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Dear Pals Please I Need Contribution In My Writing. Correct Me Where I'm Wrong by Victoya1(f): 1:04pm On Aug 25, 2017
Kyle sat quietly as echoes from his classmates engulfed him.

It was "recess", which meant papers flying from every corner of the class, girls gossiping, some others eating it playing, while some searched for whom to pick on.

He wondered what group to fall in as he held a pencil between his fingers, twisting it as he thought on what to do. A slammed fist on his desk told kyle he now belonged to a group.

" What do we have here?" A rough tone asked.

Kyle looked up to a fat boy with a protruding belly accompanied by two lanky boys almost same height as the fat boy.
Kyle knew who they were, few weeks in this school yet Kyle always ignored them as he had done since his first day. Kyle called them Bill & the minions.

"I asked a question little worm!"

Truly Kyle wasn't up to anything yet, & Bill's interruption seemed to make things worse. This angered Kyle but as usual, he kept silent. Searching for ideas seemed to be his priority.

Bill getting frustrated bursted out

"I hope you pee on your pants right now coz I'll pounce on you like a monster!" Bill said grinning wickedly.

Kyle's eyes lit up like a child who's dreams just came true.

"Wow silent puppy, you really love playing dump"
"Let me show you how to talk" Bill said raising his fist on Kyle.

"What's going on here?" A voice interrupted.
Everyone hurried to their seats except Bill & his minions.

"Bill?"

Bill turned to Miss Clara their teacher, standing tall before the class.

"I was just about to leave ma" He said, turning to Kyle,
"I'll see you soon, I hope you liked it".

And he was right Kyle thought. He liked it, he liked " Bill the Monster".

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Re: Dear Pals Please I Need Contribution In My Writing. Correct Me Where I'm Wrong by Nobody: 5:54pm On Aug 25, 2017
maybe,
you need a skill to keep our attention on your writtings
Re: Dear Pals Please I Need Contribution In My Writing. Correct Me Where I'm Wrong by Frankenstein: 7:27pm On Aug 25, 2017
This is good. Update!
Re: Dear Pals Please I Need Contribution In My Writing. Correct Me Where I'm Wrong by GRACEGLORY: 3:56am On Aug 26, 2017
La beauté de la créativité


Creativity is not limited to craft, nor drawing or painting, it also extends to writing,
Painting with words to express oneself, either in letters or orally.


The group is to help us develop individually as our work or piece will be subject to constructive criticism
As well as debate, and advise. And also, to show case our piece as a couple of employers and others that needs
The services will also be among us in the group.

It's also a platform to teach, and shape us.



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