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The Sun Dances In Your Eyes by Deshalom(m): 4:47pm On Oct 14, 2010 |
Hi friends, can you use "the sun dances in your eyes" to write a poem if u can pls post it here and u will be doing me a great favour. |
Re: The Sun Dances In Your Eyes by cbase: 6:41pm On Oct 25, 2010 |
Hi Deshalom, This is what I have about what you asked I hope it is not already too late Hope it sounds like what you want. Enjoy The Sun Dances In Your Eyes As written by Ceebase Wife, I’ll tell you about your eyes As exquisite as marble carved on ice Beneath the open skies The sun dances in your eyes Yes, the sun dances in your eyes Beautifully and giddy as butterflies I think I hear as it cries The sun dances in your eyes You’ve got the most beautiful smile Complimenting the fire in your eyes Stretching, making that beautiful face an artistic prize The sun dances in your eyes Should I tell a tale of lies About my gray hair and the dyes You’re the woman of my younger days The sun dances in your eyes Not by powers nor might If I should roll across miles of mire Or swim across rivers of fire, I’ll never tire, gazing into your eyes The sun dances in your eyes The sun in your eyes It attacks me like missiles Contentedly I sigh, The sun dances in your eyes For me a glass scotch on the rocks And a plate of French fries For you two chicken pies And a bottle of Smirnoff ice While you get the foods and drinks I’ll continue about your eyes on ink, The sun dances in your eyes Yes we are old, but very much young at heart You are the woman after my heart The mother of my kids and priestess of my loins The sun dances in your eyes You raised my sons and made us proud of each other My daughter you taught the beauty of fires Fires to captivate another Woman, thou art of great styles The sun dances in your eyes Our kids are all grown Married and in their own homes It’s just the two of us again Saying hi, never saying bye Whilst the sun dances in your eye I was a firefighter A fireman fighting fires But how do I fight these fireworks? The sun dancing in your eyes Through my years of firefighting Saving lives and bodies from burning buildings One fire I dared not fight The fiery sun dancing in your eyes Nigh draws the night Here we sit in twilight Waiting the dusk and fireflies Yet, the sun dances in your eyes I could talk all day about your eyes As exquisite as marble carved from ice Never minding time as it flies Like ghouls beneath the open skies But tomorrow in ambush lies Moving towards dawn with great strides While I sleep, I’ll dream again as other nights The sun dancing in your eyes |
Re: The Sun Dances In Your Eyes by Joecoollorenzo(m): 5:40am On Oct 26, 2010 |
Wow wow wow wow, that was blastin cbase, gawd, dat was a fabolous piece, u deserve a laurel for it. That realy was a master piece. Chop knockle mehn lets just get the fun out of this, i try my best i cook out somfin now n post it below dis one, and wud b xpectin oda contribution. I like d way cbase took the challenge, its sensational, aite lets crack em nuts. |
Re: The Sun Dances In Your Eyes by Joecoollorenzo(m): 6:06am On Oct 26, 2010 |
*THE SUN DANCES IN UR EYEZ* nne, i have been watching u from afar 4rm that distance i saw d twinklin of a star how come?? Wait! Should that be fire flies i got closer and saw the sun dancin in ur eyes who are u i stuttered and ask the rays emittin could make even cupid bask i tot to myself, could she be an angel a pearl, a treasure, oh it struck me mother earth's jewel but how come the sun was dancing in eyes nope, i fink u must be a breed of some paradise God! Yea God, u must be heaven sent does it mean God has sent u to me as a present? The way she looked at me i knew she loved me what?? Me?? Dia was no dancin sun in my life but she gbadu me my val, lemme tell u straight my mind its clear u are one one of a kind dark me, ur dancin sun eyes came findin' lookin at tchu, i knew sun love was blindin take my hands and lemme die lookin into ur eyes balls just like an unendin flame in paradise halls u brighten my days with ur sun rays and radiate my ways