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HE'S WATCHING ME... by Nobody: 5:34pm On Jul 11, 2018
They think Amaka is crazy, depressed... But little do they know she's being WATCHED!!! by...
(A short story, hope you love it nairalanders)
And based on the misspelling of the title ...His watching me... Nairalanders, it has been changed to HE'S WATCHING ME... Thank you ardent readers for the correction,and I'll love any mistakes told to me, if you do find out any. God bless you.

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Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by ITbomb(m): 5:56pm On Jul 11, 2018
He's watching me NOT his

In most cases, when writing, it's better you use full words ie He is

Happy writing

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Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by Nobody: 6:05pm On Jul 11, 2018
Chapter 1
She could be seen running at the beach with bare feet, he was matching forward with a knife, Amaka was screaming for help, but she could not be heard, as she kept on running on the rough pebbles of the beach her legs sore and red, she fell down, being tripped by a stone. His silhouette could be seen from far,she became dizzy and dazed, she heard his footsteps come ahead and pleaded in a faint voice,saying
"please...please,... Have merc...... ",and a big blow is heard...
Amaka is a practicing nurse, at the Lagos university teaching hospital. A graduate of Nnamdi Azikwe university. She was tall, slender, and had a perfect shape, her head could be seen being oval, with bulging eyes being slanted above by her perfect eye brow. She had this gaily walk, that gave an onlooker the message of power and exuberance. She was also really good in her job, every patient wanted Amaka by their side, to give them treatment, because her smile had this purpose of lightning the room with happiness, and her touch was gentle and healing to a patient. Having good recommendations, her friends where jealous of her, and eyed her disgustingly when she passed and greeted them as she went by the passage. Until one particular day, in the 1st of May, 2008,Amaka had to attend to a patient ,Mr Patrick, he was being treated of pneumonia , and Amaka had to give him his drugs as prescribed by the doctor. As time went on, Amaka and Mr Patrick became close friends .He would come to Amakas house for a visit, buy her gifts, till a particular day he had given her the surprise of her life.
Sitting together in her living room watching a movie, he had told her to close her eyes
"why... ",Amaka says
"just do it, it's a surprise ", he smiled as he told her.
"okay..." Amaka gave a sarcastic look
Then he brought a golden ring, embellished with crusted diamonds.
"would you marry me amaka "Patrick says.
Amaka was perplexed, she looked on to the ring, panting slowly,and also stuttering.
"I -i-i... I didn't expect this patrick",she sighed deeply
"Meaning... ",Patrick changed his tone brashly.
"I can't marry you, I thought we were just friends", she spoke.
Patrick looked at her bewildered, held his hands tightly, sort of like making a fist, then sobbed bodily as he thought, then he looked at her with a side eye.
"so after, what we've been through, all this month's, this is how am going to be paid back",he said slowly.
"No.. No... " she says as Patrick stood up from the couch enraged and left her house.

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Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by Nobody: 6:07pm On Jul 11, 2018
ITbomb:
He's watching me NOT his

In most cases, when writing, it's better you use full words ie He is

Happy writing
Thank you sir.

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Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by Nobody: 6:31pm On Jul 11, 2018
Please nairalanders if you are enjoying this short
story of ours, please acknowledge... I'll be back with chapter 2, after am back from mid-week service in church. wink
Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by Nobody: 8:58pm On Jul 11, 2018
Chapter 2
Is he the one

Well time went by, and Amaka got a hold of herself, when Mr Patrick stopped calling and visiting her anymore. She made all that short friendship just for the past. "it's time to move on,if you don't like me based on my decisions, please get out!!!",she would murmur to herself, but deep in her heart she new she missed him so much. It was love she felt,unknowingly for her.
Now on her desk, sorting some patients file, she got a visit from Chris. Chris was Amakas best friend, they had both graduated from the same university. And he was effeminate. Chris was tall, dark and muscular, he had slanty eyes, with heavily bushy eyebrows.
Chris was someone Amaka could confide in everytime, he had always come to visit her in her closing hours and when they were both done chit chatting in her office, he'll escort her home. Now she had called Chris, to tell him about this man -mr Patrick, whom was her friend for some particular months, but now she seems a bit confused.
" so Chris, could you help me, I don't know what to do", she said rubbing her forehead in confusion .
Then Chris holds her hand and says to her " do you love him"
"yes I do",she says
" then follow your heart, Amaka " he says.
" but am not quite sure, I just knew him for some months",she says
"hmm... Well if your heart is speaking to you, listen, and call him ,dear",he says.
" thanks Chris, you'll forever be my friend for life", she says and hugs him tightly.
" don't worry dear, I'm always here for you", he says as they hug tightly.
Then she calls Mr Patrick,tells him she really wants to talk to him, and tells him to have dinner in her house by 7pm. Then Amaka and Chris both go home to prepare dinner for Mr Patrick. Amaka was all in smiles that day.
Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by Nobody: 10:12pm On Jul 11, 2018
Chapter 3
Dinner gone bad.

