hayqinsbFX:
you have to defer you admission bro...
Are you a bro or a miss?
ill suggest you request for gcms notes before reapplying sef...

bo
englighten me on what is a gcms notes

thesoj:
I decided to not accept PMs anymore actually. But if you are very patient and can wait at least three weeks for me to patiently review the SOP, then send me a PM. It takes a lot of time to review and make recommendations to an SOP (unless it is relatively good already), and I am time-constrained. Also, if the SOP has simple grammatical errors and is especially bad or blatantly plagiarized I may not respond, no offense intended.

would love to,i just have extra one month to reapply again,since i applied for may session,so is it still possible?

hayqinsbFX:
@estherdim and @broxymall i believed is controlled by one person.

I do not know why @broxymall had to disguise with another moniker

it thesame person bro
broxymall moniker was banned

thesoj:
@estherdim, please take down your SOP asap. Someone else will copy it and use it for his/her app before you even use it. Plagiarism is very rampant on Nairaland. You don't want the VO to refuse your application because he/she thinks you plagiarized someone else's whereas it was someone else that plagiarized yours. I have seen many plagiarized SOPs emailed to me to help review.

Edited: I am now unsure if the SOP you posted is yours or not (it looks familiar). If it isn't yours, then write your own from scratch . This process may take time (days to weeks), but it is well worth it. Think deeply about why you want to go to Canada (apart from the fact that you want to run away from Naija lol), what your Naija ambitions are (i.e. what are the sort of Naija problems/opportunities that you have identified and want to solve/harness), why & how studying your course in Canada would help accelerate your ability to achieve those Naija ambitions. Give examples of what specific skills from the course would develop you enough to be able to effectively pursue and implement your ambitions. Try as much as possible to show the VO that you are a serious person. Link what you have done in the past with those ambitions and future goals. Be credible and convincing, tying together parts of your life/educational trajectory (and application) to make a coherent whole. Be concise. Best wishes.

thanks alot brother,i have done that.
can you send me your mail so i can forward my sop for review?
i would appreciate it

ikem01:

Oh yeah, just change the masters prog to undergrad,
Make sure u explain vividly y u want to study in Canada, even if the course is offered in Nigeria, state an advantage studying it over there will add to ur portfolio.. Dont start saying it will improve ur employment status wen u return. Maybe something like the curriculum is different, the course in CAD has added this and that which is not part of the curriculum here in naija.
OK ermm,
1. I feel like it's an SOP FOR ADMISSION, Nonetheless, elaborate on the point I stated, also use the SOP as a way to let the VO KNOW OF UR HOME Ties here in Nigeria.
2. Don't over degrade ur country I think it sounds desperate.
Hope this helps.
I stand to be corrected

thanks alot bro,can you send me your mail so i can send to you once i am done reconstructing it?
by the way can you elaborate more on this home ties of a thing?

ikem01:
Hello @estherdim I think u are amplifying some things here.
Anyways my little advice will be on the way u started ur letter
I think it should start like this
I am pleased to apply for study permit of Canada and to submit my application for your consideration.
I am, your name, a bachelor' of science in________, from________. (State ur school). I have been offered admission to undergo a two years Master of Engineering program at the University of Toronto, canada. I am to begin studies on the_______. My student ID number is_________. University of Toronto has a designated learning institution number_________.
2. Other things can fall into place after this.
Just my 2 naira, work on ur introduction, this could b helpful.
*smiles*

thanks alot bro,i want to apply as an undergraduate though
moreso where can i fit in from the point you raised to my sop,since i have to make it precise and simple

Dbnagato:

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/1gevqbkct9l0ciw/AAD400Wcj0_iyWelUk6AZe2ma?dl=0

Follow d link

this was the sop i use though, will be glad if someone can reconstruct it for me..



@hayqinsbFX, thesoj, justwise ,attention needed here pls

pls i need someone to help me with a consteuctive sop to be able to convince the vo, i pray i don't get denied this time around again

hayqinsbFX:
What is happening to online route....

Paper route February 25th has been reply from CIC

No February online route has heard anythin yet...

