine dear |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by Hadampson(m): 9:15am On Aug 23, 2017 |
princ007:Glad to hear know MY SUGAR-PIE is doing okay Let's not derail this thread abeg Going to another section. See you later |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by adontcare(f): 9:32am On Aug 23, 2017 |
Hadampson:oh my. Present. Thanx for d invite |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by souloho19(m): 9:39am On Aug 23, 2017 |
Boss man...the running vampire I'm present bro |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by cerowo(f): 9:40am On Aug 23, 2017 |
Hadampson:tnks for the mention |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by Oly23(f): 10:21am On Aug 23, 2017 |
Hadampson:on my way!!! Thanks for the mention |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by AlamienDagash(m): 11:31am On Aug 23, 2017 |
Beyond The Closed Doors Part two The identical twins were at their class during the break time playing a game called "thief and police" if I'm a thief and you're a cop, will you ever in your life arrest me? Husayn asked his brother, " never! Remember dad used to tell us to be saviour of each other , hasan replied. They played their game peacefully without the knowledge of the outbreak at home. It was 12:30pm, the school hours was over, as usual hasan and husayn trek back to home since the school wasn't far away from their home, as the duo headed home, husayn has a scuffle with someone, "I'll kill that boy if he dare to set in my way stated angry husayn. " how many times did mom told you not to be using "killl" when speaking, fighting is not the way out, better calm down or otherwise I'll let mom know what occurred today as soon as we reached home. Hasan was completely wrong, he'll never again had the chance to tell her neither will have the chance to advice his bro. Hasan you're not a woman but you gossip like one, sometimes I wonder why and how you became my twin brother, look don't irritate me more, husayn said and walk ahead so as to reach home first and cover up. Minutes later, hasan reached home, he was perturbed, his two uncle and a policeman " oh! Hasan you're back said nuhuh (his uncle) what happens uncle, why are you crying? Your.. Yo..your brother killed your parents and run away!! What!? Asked hasan as he jerked at abrupt, his feet become feeble to carry him, his body turned cool as snow in Moscow, he remembered once , their mom was scolding husayn said if he continue to say he'll kill someone, one day he'll surely kill her too, his world is ruined, no dad no mom,can't bear it! His uncle Ammar shedding crocodile tears allays him, " uncle nuhuh will take care of you,don't cry my boy... As Ammar continue to console him, he started seeing everything blurry and vaguely enough he fainted out. HUSAYN Husayn trudge into a bustling market, he is too obsessed "how could hasan murder our parents, but uncle Ammar told me it was by accident, then why would the police scour hoping to caught me? Just because we look alike or what? This question keeps running up and down in his tiny childish brain, but no! They haven't hit the nail on his head, they did this to antagonize him against his own brother, now that he is in between the devil and the deep blue sea, he couldn't cease to wish he can revert one day ago, he would've walk home with his bro, but now since yesterday, the thought of his family was the only thing his mind set upon. The sun was now fully set, he was inconvenient now, the thought on where to sleep began, he looked at every direction hoping to find a roof to rest his head under, but reverse was the case, he's so depressed that he settled himself under a table and doze off. Thanks for reading |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by AlamienDagash(m): 11:34am On Aug 23, 2017 |
souloho19:thanks boss NB: in here devils wear Gucci↕↕ |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by AlamienDagash(m): 11:37am On Aug 23, 2017 |
hadampson princ007 deji124 souloho19
update don land |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by adontcare(f): 11:46am On Aug 23, 2017 |
If dis happened in Moscow, the police are smart to note the time of death of d couples. Well nice write |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by stephenGee12(m): 5:22pm On Aug 23, 2017 |
Wow nice one man.
Keep it up.
But u need to work on ur quotations. So we can knw who is talking. Keep it up bro. We gat ur back |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by Nobody: 6:10pm On Aug 23, 2017 |
AlamienDagash:Nice update |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by Akinwale14(m): 7:42pm On Aug 23, 2017 |
Hadampson:Thanks bro for the invitation,, I'm here now so lets enjoy the story together |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by herosakin777(m): 8:46pm On Aug 23, 2017 |
Hadampson:thanks sir am here now |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by AlamienDagash(m): 9:16pm On Aug 23, 2017 |
adontcare:naso oo but what bout our naija police |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by AlamienDagash(m): 9:20pm On Aug 23, 2017 |
stephenGee12:thanks bro will work on it. |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by AlamienDagash(m): 9:21pm On Aug 23, 2017 |
stephenGee12:thanks bro will work on it. |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by AlamienDagash(m): 9:21pm On Aug 23, 2017 |
stephenGee12:thanks bro will work on it. |
Re: Beyond The Closed Doors by AlamienDagash(m): 9:31pm On Aug 23, 2017 |
stephenGee12:thanks bro will work on it. |
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