Well Mr Patrick came right on time, and he had also brought his friend Tony. So there was a knock, and Amaka quickly went to open the door, as her and Chris sat on the couch to watch a movie. She opened the door.
" Patrick Hi ... TONY!!!", she screamed.
"AMAKA!!! ",Tony said surprised.
"well it seems you guys know each other ",he looks at the both of them.
"yes, it's quite a long story",Tony says to Patrick.
Amaka looks on shyly at both of them,
" could you gentlemen please come in", Amaka says.
" Oh yes ", Patrick says.
Now at the dinner table, Tony and Patrick can be seen both looking at Chris in a stern look. She looks at both of them and gives Chris a glance.
" Oh sorry about my manners, this is Chris, my Bestie... ", she says proudly as she holds Chris hands tightly on the table.
"okay, are you guys dating or engaged ",Patrick says comfortably
Amaka looks on to Chris, and Chris smiles, then Amaka gives a large crackle of laughter.
" Chris is gay... ",Amaka says in a straight tone.
"ohhh!!!... Sorry man", Patrick says as he and Tony both laugh loudly.
" well please can we eat... Am farmished", Patrick says.
"oh yes... Let's pray", Amaka says and prays.
Well as they all eat, Mr Patrick breaks the silence after some while.
" so Amaka, about you and Tony ..." he says objectively.
"Tony was...Amm... ", she says slowly as she looks on to him shyly.
" well we were lovers,when we were in the University ",Tony breaks in.
"okay... That's cool", Patrick nods as he munches on his meal.
Well dinner was over, and Amaka tells Patrick for a private talk between the two of them at her balcony.
Then Patrick stands and follows Amaka, as she waits and holds the rails of the balcony,looking head on to Patrick as he comes forth.
"patrick...i want to tell you something ", Amaka says with a sigh.
" yes what's wrong, Amaka ", Patrick speaks concerned.
" About our last discussion... The issue of me marrying you", Amaka says.
" okay... " Patrick says as he folds his hands looking with a stern face.
" I'm sorry, I want to make things work, I really do like you", Amaka says in pitiful tone.
"And your just knowing now", Patrick says.
" No, I was confused, I wanted to be sure",Amaka says stuttering.
" Well am sorry, Amaka, I've got a new lover ", Patrick says.
Amaka looks on to him saddened, then she pulls her gaze from him and looks somewhere else.
" well, I GOT YOU!!!", Patrick says as he laughs hard.
" Patrick you slowpoke ... I hate you", she says as she beats his chest softly.
"we can start all over again, Amaka, but this time not as friends but real lovers", Patrick says.
"yes!!!... Patrick", she says as they both hug tightly.
Chris smiles and claps, while Tony looks on to Amaka and gives a devilish grin, while Amaka looks at Chris and Tony, smiling happily... Tony winks seductively at her. She becomes shocked at this.
Well Amaka takes the dishes from the table to the kitchen, while Patrick and Chris discuss, Tony gives an excuse to go to the bathroom. Then he slyishly comes to the kitchen where Amaka was and holds her arms. Amaka looks back and sees its Tony.
" what do you want Tony ", Amaka says angrily.
" Well I just came to say congrats", Tony says in a funny way.
"well thank you... Now please...",she says as she gestures to the door.
" No until you give me those soft lips of yours I miss them", he says as he holds her soft slender arms tightly.
" I swear if you touch me, I'll scream and I guess you do not want Patrick to hear about this", she says fearfully.
" Are you still scared of me... Amaka ", he says smiling with an evil grin.
"yes, I know your a psycho... I know what your capable of doing, I thought seeing you with Patrick your a changed man", she says panting heavily.
" A leopard never looses his spot, beautiful ", he says as he brings his lips forward to her's, holding her tightly.
Amaka struggles and screams loudly. Patrick and Chris quickly rush in.
" Tony you dare devil ",Patrick says angrily.
"what man, come on we are all men, amm... except... Lady Chris here... ",Tony says leisurely and gestures funnily to Chris .
" How dare you",Chris screams loudly.
Then Patrick and Tony exchange punches, as Amaka and Chris tries separating the duel.
" please Patrick stop!!!... Tony isn't ordinary, Now Tony get out of my house " , she says with tears on her eyes.
"Patrick, you dared lift your hands on me because of my woman, well this ain't the last of me, I'm going to give you a taste of dangerous tony", he says as he dashes of the door angrily.
" this guy is crazy oo, someone I had invited ", he says as he looks onto Amaka surprisingly.
"I'm sorry baby, I'm really scared of that guy",she says as she cuddles him softly ." How did you know him", She says.
" we are working on a project in my office that's all, and I had just invited him", Patrick says to Amaka.
"well Amaka, am living, the insults I've grabbed this night is too much", Chris says as he walks to the door angrily.
"okay bye Chris", Amaka says.
"yes bye sweet heart ", Chris says as he moved out the door.
"silly gay man... ", Amaka says as she mocks at Chris and closes the door when his afar.
"you Naughty girl... But what you doing with a silly man as that", Patrick says to Amaka.
" well he just knows how to gist, it's just to while away my time ", she says as they both laugh hard to the bedroom.

