Nairaland Forum

Hello, this is actually my very first post here, but I hope it won't be the last, I have a few p
oems that I want critqued,and then, does anyone know what it costs to publish poetry in Nigeria
Check this out and tell me what you think

You are my world, you are my life
My future hope, you are my promise of a better tomorrow
I look at you and thank the heavens
For bringing you my way
My life before you was void, empty of meaning
Now I have something to live for
Never have I felt a love so strong
It brings tears to my eyes
Never have I beheld such an angelic face
Sometimes I still believe I'm in a dream
A dream from which I never want to wake
This love I have in my heart, I give it all to you,
Take it, and make it a part of you, forever

Is this any good Please, I need answers