Title : Fighting My Inner Demons

Description: You have an addiction to a particular habit which is gradually enslaving you. But now you're ready to take the bull by the horns. You would do anything, everything, to get rid of it and regain your freedom

Criteria

Creativity-- 2 points

Flow- - 1 point

Imagery- - 2 points

Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points

Consistency/Topic-- 4 points

Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points

Vocabulary-- 2 points

Emotion

Rules (must be strictly adhered to)

- 10 Lines...

- Deadline is Wednesday Nov 26th 4pm

- Verses should be posted by both contestants on
or not later than deadline date.

- No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or
recycling.

- No complaining about votes.

- No dissing of opponent

- No unnecessary comments

I am sorry to ask, Krone. Where is the sign up thread?

Edit. Sorry. I just saw it now. You may hide this comment now.

Checks

CHECK

Smh, I didnt even knw today is deadline.

I was born . wit strong bones buh frm a poor home ...got me askin wah am i livin for ?

wit d least hope of been dOope ..i sniff coke like i gaht d brewery store

am traped in..couldn 't fight it .my kush was all m always tinking of

cos i go hard on these drugs like ma stiff c0ck ...and without it am dead buh alive ...a living corpse!

was xo high..buh hav.. calmed down cos am strong now .my mind aint gona race no more ..wen i try and stop dos running thoughts

If it means holding ma guns and macs ..to launch attack..or stop my heart ..den let it b.. am done wit dis smoking curse !

Dey say it affects d lungs..xo it better b gone..cos wen i come drunk wit beers d spirit wil flee..cant place a star wit medical stuffs

am chasing my dreams ..of becoming a team .one man isshh.so why get addicted to sumtin foolish as this .dah could cos my body to engage in steady riot !

So like it changed position..its setting me free as am claimin a win....no physical involvement of any xtenal force !

Sorry for the delay, I forgot today ws deadline... Had to quickly pen something
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And so, it never seemed like hell, terrorized by the evils/... I was in the Garden of eden/.... set to be dying a freeman/....buh it was a lie, I was dreaming/....
.... God of lies, exorcising my demons....
Can I live can I die without reason?/

... and then the battle is just awesome/..... when I throw arrows/.... But the death of bad traits being uncommon/.... makes you go whacko/.... truth is; they all awful/.... Cuz even when the schmucks cautioned/
..... thy still follow you more often/..... than your own shadows!!!/

so now I brought coffins/.... for these old cargos/.... Cuz I've got a plan.....but lets see what my data has/... I'm set to reach greater heights/.... these demons are faded clans/.... moment my laser blasts/.... My weapons of warfare are not canal....... Point of correction; they are razor sharp/
...... for I'm armed to the tooth.... one byte from me, they finish quickly..... thats what my data planned/

.... at a point, my chances of winning was decreasing truly/.... tried wrestling my demons buh my spirit couldn't/.... almost breached the limit/... it was really useless/...
.... as I helplessy fell faster than a speeding bullet!!!/

Buh then I picked up again on a faster pace/.... this time, a sniper brave/... I ain even taking shots..... I thrust the knife half way/.... till the bad man slayed/... Na'am proud to say/
..... here comes the end of the bloody battle..... with my past on the ground and the white flag raised!!!!/

Open for votes

Mikuz
Kr0ne
Elymaxiimus
Lonat11kk
Reyginus
Guykhena
Ibime
Emaprince

Smh.

It won't be easy to always be around and vote..


Criteria

Creativity-- 2 points -limerick

Flow- - 1 point-devil maycry

Imagery- - 2 points-limerick

Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points -limerick

Consistency/Topic-- 4 points -devilmaycry...here,devilmacry went with the instruction and made clear what his vice was(alcohol and weed)..but limerick was busy literally fighting demons.but it doesn't really mean that you must be possessed..@limerick..what is that bad habit that is eating you up?..this is what you are expected to write on.

Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points-limerick

Vocabulary-- 2 points -limerick

MVGT-LIMERICK!!!

Creativity-- 2 points - Nil

Flow- - 1 point - Devilmaycry

Imagery- - 2 points - Nil

Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points -Limerick

Consistency/Topic-- 4 points - Devilmaycry

Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points - Limerick

Vocabulary-- 2 points - Limerick

Emotion - Nil

My Vote- - - Limerick
Devilmaycry was more consistent, though. Still hang on, dude

Creativity-- 2 points = TIE

Flow- - 1 point = limerick

Imagery- - 2 points = devilmaycry

Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points = limerick

Consistency/Topic-- 4 points = devilmaycry

Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points = limerick

Vocabulary-- 2 points = limerick

emotion -- 1 point = devilmaycry

7 - 7...
Based on the fact that dmc was more on point
MVGT = devilmaycry!

Creativity-- 2 points - Limerick

Flow- - 1 point - Devilmaycry

Imagery- - 2 points - Limerick

Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points -Limerick

Consistency/Topic-- 4 points - Devilmaycry

Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points - Devilmaycry

Vocabulary-- 2 points - Limerick

8-7

MVGT - - Limerick
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Closed!

Limerick wins and qualifies
Devilmaycry, hold on. Somebody might slip off, and u should replace him