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Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by queenitee(f): 9:42am On Jul 12, 2018
Okay, it's actually a nice story

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Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by Nobody: 12:06pm On Jul 12, 2018
queenitee:
Okay, it's actually a nice story
Thanks I'll be continuing in a few moments now.
Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by Nobody: 12:36pm On Jul 12, 2018
Chapter 4
Death on my bed

The evening was cool and breezy, the room where Patrick and Amaka stayed was embellished with such Royal English decor, perfumed candles could be seen on the table opposite the large bed. Petals of pink roses could also be seen sprawling the floor decoratively. It was a night specially prepared for Romance by Amaka for Patrick. The flow of ecstasy could be felt by Amaka as she cuddles Patrick softly. Then she stands up from the bed, seductively.
" Patrick, I've got a little surprise for you, you wait here for me", she says as she looks on to him seductively.
Patrick all drunk in love and liquor, couldn't mutter words of approval, but gestured telling her he'll be waiting.
Now an hour in the bathroom, she calls Patrick
"Baby, baby... Could I come now", she says in a slow and seductive way.
She wears a black thong, and a light net overall, which was making her black brazier and black pants visible, and made a bun with her hair, perfumed in Persian allure. She called again, when Patrick couldn't answer.
"Patrick, hope your not sleeping, we just got started", she says and opens the bathroom door to the bedroom slowly to make herself visible as she poses seductively.
But what she saw changed the whole night. Patrick was dead. She was aghast .she quickly rushes to the bed,and holds Patrick tightly , but her hands become reddened with his blood.
"Patrick, Patrick... " she screams.
Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by izaray(f): 1:22pm On Jul 12, 2018
What a wicked world embarassed

Op thanks, keep updating

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Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by Nobody: 1:27pm On Jul 12, 2018
Chapter 5
Craze

Amakas house is surrounded by the Nigerian investigative force, she sits on her couch in the living room, folding her arms and muttering . Chris comes in, and Amaka quickly runs to Chris and hugs him tightly.
" so sorry, Amaka, how did it happen... ", Chris says.
" I.. I... Don't know, he was on the bed am in the bathroom... And it just happened ", she says and burst into tears,and cuddles Chris tightly.
" Don't cry, let's hear from the police report, okay", Chris says as he takes her to a sit.
After some hours of investigating the murder scene, an official of the force comes straight to Amaka.

