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Please, This Needs A Title by enix2dmix: 11:11pm On Jul 29, 2011
I see the moon…. The moon sees me
and the one I long to see
God bless the moon and God bless me
And the one I long to see
I had a love so pure and sweet
But she left me and went home
Take care of her as I have done
For…. You’ve got two and I have none
When she and I were one
We had our fun
We would hold hands, sit and watch the flamingoes run
Then we’d lay back on the sand and gaze at the beautiful
Star lit nights
…… the music of the night would then grow louder……
And Fireflies begin to dance in her eyes
That’s when she’s more beautiful than ever
The flame of love in our hearts is at its peak…,
We’d do what lovers do…,
Right under the starlit night
Beside the running stream
In the embrace of the gentle wind
I’ll hold her in my arms
when the wind gets chilly
I’ll carry her to bed in our little shed,
Then I’ll kiss her dreamy eyes goodnight…. …, ….
……, Now I’m all alone sitting on the river bank
There’s a beautiful sunset
…, but I’ve got no one to share it with
Bless her heart
I know she’s in the land of the sun
Where pain is none
My flame of love will continue to glow until it is time for my to go be with…, My love
Re: Please, This Needs A Title by MrGlobe(m): 12:14am On Jul 30, 2011
Easy. ---------- MY LOVE should be the title
Re: Please, This Needs A Title by Nobody: 5:47pm On Jul 30, 2011
it should be, God watch over my missing love cry
Re: Please, This Needs A Title by phonixy(m): 10:04am On Sep 22, 2011
The title dat best fits dis poem is LOST LOVE.
Re: Please, This Needs A Title by BiafranFirstSon(m): 3:43pm On Oct 07, 2011
"My love" should be the the title

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