Na only online route get the 10weeks

since there is till time for may session, intend to just reapply again to rectify the errors of my denial,
i need a constructive sop,can anyone help me out pls,as for the financial apsect,is it kinda possible to personally transfer 2 million to my pman account to be raised?

what other requirement do i need to be able to convince the vo?

yetunde84:
Someone ask that I should list all documents;

You will know truly that I serve a God that never fails.

All cic documents
Nysc certificate
Call up letter
B.Tech certificate
Waec certificate
Sop
Employment letter
Letter of introduction from Boss
Pay slip 4 months
Statement of account (2.3 mil naira)
Sworn affidavit from sponsor
Sponsor's employment letter
Sponsor's statement of account (2.1 mil naira)
Letter of introduction from sponsor's company
My own Land document
Sponsorship letter

That's all

God bless and favour you all

bro am happy for you, i intend giving up after refusal last week,
applied to simon fraser university,
the same reason you were denied was the same with me,
i want to apply again'defer to sept..,it was my agent that did it all the first time,so i intend taking it upon my self now,as an undergraduate though,pls can send me your mail or number pls so you can help me out,i would like to take a view on your sop,so i rectify mine in a way yurs look like,

DanIndia:
No, not really. You do NOT need to learn the language before you can be granted but you do need to know the language to cope in Germany. You do not need to be thoroughly fluent, you just need enough to get you by.

that what am still saying bro,as it one of their requirement,6month to study the lang here and first year degree,

Bandeco:

Guy enta Germany. Easier admission. Easier to obtain visa. Free tuition. Engineering hub of the world. More technologically advance than Canada and more engineering savvy than Canada. Great engineering schools. More robust economy than Canada. Biggest economy in the Europe . You can also transition to work permit after studies. Better wages than Canada etc

But considering their language and durationof processing visa inko?
I heard i will have to learn their language before i can be granted

ykmotors:
Pictures of A very clean 2007 RX350, Just bought this yesterday and it will be delivered today.

pls how much can i get this lexus to land here in lagos?
do you also have the toyota muscle camry 2009 model?

princey83:

I know how you feel. Canada visa has always been like that right from when I completed secondary school about 17 years ago. It has never been easy. During the 90's. they sometimes don't even bother to open your pack before denying an application. You said this is the 4th denial. Why don't you try a different country? in my own case, I eventually studied at a different EU country, I now used my MSc to apply for their federal skilled workers program as it was called back then, and was successful. If God says you would eventually be in Canada, you would still get there one way or the other even if it's not by the popular way. Do not narrow your studying abroad option to Canada. You could try other countries too. It is well.

thank you sir,
already planing to port to another country,still waiting for a more convenient country to fit in for my course,that won't pay much compared to canada,will appreciate if you know of any,mechanical eng is my preferred course though.

wip7:


The next entry for EMU is Sept 2016. The application period will be opened in few weeks.

kindly let me know when is due for application

elephantswimmin:
@estherdim & Dbnagato Please share a list of all the docs submitted. Estherdim pls stay away from that Canada Embassy for now You maybe surprised that you'll try another country and be granted a study visa in an instant. Like i said before these Canada people are not consistent with their decisions., no one can really predict what they want. Its like a lottery!!!!!!!!! Before some soj dude/female begin quote plenty grammer on the previous page describing his siblings with vulgar words because i aired my opinion based on facts and testimonials that i have heard ppl say.
Wish you all the best and keep your study dream alive. Maybe God wants you in Aussie or America. I'm studying in Baltimore though... inbox me if u need help with my school.

i never intended,it just so annoying staying home for 2 years doing nothing,am self employed, my pman just insist i travel there ,i knowing the fact that is just like a gambling, really so tired

hayqinsbFX:
lool...no wonder...

thisnis broxymall
i was rejected as usual
and this will be the fourth time and last time to re apply again,
so many denial this year...

porting to another country

goodday mr wip7
pls i wish to apply at EMU.
is there any session for june?

i have all my necessary documents,wish to apply as an undergraduate, am less than 25yrs,
going for mechanical eng

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