"Good evening, miss Amaka, I'm investigator yemi of the Nigerian investigative force, a pleasure meeting you", she says with a smirk on her face.
"yes, likewise ", Amaka says nervously.
"well can I have a word with you", Yemi says.
"why... I didn't kill Patrick... I didn't... Believe me", Amaka says in hysteria.
Chris then consoles her, and says "No Amaka, she's here to help us... She knows you didn't ",Chris gives Amaka an assured look.
" Are you sure, I don't want to go to prison ", Amaka says fearfully with sad wet eyes
"No you won't, I'll be here for you always", Chris says assuredly.
Then investigator yemi gives a gesture to Amaka and says "can we go outside".
Amaka nods her head, and slowly follows miss yemi outside.
Investigator Opeyemi Balogun, an official of the Nigerian investigative force. She was a force to reckon with, she's solved about two hundred crime cases since her inception into office. A proud and bossy lady, round and chubby, she had large eyes, swollen lips, and a shiny, spotless dark skin.
Now investigator yemi and Amaka were outside, sitting at different stools. And the interrogation began.
" now miss A-m..aka okafor, I'm a correct", she says squinting intensively at the report she was holding.
Amaka nods like a little child, affirming her name.
"How did you know Mr patrick" , miss yemi says.
" we began dating... This month", Amaka says.
"Really!... But based on this report, it's been a while ", she says
" we dated once or sorry we were friends... But I wanted to be sure... " she says.
"sure of what!... ", miss yemi cuts in abruptly.
"sure if he loved me... ", Amaka says nervously.
"okay... And when you knew he didn't really love you, you had to poison his drink and stab him thirteen times", she says comfortably.
"No... No... No, I didn't kill him...i can never kill... ",she says panting profusely.
" well based on the investigations, we found your finger prints on the liquor your served,on the bottle and also on the glass given to mr Patrick ", miss yemi says measuring her eyes to Amakas.
"Yes I served him the drink... But I didn't kill him", says Amaka.
"well we also found the murder weapon, an eight inch kitchen knife,and your finger prints were also on them", says Miss yemi.
" WHAT... No, your lying... ", she says panting.
"well it's all here... In the investigative report", Miss yemi says. " and am afraid to tell you your under arrest for the murder of Mr Patrick... Corporal Jones arrest her... ", she's commands him.
"don't TOUCH ME!... ", Amaka cries loud.
Chris runs to Amaka and says, " what's it Amaka "
" I didn't kill him, they are framing me up... HELP me Chris, I don't want to go to prison", Amaka cries.
"Madam, please how would you say this... My friend is innocent ", Chris says to miss yemi.
" well get her a good lawyer then, if you know she's really innocent... Boys let's go!!! ", says Miss yemi.

As the van with Amaka inside, and some official cars drives off, Amaka could be seen crying profusely as she looks on to Chris. Chris was in tears.
Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by izaray(f): 2:36pm On Jul 12, 2018
Oh poor Amaka

Thanks for updating, God bless

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Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by Nobody: 3:04pm On Jul 12, 2018
Chapter 6
More craze

In prison custody, Amaka could be seen sitting on the floor, with her eyes wet and red. Her beauty seemed to fade away every passing day as she drowns in her gloom. She was awaiting trial.
After some few weeks, her trial came and the sitting judge had adjourned her case based on her hysteria,and she was also offered bail with psychological counselling for some time till her trial. She had no money for her bail.
Then a particular day the prison warden,a stout ,manly looking woman, and peculiarly aggressive in tone, comes to release Amaka from the cell.
"okay Amaka, someone has bailed you out... ", she says gently.
" Thank you Ma... Ma did the person say his or her name", Amaka says.
" what kind of irritating question is this, are you not going to see him there... Well if you want to know, is that your boy friend that behaves like a woman, his at the lobby", she says angrily and gently as she ends her reply.
Amaka lights up in happiness, as she could not wait to see Chris "so Chris bailed me out... ", she says and smiles.
Amaka is being escorted by the prison warden to the lobby, where she sees Chris on a bench, patiently waiting for her.
"Chris", she calls loudly.
"Amaka... ", Chris calls back, and quickly runs to embrace her ," I missed you so much", he says.
"Me too... ", Amaka says, "so where did you get the money to bail me out", she says whispering softly.
"well... It wasn't me", Chris says.
"Who... ", Amaka says confused.
Then Tony slowly comes in, to present himself to Amaka.
"Tony... Chris have you gone mad... ",Amaka says angrily.
"Amaka, you do have to understand, he was our only option... "Chris begs
"why didn't you just leave me in prison, I do not want to be indebted to this rogue ", she emphatically says.
"let's go home and I'll explain it all", Chris says assuredly, gazing at her.
"you better.. Mtcheww ", she hisses,as she walks proudly out of the lobby, avoiding to give Tony a glance.

Tony drops Amaka and Chris at Amakas house. While he waits for both of them to alight from the car.
"Chris thanks for the help... Amaka bye dear", Tony says as he stares at Amakas eyes. Amaka replies with a hiss.
Amaka is seen sitting on her couch in the living room,as she waits for Chris to serve lunch.
"Now Chris, I do want answers, why Tony of all people ", she says rhetorically.
Chris serves the meal on the dinning table, while he slowly walks to Amaka and sits by her side. While Amaka fumes with anger on her face.
"This guy really loves you... ", Chris says understandably slow.
"Chris, are you in your right senses... I'm being accused of murder of Patrick and your here telling me of love by a man that assaulted me", Amaka says sarcastically.
" Sweetheart, that doesn't deny you the right of being happy", Chris says, trying to make Amaka understand.

