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Murder Of Violencehood by OMA4U(m): 9:03pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
Murder of Violencehood Silently, I banged the portal of the god of peace But before, my warmest homage I did pay To him and to those who long sand did kiss Before I said the words that seemed never did say At the threshold over the frame my feet stood My eyes closed, leaving the mind to wander To roam, to form a mental image of him as it could: Halos hovered around him, I saw when left to meander I banged and banged and wide the door threw open A ceremonial banquet amid merry and revels grew Although as anticipated, a new odd path was broken So strange, a rain of blood flooded like dense drops of dew In the castle where the god of peace did reign Savage murderers jollied in slaying throat As though a needle pierced, my heart felt his pain As bullets riddled his chest, left him crimson coat I sought to see this god to retort unanswered questions I sought and sought but no god ever lived there once Then I asked why the castle made for peace intentions I found an answer worth to be shared and share for years The blood that washes the land gushes from Violence's heart This lesson may leave the sagest in still silent mood - if we could lay arm in arm and never from our brothers part And in unison, vow to live in the murder of violencehood OMA Quotes: "Absence of violence breathes life into a dead peace." 9 Likes 3 Shares |
Re: Murder Of Violencehood by OMA4U(m): 9:06pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
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Re: Murder Of Violencehood by Nobody: 9:17pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
OMA4U, let me read for a second time. I read your pieces 10 times over. Lol. Modified: Wow! This is great sir. But, I don't understand the 3rd line of stanza 5. Oma, you dropped the rhymes at 4. Lol. Why sir? Ayamlaykorn 1 Like |
Re: Murder Of Violencehood by OMA4U(m): 10:00pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
laykorn: Thanks boss. It's an honour to have you here, sir. That rhyme undergoes alteration. It might still be sued to court of editing, even though I have edited it countless times. Pls, quote out the undecipherable lines. The phone I'm using at the moment lumps them together. |
Re: Murder Of Violencehood by joseph1832(m): 11:59pm On Feb 14, 2015 |
This is cool!. Speaks volume.... First Krystalxxx now you. You guys see blood. |
Re: Murder Of Violencehood by OMA4U(m): 3:41pm On Feb 15, 2015 |
joseph1832: Thanks boss. 1 Like |
Re: Murder Of Violencehood by LarrySun(m): 10:01pm On Feb 15, 2015 |
Another awesome piece by an awesome writer. This young man is an embodiment of ingenuity. What makes him tick? What gears, what levers, what machinery work in his head? All meshing perfectly; oiled by brilliance. |
Re: Murder Of Violencehood by omanifrank(m): 10:04pm On Feb 15, 2015 |
K na |
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Re: Murder Of Violencehood by Nobody: 10:05pm On Feb 15, 2015 |
I'll comment in de morning |
Re: Murder Of Violencehood by Donvic4u(m): 10:05pm On Feb 15, 2015 |
Nice piece... |
Re: Murder Of Violencehood by 190: 10:06pm On Feb 15, 2015 |
This old man stil dey nairaland |
Re: Murder Of Violencehood by clubone0502: 10:06pm On Feb 15, 2015 |
Nice |
Re: Murder Of Violencehood by Nobody: 10:06pm On Feb 15, 2015 |
Nice one. Keep it up bro. |
Re: Murder Of Violencehood by Nobody: 10:07pm On Feb 15, 2015 |
OMA4U: Malaria |
Re: Murder Of Violencehood by Hgold(m): 10:08pm On Feb 15, 2015 |
Nice one |
Re: Murder Of Violencehood by chinchong: 10:08pm On Feb 15, 2015 |
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Re: Murder Of Violencehood by Joshuadon: 10:09pm On Feb 15, 2015 |
Linguistic analysis....,....... |
Re: Murder Of Violencehood by Nobody: 10:10pm On Feb 15, 2015 |
Nice one. |
Re: Murder Of Violencehood by Nobody: 10:10pm On Feb 15, 2015 |
Il comment after reading Wow! Great piece |
Re: Murder Of Violencehood by geoworldedu: 10:11pm On Feb 15, 2015 |
[b]Congrats Oma4u. FP tinz |
Re: Murder Of Violencehood by suwailad(f): 10:13pm On Feb 15, 2015 |
chei people are really jobless. Booking space on a thread meant for those living in the desert! |
Re: Murder Of Violencehood by Gabrielsylar(m): 10:13pm On Feb 15, 2015 |
too tired to read |
Re: Murder Of Violencehood by Nobody: 10:13pm On Feb 15, 2015 |
FP? |
Re: Murder Of Violencehood by michaelbiz: 10:13pm On Feb 15, 2015 |
OMA4U: ***Applause**** If only we could do poetry like a poet; If only we could create like the Creator; If only we could; If only. |
Re: Murder Of Violencehood by Nobody: 10:13pm On Feb 15, 2015 |
geoworldedu: |
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