with ur eyes always oh my seraphic dear the sun in ur eyz wif the rainbow, what a pair dis mystery is hard to unravel did i say ur smile was a marvel gosh! I must have to take u as my val its end time, i need u for my survival ur hotnes made me froze to zero can't imagine myself being ur romeo i breath u wif every breath i take wif out u my world wud b a mistake ur lighten the darkest part of me locked up in u is when i feel free coz the dancin sun in ur eyes brings me freedom 4rm al my latent lies the sun dancing in ur eyes makes agkow my darky skies havin u wif me up in the sky i cant fall wif the storms of life ragin i stand tall d dancin sun in u became my inner strength the strength of being me at any length my sun shine i crave u to my core i never realy existed without u there was no life before not until u came dancin thru i see u and my heart blaze in ur sunny eyes forever i wana gaze even if it makes me loose my sight the dancin sun in ur eyes would remain my light who cares whether there is nitefall who cares if there is darknes atall all i need is the dancin sun in ur eyes and to darknes, se can kis$ my a$s goobyes i cud sing and write of the dancin sun in ur eyes even if eternity becoms the prize the xpression of my lips i wouldn't minimize for u, for the dancin sun in ur eyes i'd mak dat sacrifice the other words wud remain in my heart my valentine forever hold my hands and lemme die carressin ur eyes i'd rather die with ur lips on mine than live forever wifout sayin d sun dances in ur eyes MITCHA IN PARADISE *JOECOOL* |
Re: The Sun Dances In Your Eyes by thiscounts(m): 10:15am On Oct 26, 2010 |
What a challenge!Cee-base I read your After All These Years and it struck my locked-in- wanting to write now I smile at this as I read through,it dawned on me that you are not a novice. Joecollenrenzo you got the sun dances in your eyes too with the twist you gave it. Hmmn I'm thinking can I put on something down I wish I could beat you two but I'm only good at Prose.My poems have been flat without much of Figuratives.Maybe I wont type on-line without editing.Cheers |
Re: The Sun Dances In Your Eyes by cbase: 7:37am On Nov 10, 2010 |
Thank You, Joe 4 putting somethin up, mehn u get am well well oo, ur post was fire. and Thiscounts, i know you can do something about this, if you put ursef down to it i've seen what you can do. thanks for the compliments, man. you give me the inspiration to continue writing you and Joe and other friends here. come on, do it, we're all waiting. blesss us with ur "the sun dances in your eyes" |
Re: The Sun Dances In Your Eyes by thiscounts(m): 11:49am On Nov 11, 2010 |
We were just in our early twenties right? You were my Eve and I was your Adam The innocent us! raring to become the new Adam and Eve We were'nt that recursive in our expression It was just Yes or No of rectitude The nature was just in its holiness In the garden of Eden, Not until the Adam and Eve ate the apple and began to see the nature in a diferrent way They were naked I saw it clearer that we were and we began to see in our ravings that the horses fly that the moon weeps that the sun dances And that is the way it is now that,and always I n your eyes the sun dances The feeling of another paradise full of lies. Not untill we ate the apple. Thanks C-base you prodded me into writing this |
Re: The Sun Dances In Your Eyes by cbase: 7:44am On Nov 12, 2010 |
wow, and you said u can't write, that was a sweet piece up there |
Re: The Sun Dances In Your Eyes by cbase: 4:34pm On Jan 31, 2011 |
well, whateva happend to deshalom. has he offed with our favors and no thanks returned or what? |
Re: The Sun Dances In Your Eyes by thiscounts(m): 5:03pm On Jan 31, 2011 |
@cbase, or maybe he is still expecting to hear from Uncle Wole.Cheers |
Re: The Sun Dances In Your Eyes by cbase: 4:44pm On Feb 01, 2011 |
@Thiscounts. i wonder oo, lol |
Re: The Sun Dances In Your Eyes by thiscounts(m): 5:14pm On Feb 01, 2011 |
lol.I will try to compose another beautiful one for him on this thread and maybe he would appreciate that |
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