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| Slay Queen ( The Poetic Version) by Gokeli23(m): 2:38am On May 05, 2018 |
Slay queen trend on social media just to get their daily bread She lives her life in pretext as she as she betrays her prey's hopes and dreams of a life filled with a happy ever after so it seems The only thing she slays are clients not giants as her beauty masqurade the devil that bedevils your mind in a whole new level She left speechless and helpless as she prone to all sorts of attacks as she labelled a black sheep of the family [color=#000099][/color] 1 Like |
| Re: Slay Queen ( The Poetic Version) by mcbiehjnr(m): 4:07am On May 05, 2018 |
My man, I love your first line, " Slay queen trend on social media just to get their daily bread".. Others are somehow too long, though they are still making sense. I think you should try to reduce wordiness in your poems. Thanks |
| Re: Slay Queen ( The Poetic Version) by daviesblaze(m): 8:11pm On May 05, 2018 |
once again, nice one |
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