"Are you really okay Chris!... Okay how am I sure it isn't Tony that killed Patrick", she comfortably says. " look at it this way, Patrick dies, and Tony swoops in to take his opportunity Now!... that man is a snake", she says aggressively, biting her lips, as her face looks away from Chris.
"But the police are still investigating, and Tony has not been found liable",Chris says to Amaka.
" But who could do this to me, who could hate me so much to ruin my life", Amaka says as her voice cracks in a sad tone.
"Don't cry... ", Chris consoles her, " except Tony and Patrick do you have any past lovers or did you ever date a married man", Chris tells her.
"CHRIS!... Married men, no!... And Patrick and Tony are really the only men I've really seriously dated", she tries to remember, as she says to Chris.
" Because I believe this is an act of jealousy... A crazy jealous lover", Chris says to her.
"Why... ",Amaka says to him.
" The murder was planned, the person who did such can only know your routine, not to leave any trace in his or her murder scene", Chris says to her.
" wait!...me and Zainab ...she was once a room mate, and I can say she knows all my routines, and we once had a brawl about her man she thought I was dating", Amaka says, trying to remember , " then I had told her to leave my house, and she had sworn to deal with me, I know that girl could be really crazy at times but not to kill someone, Chris",Amaka says perplexed.
"Nobody, has to be trusted in this case, Amaka", Chris says with seriousness in his eyes.
" How would Zainab do such a thing to me", Amaka says angrily.
" Well do not worry, we would deal with it... Come... Let's have lunch",Chris says as he grabs Amakas hand, leading her to the dining table.
Amaka silently whispers as she sits on her chair " that girl is really crazy... Zainab kills!!!"

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Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by Nobody: 3:21pm On Jul 12, 2018
izaray:
Oh poor Amaka

Thanks for updating, God bless
Thanks Izaray... Thank you for taking your time in reading it... God bless you plenty. smiley

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Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by queenitee(f): 6:51pm On Jul 12, 2018
It's lovely, but do not forget to take to the correction someone said up there.
It's a story, so it should be "He's watching me" and not "His watching me"

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Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by Nobody: 7:13pm On Jul 12, 2018
queenitee:
It's lovely, but do not forget to take to the correction someone said up there.
It's a story, so it should be "He's watching me" and not "His watching me"
Just found out, how to change it... Thanks @queenitee... God bless you
Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by Nobody: 8:08pm On Jul 12, 2018
Chapter 7
Freak Call

Amaka becomes so depressed, and hallucinates. Her hysteria begins to increase every passing day, and the doctors drugs isn't helping either. Then on a Saturday morning, she gets a call on her cellphone.
" Hello... ", she says nervously.
" Amaka... How are you ", the voice speaks slow and shrewd.
"Whose this", Amaka says quickly. "Tony I told you severally, am not interested... Why bothering me", she says.
" You love Tony... " the voice says and sighs deeply.
"No I don't, and please your freaking me out... Whose this", she says.
"Your worst nightmare... Your stalker ", he says and laughs evilly.
Amaka becomes frantic ,Her hands begin to tremble as she holds the cellphone.
"Can I help you", she says in a low tone.
"I'm watching you, I love that dress your wearing right now... So sexy on you", the voice says crookedly.
She looks around, quivering, her mind becomes unstable,she stands up slowly and goes to the window and opens it slightly to have a peek outside.
"What do you want from me", Amaka says with a deep breath.
"Chris is going to be next, and after that is Tony, and I'll have you all to myself ", the voice says mischievously .
"Okay... You want me, you can have me, please don't hurt my friend Chris ", she begs him.

" I'm going to kill them, just the same way I killed Patrick... You think your smart, huh, I kept on waiting for you to love me. And when I'm done with them, your going to spend a really long time in jail", the voice says "And all that pride you got, will fade away like a rose dead and dry",he says mockingly.

" I'm sorry... ", she cries loudly on the phone.
The cellphone drops on the floor. She kneels in tears,crying loudly; then Chris comes in.
" What's it... Amaka,whats wrong", Chris says repeatedly.
"He called... ", Amaka cries the more.
"Who... is it Tony!... ", Chris says concerned.
" It's not Zainab that's the killer... ",she cries more loudly.
Chris's countenance changes, fear in his eyes.
"The murderer called you ", he says as he gazes at Amaka fearfully.
She nods in approval. "I guess you and Tony are next", she says in a grim tone. "we've got to tell Tony...yes Tony is in danger.. get my phone ", she says quickly.
Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by ITbomb(m): 5:53am On Jul 13, 2018
Following from Day 1
It's really flowing

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Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by Nobody: 11:03am On Jul 13, 2018
ITbomb:
Following from Day 1
It's really flowing
Thanks for reading @ITbomb smiley...God bless you.

