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Murder At Dawn by emekagh(m): 4:30pm On Mar 09, 2010
http://extramantra..com/2010/03/poem-murder-at-dawn.html

Night marauders of Jos
Fulani herdsmen they are

Masked in pitch darkness
As black as their souls
Cloaked in bitterness
And volcanic anger, like Mount Vesuvius
With machetes, cutlass, and guns
On the Plateau they descend
Before the first crow of the cock

Blood thirsty men versus sucklings,
Nursing mothers and elderly
Pitted against rampaging Fulani herdsmen
Their squeaky cries of anguish met with
Shrill battle cries

Babies and toddlers
They weaned from mothers’ bosoms
Their innocent gaze met with deadly mien
Their tender flesh, they pierced
With jagged blades
Death they sold
To terrified, and fleeing victims

Mothers and babes
Now august visitors
Of their generous maker
As we approach the ides of March

Night marauders of Jos
Fulani herdsmen they are
They gorged their bellies full
With the blood of babies
And tears of the town
Back into the dark they slipped
To revel and chant, perhaps
Under the shades, prepared by their patrons
Patting one another
On the back, with blood soiled palms
For their dastard deeds

Night marauders of Jos
Humans they were
Demons they are
Accursed are they!

http://extramantra..com/2010/03/poem-murder-at-dawn.html
Re: Murder At Dawn by nwadinma(f): 9:47am On Mar 10, 2010
This truly tells the story.
great work but it would have been better for us if this incidence did not occur.
Re: Murder At Dawn by emekagh(m): 1:21pm On Mar 10, 2010
Thanks Nwadinma, and yes we wished it hadn't happened, unfortunately we can't change the past. It's quite sad. Religious fanaticism is fast becoming Nigeria's natural disaster. God help us!
Re: Murder At Dawn by cbase: 1:11pm On Mar 12, 2010
good poem, Emeka.
Re: Murder At Dawn by emekagh(m): 4:14pm On Mar 12, 2010
Thanks cbase,
Re: Murder At Dawn by bluespice(f): 10:10am On Apr 08, 2010
smiley
Re: Murder At Dawn by Djlawz(m): 11:40pm On Apr 21, 2010
A wonderful work, i must say u spoke al our mindz, but a lil bit of charactrization wud hav done d ryte trick. Wonderful work man
Re: Murder At Dawn by Djlawz(m): 11:40pm On Apr 21, 2010
A wonderful work, i must say u spoke al our mindz, but a lil bit of charactrization wud hav done d ryte trick. Wonderful work man
Re: Murder At Dawn by emekagh(m): 11:53pm On Apr 27, 2010
Thanks guys, and ladies
@Djlawz, how do you mean by characterization. explain a little perhaps I can improve on subsequent works.
Thanks again

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