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Pls Nairalanders I Need A Constructive Criticism On This Pies Of Work by talk2cj08(m): 5:34pm On May 15, 2012
This is an orange juice label I design for one of my client in Asaba delta state.pls guys I need ur pies of advice and correction before printing. Pls let ur advice and criticism be constructive.

Re: Pls Nairalanders I Need A Constructive Criticism On This Pies Of Work by ugo2u(m): 9:05pm On May 15, 2012
2nd Pic "ORANGED FLAVOR" na orange or oranged suppose dey dia?
Re: Pls Nairalanders I Need A Constructive Criticism On This Pies Of Work by OKX(m): 10:41pm On May 15, 2012
nice.
Aside from d typo. i feel ur product font cld b beta. D product name doesnt leap out @ u, unless dats intentional.(mayb a more sans serif font dats simpler n bolder)

D color choice in d second suggests 'milk' not 'fruit'.

D juice pouring image is d major visual appeal, so keep it as free from clutter as possible, id shift d product name slightly away from it.

Writing d 'orange flavor' in blu n white has me a lil uncomfy too. U know u gatta use orange n black na, lol
beta dan average tho. Good job
Re: Pls Nairalanders I Need A Constructive Criticism On This Pies Of Work by GraphicsSolo: 11:26am On May 17, 2012
What a marvelous design, but I have a few observations for you.
1. It seems the colours you used are too strong for the soft drink design.
2. your background over shadowed the major image i.e orange.

Regards,
Re: Pls Nairalanders I Need A Constructive Criticism On This Pies Of Work by zumarock8(m): 11:13pm On May 20, 2012
87% grate job

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