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Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by izaray(f): 11:19am On Jul 13, 2018
Hmm..This is becoming scaring, is it by force to love some1

Op thanks jhor, more ink to ur pen

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Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by Nobody: 1:22pm On Jul 13, 2018
Chapter 8
It becomes more bloody


"Hello...", Amaka says quickly.
"Amaka baby... I knew you were going to change your mind after all ", he says smoothly in tone.
"Tony ,the killer called...", she says hurriedly.
"And what did he say... ", Tony cuts in quickly.
"Chris and you are the next in his list... His going to kill you both", Amaka says fearfully.
"Why... What do I have to do with all this... ", Tony says confused and cuts in quickly.
"No much questions Tony, come to my house and I'll give you every detail you have to know", she says assuredly.
"Okay... Okay... I'll be there in an hour... ", Tony says.
And they both drop their calls.

Chris could be seen watching intensely at the neighborhood, perhaps he could see any sinister looking person around spying on them.
"Amaka don't you think we should report to the police ", Chris says ,as he quivers looking around the neighborhood ,watching at the balcony.

"No... Chris this psycho may be dumb but he ain't stupid", Amaka says objectively, " As we speak, his looking at our every move... And the only way to defeat him is by acting smart and playing his own game", she says seriously.
" It seems you watch a lot of movies a lot, we are talking about a murderer here and your telling me about playing his own game", Chris says fearfully, as he mocks Amaka.
"Chris... Chris... Look at me...", she says and Chris turns to look at her, " With the three of us,we are going to be okay... Alright", she says assuredly, and cuddles Chris warmly.


Tony drives to Amaka's house and knocks at the door. Chris quickly rushes to open the door, knowing its Tony. "Tony... How are you... Come in please", Chris says warmly.
"Thank you Chris... Where's Amaka", Tony prys the room.
Amaka rushes down the stairs, and quickly runs to embrace Tony. "Your welcome Tony... Please let's seat down", Amaka says as she gestures for a seat to Tony.

Amaka gives Tony all the details about the killers last call, and suggest's a plan.
"Now Tony as you already know, the killer lives around my neighborhood and he surely knows your here", She says to Tony, "His watching my every move...his trying to use the people am closer with to get to me ", she says further.
"So what's the plan, Amaka ", Tony says to Amaka.
" I believe the killer is going to call anytime from now... I do have a GPS app on my phone that can be able to trace the killers whereabouts, and when we do know his location, we call the police ", she says objectively.

" That's a great plan Amaka, your a genius ", Tony says excitedly.
"Yes and my main motive of calling you here, is because I needed protection... I and Chris have been so scared", she says to Tony.
"Well you and Chris don't need to fear anymore, I'll protect you guys... Okay", Tony says as he looks at them both.
"Okay let me go make some tea for the cool evening", Chris says as he head to the kitchen.
Amaka and Tony are seen waiting patiently for the call by the killer, but there was no call. Amaka and Tony becomes frustrated as they both sip their teas. Chris watches head on at the cellphone expecting the call from the killer. Tony and Amaka begins laughing at every little word spoken by each of them, they become sleepy.
"Well, I feel so sleepy Tony... ", she says with her eyes partially closed and yawning. She begins to stagger as she goes up the stairs.
"Can I help you... ", Tony says concerned and in a drowsy manner.
"No... Thank you... ", she says softly in a drowsy tone.
"Okay good night guys... I'll be sleeping on the couch ", Chris says yawning.
Tony lifts up Amaka, and carries her to her bedroom.
Amaka looks on to Tony, and carresses his chin as he slowly places her on her bed.
"I love you Patrick... ", she whispers softly.
Tony carresses her her legs and tries pulling off her underwear. She holds his arms tightly.
"No... Please Patrick, I told you am a virgin", she says and dozes off quickly.

