My first website. Honest review, please

honest review heh,

Well the website does not strike me as outstanding. check out phatfarm's website. try improving your design skill by cloning other very tight sites for fun.

You can check out my latest work on www.pelbr.com

Not yet launched, still need to add some finishing touches to it.

You can get better just try what i said. try clone phatfarm website.

Chazy, just so there's no confusion. By his use of the word 'clone' Askphantom is implying that you look at that site and get your inspiration from it, he isnt saying you should go and lift the entire site, change the name and then put it up as yours.

Not bad for a starter. I think you will go far if you continue.

However, you should have made it easy for people to review. I don't have to open a new window and type the address to review. That is hard labour. No disrespect.

So, people here is the link http://www.fos86.com/