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My Daughter by agatonaa(f): 12:37am On Apr 05, 2006
My daughter, whom I so loved
You can spread your wings & fly like a dove
Shake the mud & dirt with a shrugged
Without anger nor a grudge.

You can fly as high as you can
For you are a very strong woman
Blow them like a fan
To stay away to do any more harm.

My daughter, I will be in your side
Together we will swim the tide
If you're in the dark, I will hug you so tight
To give you comfort throughout the night.

Have courage for you're surrounded by lights
It is so bright it will restore your sight
To make sure your path is right
I can assure you, everything will be alright.
Re: My Daughter by Zahymaka(m): 2:40am On Apr 05, 2006
Go on. (Loud applause)
Re: My Daughter by uzygirl(f): 1:21pm On Apr 05, 2006
wow, that was nice.
but is that a father or a mother's point of view?
Re: My Daughter by agatonaa(f): 6:45pm On Apr 05, 2006
@Zahymaka
Thanks.

@uzygirl
It can really be both but in this case, it is from a mother to her daughter.
Re: My Daughter by ogamike: 6:19pm On Apr 06, 2006
that is so touchingĀ  cry You go niom niomĀ  I really like it!
Re: My Daughter by ogamike: 6:20pm On Apr 06, 2006
this poem is so cool
Re: My Daughter by Nobody: 9:48pm On Apr 06, 2006
This is the best poem I have ever read.

I love it
Re: My Daughter by agatonaa(f): 11:03pm On Apr 09, 2006
@ baby Queen

Glad you like it. wink
Re: My Daughter by uzygirl(f): 4:06pm On Apr 10, 2006
Thanks. the poem is really insightful.
Thinking about it now, how often do we really tell that special woman in our lives(our mothers of course) thank you.
Re: My Daughter by agatonaa(f): 6:43pm On Apr 10, 2006
@uzygirl

wink winkyeap.
Re: My Daughter by Z4M4eva(f): 7:25am On Apr 13, 2006
Aww. What a Sweet Poem. smiley
Re: My Daughter by agatonaa(f): 7:25am On Apr 15, 2006
@Z4M4eva

Thanks. wink
Re: My Daughter by Fimmy(m): 10:34pm On May 08, 2006
cool
i love my daughter also
she matters alot to me
Re: My Daughter by Oracle(m): 2:44pm On Jul 17, 2006
This sounds like a true life story
Re: My Daughter by SMC(f): 4:31pm On May 13, 2007
I LIKE!!! smiley [However, there are some grammatical errors/typos in the poem but still, I quite like it].

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