The next morning, Amaka wakes up so fatigued. She looks around her and sees Tony sleeping by her side. She sees blood on her bed sheet. Amaka becomes frantic and cries loud on to Tony. Tony quickly wakes up.
" I...i... I thought you were dead", she says perplexed, "If your not dead why's there blood on my sheet",she says as she pulls the bedsheet from her legs. She had been defiled.
" Tony you BASTARD! ",she cries loudly.
Tony becomes bewildered and dumbfounded as he looks at Amaka.
" Why... Why Tony... You RAPED me", she screams loudly.
" I swear Amaka, it's not me... I didn't do it", Tony begged.
" You LIAR... ", Amaka cries loudly.
Chris rushes in ,as he hears the cries upstairs.
"what happened Amaka... ", Chris says troubled.
Amaka looks on to Chris, Her eyes were sad and wet.
"Tony raped me, Chris... He raped me", she cries.
" Tony... How could you... ", Chris reprimands Tony.
"Believe me Chris... I didn't do this", Tony says.
"Then why are you Naked...", Chris says.
"I don't know... I don't remember anything... ", Tony says confused.
"Get OUT! of my house", Amaka cries loudly.
"Now you can see, she's not in the mood... You better leave, please...", Chris says to Tony as he pulls him out of the room "And here are your clothes... Rapist! ", Chris says and throws his clothes to him outside the house.

Chris comes to console Amaka as she cries loudly. He cuddles her warmly.
" Why are men so wicked Chris... ", she sobs and ask's.
"Sorry sweetheart... Take some juice, it would cool the nerves ", Chris gives Amaka a cool juice to drink.
Amaka sob's and sleeps quietly on his chest, then Chris slowly keeps her on the bed to rest.

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Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by Nobody: 1:36pm On Jul 13, 2018
izaray:
Hmm..This is becoming scaring, is it by force to love some1

Op thanks jhor, more ink to ur pen
I'm telling you... grin grin... Thank you dear for reading. God bless you. smiley
Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by Nobody: 5:13pm On Jul 13, 2018
Chapter 9
It all has an end


Tony feels confused as he sits on his couch,in his living room. It all looks so strange . He never touched Amaka,he thought. He hears a knock at the door. He goes to open it.
" What's up... What brings you here... ", Tony says, as the person quickly thrust a dagger to his stomach.
" Rest in peace, Tony", the voice says crookedly and hoarse in tone.
"Why... ", Tony speaks faintly ,as the killer hits him with a stick. Tony darkens out and falls on the floor.


Amaka wakes up from her bed, she feels hungry and head to the kitchen to make a meal for herself. She lights the fire, and place a pot of uncooked noodles on the gas stove. She pour's some water in the pot , and waits patiently for the noodles to boil.
" Now where did Chris keep all the spices",she says tiredly, as she looks through the kitchen drawer. In searching the drawer, she had found a sachet filled with a white powdery substance. The description written on it ,was called "Ketamine". It was a sleeping drug.
"This is a dissociative anesthetic ,I give it to my patients in the hospital when I do want to inject them",she says suspiciously. She goes on and search the kitchen drawer more further and finds a cellphone . She switches it on, and goes through it. She finds her number in the cellphone.

