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LAWLESSLY GRACEFULL-- What Do U Think About It by angayejuni: 7:48pm On May 21, 2012 |
Cosmic evolution Mummified lost treasures Hidden beneath this planet Only but pressure separates Diamonds from Gold A man's Conscience could never be sold Few roam the earth Angels among men The chosen The gifted They see beyond the canvas of a perfectly painted portrait They reach for the milky ways Re stacking the galaxy of things Demi-gods they 're seen Fractions of immortals beings Reality seems unreal Their actions Fantasies of only dreams Time tries to steal Memories of this I stay glued to my sleep Unawake To the world that now breeds on sin A perfect lip kiss Ignorance beckons bliss Faith over turns facts As a school child In lack of a snack My word hunger Drives me phrase crazy My mind swam away Far into sea Pursing A ship that had drowned Centuries before I was born My heart was scorned In fury It ignites and burns Praying for sanity in a world of chaos Set me on fire Tear my heart in bits and pieces Separate arteries from my skin Shred my thoughts For I sought The light kindled from the stars There's a God I search no more I've stop counting strawls He rips my flaws His love is Lawlessly graceful In Him I found my peace There is a GOD So I search no MORE. Copyright Afrikan sonnet 8th may 2011 |
Re: LAWLESSLY GRACEFULL-- What Do U Think About It by Ishilove: 11:04pm On May 21, 2012 |
Beautiful... 1 Like |
Re: LAWLESSLY GRACEFULL-- What Do U Think About It by angayejuni: 11:16am On May 22, 2012 |
Ishilove: Beautiful...thanks. @ ishilove r u a poet ? |
Re: LAWLESSLY GRACEFULL-- What Do U Think About It by Whiteguru: 6:54pm On May 22, 2012 |
well . good try. but lets see, is this just one poem, or different poams put together. A poem must strife to convey the feelings in the mind of the author by each verse and also in its entirety. Being a good poet is not all about being able to lump rhymmes together and make them sound vaguely strange. A poetry must carry a message and a good poet is one whose got a message and is able to pass it accross as succint as possible. Good try like i said. but work on the message. |
Re: LAWLESSLY GRACEFULL-- What Do U Think About It by angayejuni: 11:42pm On May 22, 2012 |
Whiteguru: well . good try. but lets see, is this just one poem, or different poams put together. A poem must strife to convey the feelings in the mind of the author by each verse and also in its entirety. Being a good poet is not all about being able to lump rhymmes together and make them sound vaguely strange. A poetry must carry a message and a good poet is one whose got a message and is able to pass it accross as succint as possible. Good try like i said. but work on the message.whiteguru first of all are u a poet ? If u where u wud be able to pick elements and poetic devices from phrases , this isn't conventional everyday write U have to reread and pick the tread from the poem. U talk about lumps of ryhmes hw many lines actually rhyme together, hw long have u been writin poetry ? Anyways thanks |
Re: LAWLESSLY GRACEFULL-- What Do U Think About It by Ishilove: 5:57pm On May 30, 2012 |
angayejuni: thanks. @ ishilove r u a poet ?sort of. I'm more comfortable with prose,but a lot of the time my prose reads like poetry. Some of my creations are in that no man's land between poetry and prose |
Re: LAWLESSLY GRACEFULL-- What Do U Think About It by angayejuni: 4:15pm On Jun 03, 2012 |
Ishilove:are you on facebook or BBM? whats ur email address.. wud love to see am writing two right now. |
Re: LAWLESSLY GRACEFULL-- What Do U Think About It by Felixalex(m): 1:49pm On Jun 04, 2012 |
NICE WORK... KEEP IT UP., JOIN WRITING CLUBS, GROUPS TO MAKE URSELF KNOWN, GET MORE EXPOSURE.. JOIN AS WELL ON http://www.artsng.com |
Re: LAWLESSLY GRACEFULL-- What Do U Think About It by angayejuni: 10:35am On Jun 05, 2012 |
Felixalex: NICE WORK... KEEP IT UP., JOIN WRITING CLUBS, GROUPS TO MAKE URSELF KNOWN, GET MORE EXPOSURE.. JOIN AS WELL ON http://www.artsng.comAm in more than 20 poetry groups mostly non nigerian. In such groups professors and Doctorate degree holders of literature litter the group they share teach and exchange ideas . They appreciate complex poetic ideas cuZ they have high volumes of exposure. Most nigerian poetry groups are good but the writers are not vast in literary forms. Any ways thanks for reading. I have been writing for only 9 yrs straight |
Re: LAWLESSLY GRACEFULL-- What Do U Think About It by Ishilove: 7:18pm On Jun 06, 2012 |
angayejuni:I'm on both. You can PM me let me give you my fb addy 1 Like |
Re: LAWLESSLY GRACEFULL-- What Do U Think About It by angayejuni: 3:34am On Jun 24, 2012 |
Ishilove: Nice to knw My email address is angayejunior@yahoo.com And ma pin is 2447DC43 |
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