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Please, This Needs A Title by enix2dmix: 11:11pm On Jul 29, 2011 |
I see the moon…. The moon sees me and the one I long to see God bless the moon and God bless me And the one I long to see I had a love so pure and sweet But she left me and went home Take care of her as I have done For…. You’ve got two and I have none When she and I were one We had our fun We would hold hands, sit and watch the flamingoes run Then we’d lay back on the sand and gaze at the beautiful Star lit nights …… the music of the night would then grow louder…… And Fireflies begin to dance in her eyes That’s when she’s more beautiful than ever The flame of love in our hearts is at its peak…, We’d do what lovers do…, Right under the starlit night Beside the running stream In the embrace of the gentle wind I’ll hold her in my arms when the wind gets chilly I’ll carry her to bed in our little shed, Then I’ll kiss her dreamy eyes goodnight…. …, …. ……, Now I’m all alone sitting on the river bank There’s a beautiful sunset …, but I’ve got no one to share it with Bless her heart I know she’s in the land of the sun Where pain is none My flame of love will continue to glow until it is time for my to go be with…, My love |
Re: Please, This Needs A Title by MrGlobe(m): 12:14am On Jul 30, 2011 |
Easy. ---------- MY LOVE should be the title |
Re: Please, This Needs A Title by Nobody: 5:47pm On Jul 30, 2011 |
it should be, God watch over my missing love |
Re: Please, This Needs A Title by phonixy(m): 10:04am On Sep 22, 2011 |
The title dat best fits dis poem is LOST LOVE. |
Re: Please, This Needs A Title by BiafranFirstSon(m): 3:43pm On Oct 07, 2011 |
"My love" should be the the title |
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