She hears an applause behind her, and slowly turns to know who. It was Chris.
"Chris... Your the one all along", she says fearfully staring at him carefully.
"Well, what a streak of luck... Your really smart, Amaka ",Chris says cleverly as he steps forward slowly.
"Why, Chris... You were my best friend ", she says as she moves backward.
"Really!... Amaka do you think am foolish", Chris says hoarsely , " You think I didn't know, how you ridiculed me in front of your friends because of my personality, I told you all my secrets, expecting you to love me one day... ", Chris says disgruntled.
"LOVE!... I thought you were gay... ",Amaka cried.
" Yes I was...but I loved you, couldn't you see the signs", Chris says slowly and understandably staring at her, " I could do anything for you... but when it seemed Patrick wasn't ready to make me have my way I... ",Chris says.
"...You had to kill him, Chris", she cuts in abruptly, with tears in her eyes.
" You where the cause",Chris screamed loud ,pointing to Amaka a dagger.
Amaka shrieks, as she moves further backwards.
"How was I the cause Chris... ", she begs.
" Remember that night when you called me a 'silly gay man', and you also told Patrick I have no importance to you", Chris says angrily to her as he moves forward slowly with the dagger.
"Chris I'm sorry... Forgive me, we can solve all this like adults", Amaka says crying.
"It's too late, I've had all I wanted from you... The stuff you held too dearly... Your Virginity! ", he says with a smirk, "And if I do let you go now... I'll go to jail, and I don't want to", Chris says to Amaka.
"You raped me... Chris", Amaka says confused as she stares at Chris bitterly.
"Yes I did... It was all planned, I drugged you and Tony's tea... And you guys fell right into my trap...i wouldn't deny it you were sensational",Chris says and smiles.
"You need help Chris... I can help you... ", Amaka says assuredly.
"NO... ", Chris screams loud, "I'm going to end it once and for all here and NOW! ", he says as he moves forward to grab her.
Amaka quickly throws the boiling noodles on his face, Chris screams loud, while she escapes from him. She rushes to open the door ,but the door is locked. Chris quickly grabs her and threatens her.
"You think you can escape from me that easily Amaka...if you scream, I'll kill you and cut you into pieces...", he says to her, "I'll also boil your flesh in a pot, and eat you like a sweet meal that you are", he says as he fondles with her body. Amaka cries hard and pleads for mercy.
" Come on Amaka... Let's go have some fun time in the bushes", he says to her as he kisses her neck.
"Chris... I don't want to die... I'm begging you", Amaka begs with tears.
He drags her outside to the car, and places at her mouth a strip of gum tape. Amaka trembles hard, as he touches her. Then he kisses her cheek and closes the side door of the car, and quickly goes for the driver seat. He switches on the ignition and drives off.
"Don't worry Amaka, I'll protect you... If I kill you, no one can take you away from me... You'll be dead and waiting for me at the other side, where we can live happily ever after ", he says with craziness in his eyes, as he drives by the side of the beach to the bushes. Amaka quickly opens the side door of the car and flings out of the car, her legs where hurt. The car stops abruptly, while Amaka runs to the beach for help, perhaps to see someone.
"AMAKA... YOU CAN'T ESCAPE FROM ME", Chris says as he matches forward the beach, with the knife.
Amaka removes the gum tape from her lips, as she limps further to the rough pebbles of the beach,crying for help.
" What have you done to Tony... Why are you with his car", she says crying softly, as she crawls on the rough pebbles on the beach, bruising her knees.
"Tony is dead... I killed him... ", Chris says laughing hard.
Amaka keeps on trying to run, screaming for help, Her legs sore and red, as she she tries moving further she gets tripped by a stone,and falls on the pebble floor. She sees his silhouette from afar, as she looks on to him dizzy and dazed. He matches forward with a knife in his right hand. She hears his footsteps.
"please... Please have merc... ", she says faintly to Chris. And a blow his heard. Tony hits Chris on the back of his head with a huge rock. Chris becomes unconscious immediately and falls on the pebble floor.
"Amaka are you, okay... ",Tony shakes Amaka lightly.
"Tony... Is that you", she says faintly with her eyes partially closed.
"Yes it's me... ", Tony says encouragingly
"He said he killed you... Chris... he killed Patrick... ",she says faintly and dozes off.

The police arrest Chris. Amaka and Tony are being treated by the paramedics. Tony comes to see Amaka, while she's being treated.
"So how you doing... ", Tony says to Amaka.
" I'm okay... Thank you Tony you had saved me",she says, "I thought he was someone I could forever trust but... ",she says as Tony cuts in.
"Shhh... Just forget it, right now we have to give thanks to God we are both alive...okay ", Tony says as he stares affectionately at her eyes.
"How is the knife injury... Hope you are okay now", she says as she touches Tony's wound.
" I am... The pain has subsided", Tony says and smiles to her.

Investigator Opeyemi Balogun walks straight to were Amaka is being treated by the paramedics. She smiles to Tony and Amaka.
"Well miss Amaka, how are you doing ", She says with a smile.
" Very well, thank you", Amaka replies.
"Well I've come to give you good news, you've been exonerated from the murder of Mr Patrick, and that's because Chris confessed to the murder of Mr Patrick", miss Opeyemi says to her with a smile on her face.
" Thank you... His a good man, he just needs some psychological help", Amaka says to her.
" Well that'll be for the judge to decide don't you think", Miss opeyemi says to her.
Amaka nods her head in approval.
" Well have a good evening... Amaka ", she says as she brisk's off.

Chris was sentenced to twenty years in prison for the murder of Mr Patrick, and the attempted murder of Mr Tony and Miss Amaka respectively. Amaka and Tony married after two years of courtship and had a baby boy. His name was Patrick.





THE END

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Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by Nobody: 8:16pm On Jul 13, 2018
Izaray, ITbomb and queenitee . Thank you so much guys for the support. More stories for your entertainment coming soon. I really appreciate you guys. God bless you all plenty. smiley

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Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by izaray(f): 12:48pm On Jul 16, 2018
Aww...Finally Amaka and Tony got married, so happy about that!

Op thanks for writing this wonderful story! More grace!

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Re: HE'S WATCHING ME... by queenitee(f): 4:25pm On Jul 16, 2018
Awwwn, it's really a nice story

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